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Hush 07-26-2015 06:40 PM

RND1. Remy Lebeau vs iSpaz {Remy wins}
 
Battle Arena Tournament

@Remy LeBeau @iSpaz

Rules

Due Dates:
  • Verses are due SUNDAY,
    August 2nd 2015 11:59 PM PST.
  • Check Ins are due WEDNESDAY, July 11th 2014
  • Voting ends Friday July 16th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
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iSpaz 07-28-2015 01:35 PM

Ayy.

Ppl talkin YOU up? Plzz I go for the chin watch that right land.
All I can say is Hush homie... cuz after this you'll be dead along w/ the Hype man.
I seen ur pics. You lookin like a real bitch I'll Roast this fake boss..
..One punch'll have your grill leaking and drip down like fuckin steak sauce.
I bust Cannons. Right where you standin'll get u killed cruelly.
So I'll keep all them shots ROLLIN on you.. nd I ain't filmin a movie.
Mannn you gay. Always tryna play wit dudes extremeties.
It's like his hunger never stops.. no matter how many faggots give Remedy.
I'll strike fast. U paint a picture like u strapped and shoot shit..
..Go ahead draw that chopper, swear to GOD you won't live long enough to use it.

@Remy LeBeau

Useless 07-28-2015 11:54 PM

Breh...

U ain't getting better, s'why ur so easily defeated.
The only way u could be the victor.. Is battling urself like he did.
Ur shits played and most ur flows r no go.
I laugh when u bust.. Cause he's the ONLY win u got that wasn't a no show.
He's pussy, prob walks around with a purse n zima.
always ovary acting.. Bitching about a loss worse than Gina.
He's overweight.. his biggest fear is standing in front of the stairs.
write quick n IKEA collapse fast as him sitting in one of their chairs.
U got one thing in common with karaoke, we wanna roast this bitch.
We wonder at ur ethnic make up.. but u won't take urs off long enuff to post a pic.

8===D~~~~(}: 07-29-2015 12:28 AM

Ayy.

Ppl talkin YOU up? Plzz I go for the chin watch that right land.
All I can say is Hush homie... cuz after this you'll be dead along w/ the Hype man.
not really a diss to him, wasn't feelin this
I seen ur pics. You lookin like a real bitch I'll Roast this fake boss..
..One punch'll have your grill leaking and drip down like fuckin steak sauce.
again not feelin this
I bust Cannons. Right where you standin'll get u killed cruelly.
So I'll keep all them shots ROLLIN on you.. nd I ain't filmin a movie.
alright not bad
Mannn you gay. Always tryna play wit dudes extremeties.
It's like his hunger never stops.. no matter how many faggots give Remedy.
lol good one
I'll strike fast. U paint a picture like u strapped and shoot shit..
..Go ahead draw that chopper, swear to GOD you won't live long enough to use it.
ehh decent at best, kinda basic


Vs


Breh...

U ain't getting better, s'why ur so easily defeated.
The only way u could be the victor.. Is battling urself like he did.
ha alright
Ur shits played and most ur flows r no go.
I laugh when u bust.. Cause he's the ONLY win u got that wasn't a no show.
eh decent at best, not that hard
He's pussy, prob walks around with a purse n zima.
always ovary acting.. Bitching about a loss worse than Gina.
lmao ok this was dope
He's overweight.. his biggest fear is standing in front of the stairs.
write quick n IKEA collapse fast as him sitting in one of their chairs.
not feelin
U got one thing in common with karaoke, we wanna roast this bitch.
We wonder at ur ethnic make up.. but u won't take urs off long enuff to post a pic.
nah

Close battle, both were kind of even in quotes but The Gina line sealed the deal tho, that was dope. Vote: Remy

Mr. J 07-29-2015 04:04 PM

I seen ur pics. You lookin like a real bitch I'll Roast this fake boss..
..One punch'll have your grill leaking and drip down like fuckin steak sauce.
I bust Cannons. Right where you standin'll get u killed cruelly.
So I'll keep all them shots ROLLIN on you.. nd I ain't filmin a movie.
Mannn you gay. Always tryna play wit dudes extremeties.
It's like his hunger never stops.. no matter how many faggots give Remedy.

^^^^
I thought this whole section was pretty dope
I enjoyed that steak sauce line that was pretty slick
the last part of this section was nice and made me lol
didn't enjoy that opener, and that closer didn't feel like a punch
either way this was a cool verse..

U ain't getting better, s'why ur so easily defeated.
The only way u could be the victor.. Is battling urself like he did.
Ur shits played and most ur flows r no go.
I laugh when u bust.. Cause he's the ONLY win u got that wasn't a no show.
He's pussy, prob walks around with a purse n zima.
always ovary acting.. Bitching about a loss worse than Gina.

^^^^
I thought this whole section was pretty slick
I didn't really enjoy that closer, but that IKEA shit was LOL
you went in on this verse though and it shows...
nice work


v/Remy he had a more consistent set of punches aimed at his opponent
Spaz had some dope lines but seemed more like a swag & flow verse to me
otherwise I thought he delivered some nice lines but his punches didn't land
Remy just came across with a better set of ideas, nice battle fellas

Bust 07-29-2015 06:25 PM

Spaz

Opener was oooooooook, didn't care for the along wit hush part but it was all tied in well just really no need to mention killin hush
Grill leaking was ok
Shots Rollin was pretty cool
Rem a D was dope
Didn't like the closer much

Rem

Opener was ok
No show was cool
Over reacting was nice
I key a was pretty creative
Closer was ehh


Well this was a nice read, enjoyed most of both verses but I feel rem had an extra hit on spaz so I got him takin this in a close match.. Good ish


Remy

Witty 07-29-2015 06:45 PM

Ppl talkin YOU up? Plzz I go for the chin watch that right land.
All I can say is Hush homie... cuz after this you'll be dead along w/ the Hype man.
not bad
I seen ur pics. You lookin like a real bitch I'll Roast this fake boss..
..One punch'll have your grill leaking and drip down like fuckin steak sauce.
nah bro
I bust Cannons. Right where you standin'll get u killed cruelly.
So I'll keep all them shots ROLLIN on you.. nd I ain't filmin a movie.
ehhh
Mannn you gay. Always tryna play wit dudes extremeties.
It's like his hunger never stops.. no matter how many faggots give Remedy.
ok pretty nice
I'll strike fast. U paint a picture like u strapped and shoot shit..
..Go ahead draw that chopper, swear to GOD you won't live long enough to use it.
not feeling

vs

U ain't getting better, s'why ur so easily defeated.
The only way u could be the victor.. Is battling urself like he did.
light but ok
Ur shits played and most ur flows r no go.
I laugh when u bust.. Cause he's the ONLY win u got that wasn't a no show.
cool personal
He's pussy, prob walks around with a purse n zima.
always ovary acting.. Bitching about a loss worse than Gina.
lol'd
He's overweight.. his biggest fear is standing in front of the stairs.
write quick n IKEA collapse fast as him sitting in one of their chairs.
wasn't feeling
U got one thing in common with karaoke, we wanna roast this bitch.
We wonder at ur ethnic make up.. but u won't take urs off long enuff to post a pic.
ok

Cool battle, iSpaz had a couple cool lines but Remy was more consistent and had the harder hitters, he really only had one punch i didn't like so much, other than that he just out punched his opponent.

Vote - Remy

Bash 07-29-2015 09:56 PM

Remedy

Vs

Bust, ovary

V/Remy. I've seen better from Spaz but Remy came a lot more polished

~RustyGunZ~ 08-02-2015 11:11 PM

Mannn you gay. Always tryna play wit dudes extremeties.
It's like his hunger never stops.. no matter how many faggots give Remedy.


vs

U ain't getting better, s'why ur so easily defeated.
The only way u could be the victor.. Is battling urself like he did.
Ur shits played and most ur flows r no go.
I laugh when u bust.. Cause he's the ONLY win u got that wasn't a no show.
He's pussy, prob walks around with a purse n zima.
always ovary acting.. Bitching about a loss worse than Gina.


v/remy

Destroyer 08-02-2015 11:23 PM

ovary acting was fire
remy got this with that bar alone
remedy was dope but that's all spaz had
remy had a few hitters

v/gambit

Havoc 08-03-2015 02:23 AM

Ppl talkin YOU up? Plzz I go for the chin watch that right land.
All I can say is Hush homie... cuz after this you'll be dead along w/ the Hype man.
I seen ur pics. You lookin like a real bitch I'll Roast this fake boss..
..One punch'll have your grill leaking and drip down like fuckin steak sauce.

vs



U ain't getting better, s'why ur so easily defeated.
The only way u could be the victor.. Is battling urself like he did.
Ur shits played and most ur flows r no go.
I laugh when u bust.. Cause he's the ONLY win u got that wasn't a no show.
He's pussy, prob walks around with a purse n zima.
always ovary acting.. Bitching about a loss worse than Gina.


U got one thing in common with karaoke, we wanna roast this bitch.
We wonder at ur ethnic make up.. but u won't take urs off long enuff to post a pic.


both dropped some pretty niiice ish, i spaz started off strong then kind of tapered off, remdedy wp could've been suuper fire if he would've re worded it... remy was pretty consistent through out his whole battle.. IKEA was his only major miss imo. all in all remy gmv.. great battle from both tho props

Strikta 08-03-2015 02:49 PM

Ppl talkin YOU up? Plzz I go for the chin watch that right land.
All I can say is Hush homie... cuz after this you'll be dead along w/ the Hype man.
Aiiight
I seen ur pics. You lookin like a real bitch I'll Roast this fake boss..
..One punch'll have your grill leaking and drip down like fuckin steak sauce.
Ehh
I bust Cannons. Right where you standin'll get u killed cruelly.
So I'll keep all them shots ROLLIN on you.. nd I ain't filmin a movie.
Ok.. just ok
Mannn you gay. Always tryna play wit dudes extremeties.
It's like his hunger never stops.. no matter how many faggots give Remedy.
This was cool
I'll strike fast. U paint a picture like u strapped and shoot shit..
..Go ahead draw that chopper, swear to GOD you won't live long enough to use it.
Statementish closer.. I liked it, but it's effectiveness might not go over well w/ other voters


U ain't getting better, s'why ur so easily defeated.
The only way u could be the victor.. Is battling urself like he did.
Nah
Ur shits played and most ur flows r no go.
I laugh when u bust.. Cause he's the ONLY win u got that wasn't a no show.
Ok
He's pussy, prob walks around with a purse n zima.
always ovary acting.. Bitching about a loss worse than Gina.
This was cool, nice concept.. coulda hit harder tho
He's overweight.. his biggest fear is standing in front of the stairs.
write quick n IKEA collapse fast as him sitting in one of their chairs.
Cool flip, seen the concept before tho
U got one thing in common with karaoke, we wanna roast this bitch.
We wonder at ur ethnic make up.. but u won't take urs off long enuff to post a pic.
Ehh, ok

I got Remy edging this in a cool lil battle.. both had some stuff I wasn't really feeling. I kinda like Ispaz style tho.. I feel like he could be dangerous w/ more experience down the road. Remy's cool too.. had the ovary line which I thought was lotb.. his misses weren't as bad too. Props to both.

Vote- Remy

Lotto Smirk 08-03-2015 03:53 PM

Remedy

Vs

Bust, ovary

Vote - remy
One of better verses I've seen from remy we're it was the opposite for ispAz I've seen him produce much better verses, rents ovary line was enough to take the battle alone

Ace 08-03-2015 04:11 PM

Mannn you gay. Always tryna play wit dudes extremeties.
It's like his hunger never stops.. no matter how many faggots give Remedy.


vs

U ain't getting better, s'why ur so easily defeated.
The only way u could be the victor.. Is battling urself like he did.
Ur shits played and most ur flows r no go.
I laugh when u bust.. Cause he's the ONLY win u got that wasn't a no show.


keepin it simple, remy basically had one more line i liked..


v Rem

joog 08-03-2015 04:43 PM

Spaz:
Opener was good, but not harsh enough for my taste.
Grill leak seems a bit unfinished
Remedy was kinda dope tho

Vs
Rem:
Idk man. I was really only feeling the overreaction joint. But i feel like seen it already. Cant be sure tho.


Vote spaz

Letterman 08-03-2015 07:58 PM

Mannn you gay. Always tryna play wit dudes extremeties.
It's like his hunger never stops.. no matter how many faggots give Remedy.

Vs

He's overweight.. his biggest fear is standing in front of the stairs.
write quick n IKEA collapse fast as him sitting in one of their chairs.
U got one thing in common with karaoke, we wanna roast this bitch.
We wonder at ur ethnic make up.. but u won't take urs off long enuff to post a pic.

Spaz, I was expecting more from you tbh. The Remedy was pretty decent but everything else was weak. Remy, your opener must be a personal about Hush but I couldn't quote it cuz I don't know about it. Same with the bust line. You were pretty consistent here tho, except the ovary acting wordplay is prehistoric. You had enough to take the win tho

v/Remy


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