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Sharp 07-19-2015 11:58 PM

Killing Spree 3-4 vs Infiltration 2-1 - INFILTRATION WINS
 
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Saint 07-20-2015 01:23 AM

In

Kill Spree 07-20-2015 07:24 AM

Yup

Kill Spree 07-23-2015 05:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Infiltration (Post 508177)
In

Need the ext.

Saint 07-23-2015 05:39 PM

Cool. I'm probably doin 12.

Kill Spree 07-24-2015 08:09 PM

infiltration aka thorne on RB

Cred – NBL Week 16 Champ Match
i'm a bar u to death n leave u hopeless wit pride. we're all jus hoping u'd die
ironically my punches went over ur head.. n so did da fuckin vultures n flies

Quote:
Amen vs KnowP on RB
And here’s a bonus, bum… It’s clear NOX’ll easily fold you with lines,
Cuz my punches are over your head… Along with vultures and flies.






see...
u atractin cuts. the pump'll splinter threw the core of this guy
roll up where u sit, got the stem to ya hip cos im known to put thorn on the side
this wont go over heads, put ya hands together & prey befor a kids dead
..glock to ya head as the voltures circle
& now i'll shoot you in the face as u say Amen & anything fly from u never gets cred
this boy too girlish 4 the dope game, but u talk bout that hate & sinner
see we call our game of blow that Miley, & you refer to ya blow game as Caitlin Jenner
last week? this fag leaked, but champed a win, still this fake bitch faggot yo
u cracked Rib, & i'll pull urs out after doin that & use'm to break TicTac's Nose
i hit the hardest, a submision artist whos droppin ya name
but the beams'll give Inf a red eye as rounds hit his throat & cut oxygen to the brain
& u dieing, weezing, ya chest damn near bout to crash
im leaving this Pro Air'd, azthma bare hands rip his lungs out his back
my beef on point, if u care? its gonna end wit me killin fakes
ya streak has ppl thinkin u got feet under the table, so 'ill sneak up n pop leavin ya head in a dinner plate

Saint 07-25-2015 12:52 AM

14

the season finale should go out in a bang. so fuck it infs aimin the pistol
a killing spree ends short with the FIRST loss.. so with that 4, 5th make it official.
whats the verdict? sharp put u on my hitlist- now watch my gunners surface
& we'll wet ya whole house up... like we ran a scheme to claim the Flood Insurance.
U cant handle slapbox in spar class- wit full body pads u'd get KO'd fucker
shiit.. ull get caught with the kiddie gear so bad u'll register on NC's as "GOW's brother."
Ya slut rolled on my joystick like a hadouken, for you its game over dude
I KNEW how to press her buttons, but the pussy? mashed it out like i didn't know the moves.
ill put on a clinic. follow up pain pills, medical pot- it'll cost u a grand newbie
N if he skip my KillBill? he'll only hit the pine... in a coffin like Uma Thurman in that movie.
U make restroom babies. when meetin at truckstops to bust nuts, he's bare
bitches describe him as StalWart... after what his dick gets from slores he fucks in there.
I be in the trap.. catch me doin drug deals, to come down a highs no fun feel..
Nobody would EVER get hot w/ ya writtens...but ya verses are everyones greatest buzz kill.

El Muffin 07-25-2015 11:42 AM

u atractin cuts. the pump'll splinter threw the core of this guy
roll up where u sit, got the stem to ya hip cos im known to put thorn on the side
(I like it)
this wont go over heads, put ya hands together & prey befor a kids dead
..glock to ya head as the voltures circle
& now i'll shoot you in the face as u say Amen & anything fly from u never gets cred
(cool word association but a lil long winded)
this boy too girlish 4 the dope game, but u talk bout that hate & sinner
see we call our game of blow that Miley, & you refer to ya blow game as Caitlin Jenner
(ok kinda funny)
last week? this fag leaked, but champed a win, still this fake bitch faggot yo
u cracked Rib, & i'll pull urs out after doin that & use'm to break TicTac's Nose
(no this was weak tho)
i hit the hardest, a submision artist whos droppin ya name
but the beams'll give Inf a red eye as rounds hit his throat & cut oxygen to the brain
(slick rhyme. concept was eh tho unless I missed something. I doubt it tho)
& u dieing, weezing, ya chest damn near bout to crash
im leaving this Pro Air'd, azthma bare hands rip his lungs out his back
(same as above)
my beef on point, if u care? its gonna end wit me killin fakes
ya streak has ppl thinkin u got feet under the table, so 'ill sneak up n pop leavin ya head in a dinner plate
(meh tbh)

the season finale should go out in a bang. so fuck it infs aimin the pistol
a killing spree ends short with the FIRST loss.. so with that 4, 5th make it official.
(damn this is dirty as hell tho)
whats the verdict? sharp put u on my hitlist- now watch my gunners surface
& we'll wet ya whole house up... like we ran a scheme to claim the Flood Insurance.
(I like this too)
U cant handle slapbox in spar class- wit full body pads u'd get KO'd fucker
shiit.. ull get caught with the kiddie gear so bad u'll register on NC's as "GOW's brother."
(too many of these gow brother lines n this was not one I like tbh)
Ya slut rolled on my joystick like a hadouken, for you its game over dude
I KNEW how to press her buttons, but the pussy? mashed it out like i didn't know the moves.
(HAHA bang)
ill put on a clinic. follow up pain pills, medical pot- it'll cost u a grand newbie
N if he skip my KillBill? he'll only hit the pine... in a coffin like Uma Thurman in that movie.
(nah)
U make restroom babies. when meetin at truckstops to bust nuts, he's bare
bitches describe him as StalWart... after what his dick gets from slores he fucks in there.
(what)
I be in the trap.. catch me doin drug deals, to come down a highs no fun feel..
Nobody would EVER get hot w/ ya writtens...but ya verses are everyones greatest buzz kill.
(ehhhhh ok)

decent battle. seen u both come better tho if im being honest. spree looked like he was experimenting. some of that shit I just couldn't rock with . them rhymed good tho that much is a given considering we all pretty good with stringing shit together I just felt the concepts were kind of loose and or the shit didn't appeal to me personally this week. infil went the fuck in in the beg. lol mashed out was great. then had some eh shit too. but I think infil def dropped the stronger verse in this match if im being honest

v.infil

Amen. 07-25-2015 12:05 PM

thorn on the side was over worded and execution was choppy bro
amen/cred play same as above
blow miley/caitlyn jenner was mild/statement'ish
a shot a Tic? makes no sense to me bro
inf red eye was alright but again, execution was choppy bro
asthma play I thought was cool and creative, little choppy on the wordin but dece attempt
closer was stretched as fuck and wordy which to me kills the impact

vs

opener was ok but wordy
flood insurance was an alright idea, execution was choppy
GOWS brother was mild
ehhh buttons/game play was weird and wordy, wayy of to me
killbill play was wordy and mild
stalwarts was lol tbh
closer was weak

close battle - a lot of swings an misses here fellas. try and cool it with your over wordy executions guys. simple is better. not simple as in non creative but the least amount in your executions help the impact of your punch guys.

Inf got the edge tho - misses slightly better

Hush 07-25-2015 01:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Killing Spree (Post 510827)
infiltration aka thorne on RB

Cred – NBL Week 16 Champ Match
i'm a bar u to death n leave u hopeless wit pride. we're all jus hoping u'd die
ironically my punches went over ur head.. n so did da fuckin vultures n flies

Quote:
Amen vs KnowP on RB
And here’s a bonus, bum… It’s clear NOX’ll easily fold you with lines,
Cuz my punches are over your head… Along with vultures and flies.






see...
u atractin cuts. the pump'll splinter threw the core of this guy
roll up where u sit, got the stem to ya hip cos im known to put thorn on the side
pretty fuckig sick, props
this wont go over heads, put ya hands together & prey befor a kids dead
..glock to ya head as the voltures circle
& now i'll shoot you in the face as u say Amen & anything fly from u never gets cred
you overworded this, could of been dope but it didnt land fam
this boy too girlish 4 the dope game, but u talk bout that hate & sinner
see we call our game of blow that Miley, & you refer to ya blow game as Caitlin Jenner
LOL ok bet, u talking to me right now, i fux with it
last week? this fag leaked, but champed a win, still this fake bitch faggot yo
u cracked Rib, & i'll pull urs out after doin that & use'm to break TicTac's Nose
weak, wording off. u hit and miss right now bro
i hit the hardest, a submision artist whos droppin ya name
but the beams'll give Inf a red eye as rounds hit his throat & cut oxygen to the brain
dope concept, inf a red eye /cut oxygen to his brain is sick, u got BAAAAD wording issues my guy, but u are close to the mark, hmu for a better explanation anytime
& u dieing, weezing, ya chest damn near bout to crash
im leaving this Pro Air'd, azthma bare hands rip his lungs out his back
hmm as my, athsma, i like that atempt
my beef on point, if u care? its gonna end wit me killin fakes
ya streak has ppl thinkin u got feet under the table, so 'ill sneak up n pop leavin ya head in a dinner plate
never heard the term feet under the table so it hurt the line didnt feel this

Quote:

Originally Posted by Infiltration (Post 510995)
14

the season finale should go out in a bang. so fuck it infs aimin the pistol
a killing spree ends short with the FIRST loss.. so with that 4, 5th make it official.
keeping it 100 i dont get this
whats the verdict? sharp put u on my hitlist- now watch my gunners surface
& we'll wet ya whole house up... like we ran a scheme to claim the Flood Insurance.
lol ok cool
U cant handle slapbox in spar class- wit full body pads u'd get KO'd fucker
shiit.. ull get caught with the kiddie gear so bad u'll register on NC's as "GOW's brother."
good attempt but i dont get the kiddie gear ref
Ya slut rolled on my joystick like a hadouken, for you its game over dude
I KNEW how to press her buttons, but the pussy? mashed it out like i didn't know the moves.
lmao ok bro, now u hittin
ill put on a clinic. follow up pain pills, medical pot- it'll cost u a grand newbie
N if he skip my KillBill? he'll only hit the pine... in a coffin like Uma Thurman in that movie.
nah not feelin
U make restroom babies. when meetin at truckstops to bust nuts, he's bare
bitches describe him as StalWart... after what his dick gets from slores he fucks in there.
this a reach but i like it cuz it lands and u did that
I be in the trap.. catch me doin drug deals, to come down a highs no fun feel..
Nobody would EVER get hot w/ ya writtens...but ya verses are everyones greatest buzz kill.
this is forced, unnatural, not ur lane no offense so it didnt land double



close ass battle
Kill had 2 sick lines
Inf had a sick line and a retarded line and a ok line

very competitive matchup

rep to both

I got inf by the slimest of margin. Spree wording was struggle at poins

Sharp 07-26-2015 11:53 PM

see...
u atractin cuts. the pump'll splinter threw the core of this guy
roll up where u sit, got the stem to ya hip cos im known to put thorn on the side
cool
this wont go over heads, put ya hands together & prey befor a kids dead
..glock to ya head as the voltures circle
& now i'll shoot you in the face as u say Amen & anything fly from u never gets cred
really good concept with iffy execution thb
this boy too girlish 4 the dope game, but u talk bout that hate & sinner
see we call our game of blow that Miley, & you refer to ya blow game as Caitlin Jenner
eh
last week? this fag leaked, but champed a win, still this fake bitch faggot yo
u cracked Rib, & i'll pull urs out after doin that & use'm to break TicTac's Nose
what about tic tac? I liked the cracked rib concept but it didn't really do much
i hit the hardest, a submision artist whos droppin ya name
but the beams'll give Inf a red eye as rounds hit his throat & cut oxygen to the brain
inf a red is a lil awkward but cool idea. weird execution
& u dieing, weezing, ya chest damn near bout to crash
im leaving this Pro Air'd, azthma bare hands rip his lungs out his back
I like this a lot
my beef on point, if u care? its gonna end wit me killin fakes
ya streak has ppl thinkin u got feet under the table, so 'ill sneak up n pop leavin ya head in a dinner plate
not really feeling it


the season finale should go out in a bang. so fuck it infs aimin the pistol
a killing spree ends short with the FIRST loss.. so with that 4, 5th make it official.
I don't understand this.
whats the verdict? sharp put u on my hitlist- now watch my gunners surface
& we'll wet ya whole house up... like we ran a scheme to claim the Flood Insurance.
ok
U cant handle slapbox in spar class- wit full body pads u'd get KO'd fucker
shiit.. ull get caught with the kiddie gear so bad u'll register on NC's as "GOW's brother."
nice
Ya slut rolled on my joystick like a hadouken, for you its game over dude
I KNEW how to press her buttons, but the pussy? mashed it out like i didn't know the moves.
gone lol
ill put on a clinic. follow up pain pills, medical pot- it'll cost u a grand newbie
N if he skip my KillBill? he'll only hit the pine... in a coffin like Uma Thurman in that movie.
kinda obvious
U make restroom babies. when meetin at truckstops to bust nuts, he's bare
bitches describe him as StalWart... after what his dick gets from slores he fucks in there.
ok
I be in the trap.. catch me doin drug deals, to come down a highs no fun feel..
Nobody would EVER get hot w/ ya writtens...but ya verses are everyones greatest buzz kill.
not feeling this


v/infiltration

consistency and lotb with button mashing. good battle though

Ace 07-27-2015 12:13 AM

pro air and thorn lines were very good.. vultures line was too long and jenner was ehhh.. flood and GOW for inf hit hard.. didnt like the buzzkill shit.. even in quotes but inf got
it cuz he had one less line i didnt like.. very close battle
v inf

murda sho 07-27-2015 12:29 AM

Infiltration

whats the verdict? sharp put u on my hitlist- now watch my gunners surface
& we'll wet ya whole house up... like we ran a scheme to claim the Flood Insurance.

Ya slut rolled on my joystick like a hadouken, for you its game over dude
I KNEW how to press her buttons, but the pussy? mashed it out like i didn't know the moves.


Killing Spree

& u dieing, weezing, ya chest damn near bout to crash
im leaving this Pro Air'd, azthma bare hands rip his lungs out his back


Killing Spree verse could have been a lot better but he was overcrowding a lot of his shit... the bar I did quote was mean though... tighten that wording up b don't take so long to get to the punch and you'll be aaight... Infiltration had an okay verse nothing too amazing but that street fighter punch was worded well nice hit and the flood insurance line was okay enough to get quoted imo... v/ Infil


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