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Victor. 08-04-2015 02:51 PM

The Bad Guys vs Hush's Easter {The Bad Guys}
 
2 on 2 Tournament


Each team is responsible for 16 lines.
The verse MUST be posted by ONLY ONE team mate.
Sync up via PM and drop ONLY your finalized verse in this thread.
Normal rules apply, no flipping, biting, recycling, swaying/discussing votes or your opponents verses.
Basically be a faggot and ima DQ you and give you 10 Losses off rip.



DUE DATE IS THIS SUNDAY AUGUST 10 2015




there will be NO extra days, or lee way on due dates SO DONT ASK ME.




The Bad Guys - @Ace & @Allen Knight
Hush's Easter - @Destroyer & @IAmRhetoric

Destroyer 08-09-2015 04:11 PM

vets fall...

i live life like blackjack.. but i'm gonna break u if u don't stop
knight never seen a 10, but we know Al' in splittin... especially if ace is on top!
marks, just stop the act before i rush in w/ munition
the hammer known to pull the bitch out of boy worse than Hush did to Christian
bad guys? fitting name for the least likely to ride,
cuz the end of ak and his bitch? flaming car w/ bullet holes like BONNIE AND CLYDE
AK? gun name for the dude who mean?
my AK a sweeper, the only time you pick up a sweeper is to keep ur room clean
Allen ain't got shit but sport punches, but the faggot still be tryin
he talk big game more than America did when that dude killed Cecil the lion
I'm a king on the board, I run through squares and laugh as this fucker yells
from the view above where I sit, all I see when Knight makes a move is another L
used to assume he liked pussy, but now this fag has me guessin
cuz knight got Ace in the hole, and I don't mean the idiomatic expression
Allen boring as fuuuuck. I peep his concepts, I seen half of them before...
can't wait to see 'Resin 8,' it's just too bad none of his punches do that with these cats anymore

Allen Knight 08-10-2015 01:45 AM

Ayiooo..

we endin ya geriatric run.. des the glock'll make u stop ya ways..
the bullets will pollute ya system n fill this old man river with toxic waste.
yah'll the gayest crew in this shit, faggots not hood at all..
Eastbound & Down to travel anywhere if it comes to some wood an balls.
..when his gf leaves'em des'll be in need of some answers..
she thought u ball hard.. until she found out it was only bc of testicular cancer.
Bad Guys totin blades, faggots those shits rock yah'll.
slide the Razor Edge across ur stomachs till u curl in the front like Scott Hall..
stand down u faggot ass niggas.. the team is a dead shot..
the .45's like a protractor.. wen the lever go up it aint stoppin until u get a lead dot.
beat & torture ya w/ everything in the room, for the hell of it.
act like ya Willis tough but yah'll break by the time i beat ya w/ the Fifth Element..
Rhetoric is a loser, a nobody.. this dumbass aint read..
he's such an Afterthought his lines can reach out and summon the dead.
both u wifed up the sluttiest hoes, u didnt care to choose.
cuz Eastbay's will fuck anyone for a Nike shirt & a cheap pair of shoes..

Junto 08-11-2015 06:07 AM

marks, just stop the act before i rush in w/ munition
the hammer known to pull the bitch out of boy worse than Hush did to Christian
a little stretch on the concept to me... kinda tough though
bad guys? fitting name for the least likely to ride,
cuz the end of ak and his bitch? flaming car w/ bullet holes like BONNIE AND CLYDE
cool reference but the punch isn't real complex
Allen ain't got shit but sport punches, but the faggot still be tryin
he talk big game more than America did when that dude killed Cecil the lion

good one here
I'm a king on the board, I run through squares and laugh as this fucker yells
from the view above where I sit, all I see when Knight makes a move is another L

this works so well I'd think it was done before... don't remember seein it though. nice
used to assume he liked pussy, but now this fag has me guessin
cuz knight got Ace in the hole, and I don't mean the idiomatic expression
I like the concept... lost a little impact on wording but solid

vs.

we endin ya geriatric run.. des the glock'll make u stop ya ways..
the bullets will pollute ya system n fill this old man river with toxic waste.

hard
yah'll the gayest crew in this shit, faggots not hood at all..
Eastbound & Down to travel anywhere if it comes to some wood an balls.
haha... 'East' play a little weird but the reference & punch is nice
Bad Guys totin blades, faggots those shits rock yah'll.
slide the Razor Edge across ur stomachs till u curl in the front like Scott Hall..

this is dope
stand down u faggot ass niggas.. the team is a dead shot..
the .45's like a protractor.. wen the lever go up it aint stoppin until u get a lead dot.

heat
beat & torture ya w/ everything in the room, for the hell of it.
act like ya Willis tough but yah'll break by the time i beat ya w/ the Fifth Element..

damn...
both u wifed up the sluttiest hoes, u didnt care to choose.
cuz Eastbay's will fuck anyone for a Nike shirt & a cheap pair of shoes..
same as Eastbound... well formed but the east np make it a little off kilter to me

This was money...
Hush's Easter came wit a good amount of quality bars... big game & knight L was haymakers
missed on resonate which I seen & sweeper was too simple...
wording in the beginning needed to be cleaned up a little too but overall solid...
Bad Guys brought some fire though
Old man river mighta been said before but this twist was tough.
Curl in the front like Scott Hall was wild, then protractor and fifth element right after sealed it to me.
Des & Rhet did their thing but this was one of the better 16s I seen recently

V/ Bad Guys

Saint 08-11-2015 11:39 AM

Cool battle - but I think Bad Guys went in here. Pretty cool visceral style mixed with creative flips. Hard ball.. Razors edge.. lead dot, fifth element... fire. others were solid like toxic waste.

looked like Des team was a little rushed - big game, L Knight were cool. Ace in the hole was funny.. But seemed some stuff was played or obv/not well developed... Resin 8 was on some 2005 ish, lol. seemed like rhetoric was absent in thus n des took the brunt of the battle load.

Vote bad guys

Sharp 08-11-2015 09:17 PM

i live life like blackjack.. but i'm gonna break u if u don't stop
knight never seen a 10, but we know Al' in splittin... especially if ace is on top!
not really feeling it
marks, just stop the act before i rush in w/ munition
the hammer known to pull the bitch out of boy worse than Hush did to Christian
ok
bad guys? fitting name for the least likely to ride,
cuz the end of ak and his bitch? flaming car w/ bullet holes like BONNIE AND CLYDE
cool idea but coulda been a harder execution
AK? gun name for the dude who mean?
my AK a sweeper, the only time you pick up a sweeper is to keep ur room clean
ok but light
Allen ain't got shit but sport punches, but the faggot still be tryin
he talk big game more than America did when that dude killed Cecil the lion
cool
I'm a king on the board, I run through squares and laugh as this fucker yells
from the view above where I sit, all I see when Knight makes a move is another L
nice though I know I've seen something like this before
used to assume he liked pussy, but now this fag has me guessin
cuz knight got Ace in the hole, and I don't mean the idiomatic expression
damn this coulda been hotter
Allen boring as fuuuuck. I peep his concepts, I seen half of them before...
can't wait to see 'Resin 8,' it's just too bad none of his punches do that with these cats anymore
tbh I'm just not a fan of this kind of delivery. lil choppy but cool idea



we endin ya geriatric run.. des the glock'll make u stop ya ways..
the bullets will pollute ya system n fill this old man river with toxic waste.
ok
yah'll the gayest crew in this shit, faggots not hood at all..
Eastbound & Down to travel anywhere if it comes to some wood an balls.
nice
..when his gf leaves'em des'll be in need of some answers..
she thought u ball hard.. until she found out it was only bc of testicular cancer.
kinda funny
Bad Guys totin blades, faggots those shits rock yah'll.
slide the Razor Edge across ur stomachs till u curl in the front like Scott Hall..
cool
stand down u faggot ass niggas.. the team is a dead shot..
the .45's like a protractor.. wen the lever go up it aint stoppin until u get a lead dot.
alright
beat & torture ya w/ everything in the room, for the hell of it.
act like ya Willis tough but yah'll break by the time i beat ya w/ the Fifth Element..
cool
Rhetoric is a loser, a nobody.. this dumbass aint read..
he's such an Afterthought his lines can reach out and summon the dead.
not feeling it
both u wifed up the sluttiest hoes, u didnt care to choose.
cuz Eastbay's will fuck anyone for a Nike shirt & a cheap pair of shoes..
dope


Enjoyed this. Both pretty consistent but I felt overall Ace/AK had harder hits.
Props guys

v/bad guys

Amen. 08-12-2015 10:56 AM

i live life like blackjack.. but i'm gonna break u if u don't stop
knight never seen a 10, but we know Al' in splittin... especially if ace is on top!
- this was dece
marks, just stop the act before i rush in w/ munition
the hammer known to pull the bitch out of boy worse than Hush did to Christian
- never heard ammo called munition but w/e. this was mild
bad guys? fitting name for the least likely to ride,
cuz the end of ak and his bitch? flaming car w/ bullet holes like BONNIE AND CLYDE
- mild
AK? gun name for the dude who mean?
my AK a sweeper, the only time you pick up a sweeper is to keep ur room clean
- this was corny to me
Allen ain't got shit but sport punches, but the faggot still be tryin
he talk big game more than America did when that dude killed Cecil the lion
- this was tough
I'm a king on the board, I run through squares and laugh as this fucker yells
from the view above where I sit, all I see when Knight makes a move is another L
- weak
used to assume he liked pussy, but now this fag has me guessin
cuz knight got Ace in the hole, and I don't mean the idiomatic expression
- good
Allen boring as fuuuuck. I peep his concepts, I seen half of them before...
can't wait to see 'Resin 8,' it's just too bad none of his punches do that with these cats anymore
- I'm sure this is played, but I don't recall seeing it at the moment so I like it

vs

we endin ya geriatric run.. des the glock'll make u stop ya ways..
the bullets will pollute ya system n fill this old man river with toxic waste.
- dece
yah'll the gayest crew in this shit, faggots not hood at all..
Eastbound & Down to travel anywhere if it comes to some wood an balls.
- wack
..when his gf leaves'em des'll be in need of some answers..
she thought u ball hard.. until she found out it was only bc of testicular cancer.
- tough
Bad Guys totin blades, faggots those shits rock yah'll.
slide the Razor Edge across ur stomachs till u curl in the front like Scott Hall..
- ok
stand down u faggot ass niggas.. the team is a dead shot..
the .45's like a protractor.. wen the lever go up it aint stoppin until u get a lead dot.
- ok
beat & torture ya w/ everything in the room, for the hell of it.
act like ya Willis tough but yah'll break by the time i beat ya w/ the Fifth Element..
- ok
Rhetoric is a loser, a nobody.. this dumbass aint read..
he's such an Afterthought his lines can reach out and summon the dead.
- mild
both u wifed up the sluttiest hoes, u didnt care to choose.
cuz Eastbay's will fuck anyone for a Nike shirt & a cheap pair of shoes..
- lol dece

1st team focused on allen wayyyyyy to much which IMO got redundant and corny. took away from their verse. they had some cool concepts but the executions killed them

bad guys got this - consistent and heavier punches

Alvin Karpis 08-12-2015 08:11 PM

Hush's Easter - A lot of nice concepts w/ poor wording. Ace in the hole a lot of potential, overall not bad

The Bad Guys - Played off the East part of their name, and they hit. Overall a lot more consistency with this verse which got the W

V/ The Bad guys

fraze 08-13-2015 02:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer (Post 517820)
i live life like blackjack.. but i'm gonna break u if u don't stop
knight never seen a 10, but we know Al' in splittin... especially if ace is on top!
this is a little overworded to me. not bad associations tho
marks, just stop the act before i rush in w/ munition
the hammer known to pull the bitch out of boy worse than Hush did to Christian
must have missed this
bad guys? fitting name for the least likely to ride,
cuz the end of ak and his bitch? flaming car w/ bullet holes like BONNIE AND CLYDE
decent concept but execution was statementish
AK? gun name for the dude who mean?
my AK a sweeper, the only time you pick up a sweeper is to keep ur room clean
too obvious
Allen ain't got shit but sport punches, but the faggot still be tryin
he talk big game more than America did when that dude killed Cecil the lion
could have done more with this concept
I'm a king on the board, I run through squares and laugh as this fucker yells
from the view above where I sit, all I see when Knight makes a move is another L
this is ok. the punch is nice but the leadup is boring
used to assume he liked pussy, but now this fag has me guessin
cuz knight got Ace in the hole, and I don't mean the idiomatic expression
nah bro
Allen boring as fuuuuck. I peep his concepts, I seen half of them before...
can't wait to see 'Resin 8,' it's just too bad none of his punches do that with these cats anymore
this is ok

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight (Post 517937)
we endin ya geriatric run.. des the glock'll make u stop ya ways..
the bullets will pollute ya system n fill this old man river with toxic waste.
cool
yah'll the gayest crew in this shit, faggots not hood at all..
Eastbound & Down to travel anywhere if it comes to some wood an balls.
didn't like this
..when his gf leaves'em des'll be in need of some answers..
she thought u ball hard.. until she found out it was only bc of testicular cancer.
fucked up. nice flip
Bad Guys totin blades, faggots those shits rock yah'll.
slide the Razor Edge across ur stomachs till u curl in the front like Scott Hall..
not sure about this one
stand down u faggot ass niggas.. the team is a dead shot..
the .45's like a protractor.. wen the lever go up it aint stoppin until u get a lead dot.
ok. concept could have been worded diff
beat & torture ya w/ everything in the room, for the hell of it.
act like ya Willis tough but yah'll break by the time i beat ya w/ the Fifth Element..
i want to like this but it isn't quite there
Rhetoric is a loser, a nobody.. this dumbass aint read..
he's such an Afterthought his lines can reach out and summon the dead.
this concept is forced to me
both u wifed up the sluttiest hoes, u didnt care to choose.
cuz Eastbay's will fuck anyone for a Nike shirt & a cheap pair of shoes..
not bad

Cool battle. Hush's Easter had a lighter verse to me, I liked the chess bar the most but nothing else stood out much. The verse wasn't bad just lacking a little bit on creativity. The Bad Guys had a hot start with toxic waste and cancer. Eastbay was also cool. Had a few misses / light bars but overall a nice verse.

The Bad Guys

Strikta 08-13-2015 11:20 AM

i live life like blackjack.. but i'm gonna break u if u don't stop
knight never seen a 10, but we know Al' in splittin... especially if ace is on top!
This was nice
marks, just stop the act before i rush in w/ munition
the hammer known to pull the bitch out of boy worse than Hush did to Christian
Aiight
bad guys? fitting name for the least likely to ride,
cuz the end of ak and his bitch? flaming car w/ bullet holes like BONNIE AND CLYDE
Wasn't feeling
AK? gun name for the dude who mean?
my AK a sweeper, the only time you pick up a sweeper is to keep ur room clean
Nah man. Not hard hitting.
Allen ain't got shit but sport punches, but the faggot still be tryin
he talk big game more than America did when that dude killed Cecil the lion
Lol, I liked this
I'm a king on the board, I run through squares and laugh as this fucker yells
from the view above where I sit, all I see when Knight makes a move is another L
This was a dope concept. Nice.
used to assume he liked pussy, but now this fag has me guessin
cuz knight got Ace in the hole, and I don't mean the idiomatic expression
Ok
Allen boring as fuuuuck. I peep his concepts, I seen half of them before...
can't wait to see 'Resin 8,' it's just too bad none of his punches do that with these cats anymore
Ok closer

Vs.

we endin ya geriatric run.. des the glock'll make u stop ya ways..
the bullets will pollute ya system n fill this old man river with toxic waste.
Ok
yah'll the gayest crew in this shit, faggots not hood at all..
Eastbound & Down to travel anywhere if it comes to some wood an balls.
Not feeling this.
..when his gf leaves'em des'll be in need of some answers..
she thought u ball hard.. until she found out it was only bc of testicular cancer.
This was niice. Lol
Bad Guys totin blades, faggots those shits rock yah'll.
slide the Razor Edge across ur stomachs till u curl in the front like Scott Hall..
Nice
stand down u faggot ass niggas.. the team is a dead shot..
the .45's like a protractor.. wen the lever go up it aint stoppin until u get a lead dot.
OK
beat & torture ya w/ everything in the room, for the hell of it.
act like ya Willis tough but yah'll break by the time i beat ya w/ the Fifth Element..
Nice
Rhetoric is a loser, a nobody.. this dumbass aint read..
he's such an Afterthought his lines can reach out and summon the dead.
Ok
both u wifed up the sluttiest hoes, u didnt care to choose.
cuz Eastbay's will fuck anyone for a Nike shirt & a cheap pair of shoes..
Aiight closer

Bad Guys took this. It wasn't a one sided win, but they noticeably hit harder w/ their verse. I think if Hush Easter had a 1 or 2 heavier lines they could've taken this. That chess/L line was dope tho. Bad Guys were more consistent. They had a steady stream of decent enough lines.. where H.E. had alot of misses & 1 hard ass bar & a comedic one(Cecil the Lion).

Vote- Bad Guys

Tic 08-13-2015 11:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer (Post 517820)
marks, just stop the act before i rush in w/ munition
the hammer known to pull the bitch out of boy worse than Hush did to Christian
I'm a king on the board, I run through squares and laugh as this fucker yells
from the view above where I sit, all I see when Knight makes a move is another L

used to assume he liked pussy, but now this fag has me guessin
cuz knight got Ace in the hole, and I don't mean the idiomatic expression

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight (Post 517937)
Ayiooo..

yah'll the gayest crew in this shit, faggots not hood at all..
Eastbound & Down to travel anywhere if it comes to some wood an balls.
stand down u faggot ass niggas.. the team is a dead shot..
the .45's like a protractor.. wen the lever go up it aint stoppin until u get a lead dot.
Rhetoric is a loser, a nobody.. this dumbass aint read..
he's such an Afterthought his lines can reach out and summon the dead.

both u wifed up the sluttiest hoes, u didnt care to choose.
cuz Eastbay's will fuck anyone for a Nike shirt & a cheap pair of shoes..

Cool matchup. Des, that Knight line was fire IDC what anyone says. This battle was pretty close, but I think The Bad Guys just edged it with 1 more quote. Nice battle.

TBG


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