Muse-ical
 

Pick you up, lay you down;
Never leave my mind so I stay around.
I'd say I found what I've been looking for
Since your the only girl I'll be cooking for.
You're beautiful and you stole my heart,
I've never felt like this...where do I start?

Simplistic ideas and heartfelt emotions,
The most devout devotion, more empowering than the oceans.
Awe inspiring; you have what people desire to see,
Pure innocence and joy when you smile at me.
I don't require a beat to speak of the fires you've peaked,
I admire you, see?
Cuz I thought the walls around my heart could never be breached!
You've given me strength I've never been witnessed to have,
Until you came into my life...and made me a dad.
Aaliyah Cassandra, my beautiful girl,
Thank you for changing my views of the world.
There's not a poem I could write or a scheme I could use,
That could describe how much I love you,
You inspire me; my Muse.

how did u get published.

You weren't my critic

one word

generic

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I think ya'll looking for something that I ain't put in this. Simplicity is all I put in this its for a baby

i aint looking for nothing nigga, & i can appreciate simplicity

but by your own admission if that "all" you put in this...the fuck you was expecting?

its like a nigga who wasnt having a baby could've wrote this shit...i give a fuck if you get what im sayin truly...but dont kid yourself thinking im looking for something that aint there...i express wdeva vibe i get off your piece...& i felt generic summed it up enough. i guess not.

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