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You killed this shit yo. Straight up

@Hush alright manee thanks
@Genocide Appreciate the listen fam.

this is enjoyable. I think around second 40 i started to lose focus on it, the constant delivery gets tiring. But its good, i think the only part i didn't enjoy, is when you cut in/out, but I dont know how good uyour mixing skills are, or if you mix yourself, so thats another topic. Overall a good listen, I would like to hear some more delivery switch ups, but thats just me.

I really liked a lot about this. The flow definitely works with the beat and your delivery is solid. I loved almost everything about the beat too except the snare sound on the drums sounds really bad to me for some reason. But, other than that, I thought it built really well. Kinda torn on the lyrics. Too many slant rhymes in my opinion. Also I feel like the lyrics were meant to be kinda heartfelt but I had trouble picking enough of the out to really connect. I'll probably listen to it again though so that's gotta count for something I guess.