(R) 5. Orc vs (R) 12. Bust - ORC WINS
 

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Monday , August 3rd 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes

@Orc @Amen

this'll be your battle now

amen and @Bust, I'm thinking put bust into the next round of reserves (or as a reserve put in tonight depending on how this goes) and maybe you guys get a BA battle that functions as a voting link for here/next tourney/league I run (depending on when it goes up?)

@Bust

Check 10

Ok

I weigh so much crack n coke im goin nuts, Treatin my opponents like packin dope
See I'll slice u at the midsection n bag each part separately....that's 2 half a O's
U got a big net name n can't afford to hurt ur rep game, s'why this loss be hell
See To me this match ain't nuttin but stuffin a ounce in a Dutch.. To u its a costly L
U must feel ancient, spent ur glory days textin n still ain't shit
What stories u gon tell ur grandkids? That u disputed so many losses u got called a plaintiff..
FOH pussy, heard the archives had chunks missing cos u bit them off
So u steal people's shit n get credit for it... Damn he's not only a plaintiff this BITCH a fraud
He said this only for the elite, well I question that with ur history of sins, yo
Fuckin crybaby biter, u shouldn't give a F Y I made it, When the real question is WTF ur info

Cute, but...

Listen to one fact; I'll record ya wig getting pushed back
I'll be in All Black on the Porch with a Cam... but this isn't a Hush Mag
Where is ur track list? U'll never b THAT sick.
When your idea of 'Heavy Rotation' is dating several Fat Chicks.
There's no fire in dude. B's an uptight weirdo w/ no desire to boot,
so if u Letting your hair down it's just something else Disappointed in you.
U a queeeer in ya hood. Busts a basic n' wack fiend.
Last week I drew cuz of Remy Boyz, & this week I'm facing a Trap Queen
Dude don't wana test the Ruger. You a peon, pest, and loser.
Netcees want Bust Out of their Threads. it'd bring back Deon, Metts & User

U must feel ancient, spent ur glory days textin n still ain't shit
What stories u gon tell ur grandkids? That u disputed so many losses u got called a plaintiff..
He said this only for the elite, well I question that with ur history of sins, yo
Fuckin crybaby biter, u shouldn't give a F Y I made it, When the real question is WTF ur info


Vs


Where is ur track list? U'll never b THAT sick.
When your idea of 'Heavy Rotation' is dating several Fat Chicks.
There's no fire in dude. B's an uptight weirdo w/ no desire to boot,
so if u Letting your hair down it's just something else Disappointed in you.
U a queeeer in ya hood. Busts a basic n' wack fiend.
Last week I drew cuz of Remy Boyz, & this week I'm facing a Trap Queen


v/Orc, cool battle but wat hurt bust is having 2 weed lines & plaintiff flips in a row,
wasnt feelin that, but fyi was nice. Orc had a real solid verse heavy rotation was fire.
Props to both. Good battle.

I weigh so much crack n coke im goin nuts, Treatin my opponents like packin dope
See I'll slice u at the midsection n bag each part separately....that's 2 half a O's
^okay 1letter np. connection could be a bit stronger tho
U got a big net name n can't afford to hurt ur rep game, s'why this loss be hell
See To me this match ain't nuttin but stuffin a ounce in a Dutch.. To u its a costly L
^L wp is kinda old by now
U must feel ancient, spent ur glory days textin n still ain't shit
What stories u gon tell ur grandkids? That u disputed so many losses u got called a plaintiff..
^lol okay
FOH pussy, heard the archives had chunks missing cos u bit them off
So u steal people's shit n get credit for it... Damn he's not only a plaintiff this BITCH a fraud
^eh. not fresh enough of an angle on a kinda tired concept
He said this only for the elite, well I question that with ur history of sins, yo
Fuckin crybaby biter, u shouldn't give a F Y I made it, When the real question is WTF ur info
^info like in fo'? aite, solid

vs.

Listen to one fact; I'll record ya wig getting pushed back
I'll be in All Black on the Porch with a Cam... but this isn't a Hush Mag
^okay
Where is ur track list? U'll never b THAT sick.
When your idea of 'Heavy Rotation' is dating several Fat Chicks.
^solid
There's no fire in dude. B's an uptight weirdo w/ no desire to boot,
so if u Letting your hair down it's just something else Disappointed in you.
^ehh, the letting hair down part came outta nowhere. would work better in a pic bttl or smth
U a queeeer in ya hood. Busts a basic n' wack fiend.
Last week I drew cuz of Remy Boyz, & this week I'm facing a Trap Queen
^okay
Dude don't wana test the Ruger. You a peon, pest, and loser.
Netcees want Bust Out of their Threads. it'd bring back Deon, Metts & User
^aite

orc was just more consistent. bust had some lines i liked forreal, but he also had uninspired lines like the 2nd plaintiff line. that made the verse feel rushed. if he'd come w/ 100%, he woulda put up a fight here. nice read. props.
v/orc

U must feel ancient, spent ur glory days textin n still ain't shit
What stories u gon tell ur grandkids? That u disputed so many losses u got called a plaintiff.

He said this only for the elite, well I question that with ur history of sins, yo
Fuckin crybaby biter, u shouldn't give a F Y I made it, When the real question is WTF ur info
^^^^
I thought this was pretty decent as far as your verses go
I didn't really enjoy that opener, it felt too wordy to work out for me
sticking to the same concept for the next bar hurt you
same with using the plaintiff idea again, this felt rushed to me
if you taken a moment to work out what you had I'm sure it would have worked
either way decent verse

Where is ur track list? U'll never b THAT sick.
When your idea of 'Heavy Rotation' is dating several Fat Chicks.

U a queeeer in ya hood. Busts a basic n' wack fiend.
Last week I drew cuz of Remy Boyz, & this week I'm facing a Trap Queen
Dude don't wana test the Ruger. You a peon, pest, and loser.
Netcees want Bust Out of their Threads. it'd bring back Deon, Metts & User
^^^
these lines were clean, that heavy rotations made me LOL
didn't really enjoy that disappointed line too much
the opener was ok just came across worded funny...
otherwise I feel like you handled yourself pretty well here

v/Orc, he came with a stronger verse and had some better hits
Bust did work but it came across a little rushed to me.
seemed like he didn't have enough to time to properly set everything up
using 'plaintiff' twice toned down the second punch, either way decent verse
nice battle fella's

He said this only for the elite, well I question that with ur history of sins, yo
Fuckin crybaby biter, u shouldn't give a F Y I made it, When the real question is WTF ur info

vs

Listen to one fact; I'll record ya wig getting pushed back
I'll be in All Black on the Porch with a Cam... but this isn't a Hush Mag
Where is ur track list? U'll never b THAT sick.
When your idea of 'Heavy Rotation' is dating several Fat Chicks.
U a queeeer in ya hood. Busts a basic n' wack fiend.
Last week I drew cuz of Remy Boyz, & this week I'm facing a Trap Queen



One had the better wording and material the other had stretched out lines and bars that was overworded if that makes sense, but it took away from the potential sting. v/Orc

Bust didn't have much in the way of actually punches so Orc gets this pretty comfortably. opener was okish but nothing else really. orc did more than enough for a dub.

Vote: Orc

I weigh so much crack n coke im goin nuts, Treatin my opponents like packin dope
See I'll slice u at the midsection n bag each part separately....that's 2 half a O's
not a fan of one-letter nameplays... this one had some grittiness though, cool
U got a big net name n can't afford to hurt ur rep game, s'why this loss be hell
See To me this match ain't nuttin but stuffin a ounce in a Dutch.. To u its a costly L
ehhh I see you but pretty simple & didn't like this comin right behind the opener
U must feel ancient, spent ur glory days textin n still ain't shit
What stories u gon tell ur grandkids? That u disputed so many losses u got called a plaintiff..
ha not bad
FOH pussy, heard the archives had chunks missing cos u bit them off
So u steal people's shit n get credit for it... Damn he's not only a plaintiff this BITCH a fraud
like the personal angle but the delivery & concept was weak homie
He said this only for the elite, well I question that with ur history of sins, yo
Fuckin crybaby biter, u shouldn't give a F Y I made it, When the real question is WTF ur info
yo this was nice

vs.

Listen to one fact; I'll record ya wig getting pushed back
I'll be in All Black on the Porch with a Cam... but this isn't a Hush Mag
throw some Jun on that bitch... I like it
Where is ur track list? U'll never b THAT sick.
When your idea of 'Heavy Rotation' is dating several Fat Chicks.
haha nice
There's no fire in dude. B's an uptight weirdo w/ no desire to boot,
so if u Letting your hair down it's just something else Disappointed in you.
feel like I shoulda seen this b4... never have. concept on point but wording just ok
U a queeeer in ya hood. Busts a basic n' wack fiend.
Last week I drew cuz of Remy Boyz, & this week I'm facing a Trap Queen
solid
Dude don't wana test the Ruger. You a peon, pest, and loser.
Netcees want Bust Out of their Threads. it'd bring back Deon, Metts & User
haha peon pest loser deon metts user... wording sold this one but nothin crazy

Bust wasn't bad... FYI was hittin to me and a couple decent ones in there too...
havin the half an O then ounce/costly L plus the plaintiff then fraud lines back to back hurt though
I don't think I read too many of Bust battles but this was cool aside from that
Orc just came wit some heat this week though...
I don't know if that's playoff Orc or he got some extra motivation from Sharp's original seeding
Either way... opener was the style I fuck wit, heavy rotation was funny...
those were my favorites but none really missed to me. Nice verse.

this was an interesting one, good read fellas

V/Orc

Plaintiffs, FYI

Vs

Opener, heavy rotation, hair down, trap queen

V/Orc. I really only have him missing with one bar. Bust did better in the BA tourney, I felt this drop was alil lackluster.