Netcees - Reserve Battle: Swerve vs IAmRhetoric - SWERVE WINS BY NS, OPEN FOR FEED

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Reserve Battle: Swerve vs IAmRhetoric - SWERVE WINS BY NS, OPEN FOR FEED

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Monday , August 17th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread

First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Swerve @IAmRhetoric

\IAmRhetoric aka Tyler Fager aka RB faggot

In the NBL you had one win, 2 no-shows and 3 losses this year,
So the only thing rhetoric’ll question is if he actually deserves to be here.
You only got here by no show! So you think you testing me queer?
It’s no surprise you dodged Wit, your verses been doing that your whole texting career.
It’s a downward spiral after this beating, it’s the definitive blemish,
You’ll see Retina slump that would make the lazy eye I leave him with jealous.
Muffy ran back to RB, and now your timeline’s getting shorter,
This is the first time you’re separated from Muff by boards instead of a restraining order.
You can’t hang with us vets, you may as well start taking classes,
Only way you’d see a Nika-Rhet comparison is choosing between quit-smoking patches.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Swerve (Post 521276)

\IAmRhetoric aka Tyler Fager aka RB faggot

In the NBL you had one win, 2 no-shows and 3 losses this year,
So the only thing rhetoric’ll question is if he actually deserves to be here.
nice
You only got here by no show! So you think you testing me queer?
It’s no surprise you dodged Wit, your verses been doing that your whole texting career.
a little worded but decent bar
It’s a downward spiral after this beating, it’s the definitive blemish,
You’ll see Retina slump that would make the lazy eye I leave him with jealous.
could have set up lazy better, that takes a little away from the punch but still not bad
Muffy ran back to RB, and now your timeline’s getting shorter,
This is the first time you’re separated from Muff by boards instead of a restraining order.
not feeling this
You can’t hang with us vets, you may as well start taking classes,
Only way you’d see a Nika-Rhet comparison is choosing between quit-smoking patches.
this is ok

nice bars. respect.

It’s a downward spiral after this beating, it’s the definitive blemish,
You’ll see Retina slump that would make the lazy eye I leave him with jealous.
You can’t hang with us vets, you may as well start taking classes,
Only way you’d see a Nika-Rhet comparison is choosing between quit-smoking patches.

best lines of ya verse...no real misses but some played or blah shit. Some of ur rhymes were retarded too. Muff line was aite n the opener was cool. The wit line is super played tho.