Netcees - Destroyer 5-3 Vs Knucklehead 4-3 - DES WINS BY NOSHOW, OPEN FOR FEED

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Destroyer 5-3 Vs Knucklehead 4-3 - DES WINS BY NOSHOW, OPEN FOR FEED

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, July 9th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread

First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Destroyer @Knucklehead

sure I'll get a pic up tonight or tomorrow

Quote:

Originally Posted by Knucklehead (Post 501862)

Is that agent booth?

Gimme a minute I'll have mine up

knuck, it's Kevin from "The League"

Quote:

Originally Posted by Knucklehead (Post 502292)

http://i.imgur.com/gaze6wA.png

let's go grl

apologies in advance for the first bar

the way ur looking at that girl leads to an outcome that I'm fearing...
that we will eventually Syracuse him of playing with more than her earrings
bro, ur hair matches those letters, and u claim it's brunette nerd?
dude SWEARS he ain't a ginger, then rocks an Orangemen sweatshirt
I don't know another way to put this knuck, except to say that u scary
u look like you chewed the Wonka gum and are on ur way to turning into a blueberry
that wall is so dingy, all I want to do is to wipe it down
ur so fucking dirty, ur shadow alone changed those pillows from white to brown
u can't fuck w/me at pics, & it's just silly to try man...
all I see is ginger and maryanne, it's like I'm watching Gilligan's Island
I'm with Kevin from The League, he's an FX star
while u just look like u would be a special effects star
did u get bit in the face by a dog when u were young son?
cuz that upper lip is makin zelph's stache look like it could rival Ron Swanson's

I liked ur verse. Ur opener was forced as hell, apologizing ahead of time was funny but still...it was aite tho. U had good pic references I like the ginger line n the blueberry line. White to brown was aite...that Gilligan line tho. That was the standout, best line in ur verse but it could've been better with a harsher punch instead of just "like I'm watching Gilligan's island". Still dope tho. Special effects star was meh, wasn't feeling it. Closer was aite, I had to Google Ron Swanson tho n that always takes away from the punch for me. I know who he is once I seen his pic I just didn't know his name, should've went with someone more popular IMO like Burt Reynolds or tom selleck but that's just my opinion others may disagree. It was a good line tho.

Overall I thought u had a nice verse with consistency.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer (Post 502315)

apologies in advance for the first bar

the way ur looking at that girl leads to an outcome that I'm fearing...
that we will eventually Syracuse him of playing with more than her earrings
Forceddddddd lol. Idea is dope tho.
bro, ur hair matches those letters, and u claim it's brunette nerd?
dude SWEARS he ain't a ginger, then rocks an Orangemen sweatshirt
This is a cool flip with th pic.
I don't know another way to put this knuck, except to say that u scary
u look like you chewed the Wonka gum and are on ur way to turning into a blueberry
Lol ok.
that wall is so dingy, all I want to do is to wipe it down
ur so fucking dirty, ur shadow alone changed those pillows from white to brown
Dope
u can't fuck w/me at pics, & it's just silly to try man...
all I see is ginger and maryanne, it's like I'm watching Gilligan's Island
Cool but I think you could've executed this better.
I'm with Kevin from The League, he's an FX star
while u just look like u would be a special effects star
Not feeling this.
did u get bit in the face by a dog when u were young son?
cuz that upper lip is makin zelph's stache look like it could rival Ron Swanson's
Not really feeling this

Had a few nice lines in here. Overall, this was a solid verse. I like how you use the pic to your advantage. Cool verse.