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Hush 07-06-2015 01:53 PM

SHADOW BOXING RND 2 - Sn00p vs Muffy {Muffy wins}
 
Sn00p
i almost hope i lose. college has me looking at books for days...
i've got finals coming up. u look at ur tourney run & wish u COULD relate
a close brawl? watch this clown get decked
yes, this comes down to the wire... or whatever else i got around ur neck
even if someone liked u before... compared to me this guy sucks
& don't blame it on the tourney...
...u've been a shadow of ur former self WAAAY before u signed up
all ur drops are simple as fk & u don't have good hits
ur verse is such a light read, uh-oh stopped looking for book tips
u're broke than a muhfucker & not just a bit nerdy
if u're seen at the club w/ green, the netcees shirt must've shipped early
doesnt matter if i get Strik, Muff, or Murda. cuz ALL of them snorefests
i'm not hush struggling w/ words in the mag... i don't have trouble w/ 'em...' OR s



Muffy
This Lame is Trash. My crew? We say nay to Fags
Treat it like Cruis'n World. You better Pull off if you A Bitch Waving Flags
Nice w/ the iron. Fuck around n put a holeo Bitch
When these Two Arms Go Up? They'll put a Tshirt over ya Head on some Cornholio shit
I'm sick. That nc shirt shit got me feelin swell
Only time YOU'LL be wearing the lime is when I dump POUNDS of it on u to conceal the smell
Fuck this miscreant. Actin like his presence doing us alllll favors
Birch the Only Stripes you Earned are a Few Red Ones after doin Hard Labor
Upper Stratosphere. Your honestly not a cat I fear
Ur like that SpaceX launch
You Shoot for the Stars n Just Break Apart in the Atmosphere
I'm on bs?. Try me. Ur mom is meant 4 a shock
turn ya team into 13 ghosts. But ull be the only Jackal w/ his head in a Box

Bash 07-06-2015 02:12 PM

Shadow, light read, netcees shirt

Vs

Cornholio, atmosphere, 13 ghosts, waving flags

V/Muff. His creativity got it for me. Some of snoops shit was a lil predictable. I think Muff takes this overall though.

King Karaoke 07-06-2015 02:47 PM

Hi...

i almost hope i lose. college has me looking at books for days...
i've got finals coming up. u look at ur tourney run & wish u COULD relate
even if someone liked u before... compared to me this guy sucks
& don't blame it on the tourney...
...u've been a shadow of ur former self WAAAY before u signed up
all ur drops are simple as fk & u don't have good hits
ur verse is such a light read, uh-oh stopped looking for book tips
u're broke than a muhfucker & not just a bit nerdy
if u're seen at the club w/ green, the netcees shirt must've shipped early

solid verse...
Neck line has been done before and i hated the closer...
Book tips and nc shirt were dope tho...


I'm sick. That nc shirt shit got me feelin swell
Only time YOU'LL be wearing the lime is when I dump POUNDS of it on u to conceal the smell
Upper Stratosphere. Your honestly not a cat I fear
Ur like that SpaceX launch
You Shoot for the Stars n Just Break Apart in the Atmosphere

Didnt get the references and even if I did I still didnt like them...
lime line was cool but his was better....
spacex was decent as well...
nothing hard hitting tho...


I think Sn00p's verse hit harder and had better wording...

Vote- Sn00p...

Bye...

Clutbuck 07-06-2015 03:01 PM

Great battle here, this is how I got it:

Sn00p:
i almost hope i lose. college has me looking at books for days...
i've got finals coming up. u look at ur tourney run & wish u COULD relate
& don't blame it on the tourney...
...u've been a shadow of ur former self WAAAY before u signed up
all ur drops are simple as fk & u don't have good hits
ur verse is such a light read, uh-oh stopped looking for book tips
u're broke than a muhfucker & not just a bit nerdy
if u're seen at the club w/ green, the netcees shirt must've shipped early

I wasn't so keen on the "down to the wire" line as pretty much all idiom ish, unless it's made into a personal, I've seen flipped a dozen times prior. The current event hit with uh-oh was cool, same with the green in the club which was fresh to boot. Solid verse, real consistent, closer didn't hit for me personally though here.

Muff had a lot of creativity going for him here and you can't fault that, dude is oozing bars at the minute on some retro shit!

This Lame is Trash. My crew? We say nay to Fags
Treat it like Cruis'n World. You better Pull off if you A Bitch Waving Flags
Nice w/ the iron. Fuck around n put a holeo Bitch
When these Two Arms Go Up? They'll put a Tshirt over ya Head on some Cornholio shit
I'm sick. That nc shirt shit got me feelin swell
Only time YOU'LL be wearing the lime is when I dump POUNDS of it on u to conceal the smell
Fuck this miscreant. Actin like his presence doing us alllll favors
Birch the Only Stripes you Earned are a Few Red Ones after doin Hard Labor
Upper Stratosphere. Your honestly not a cat I fear
Ur like that SpaceX launch
You Shoot for the Stars n Just Break Apart in the Atmosphere
I'm on bs?. Try me. Ur mom is meant 4 a shock
turn ya team into 13 ghosts. But ull be the only Jackal w/ his head in a Box


LOOOOOL Beavis and Butthead throwback was dope, wearing green was still cool but maybe didn't hit as hard as it came after sn00ps here and his was fresher in the mind having read it first? Still nice though, Red Stripe line was illy, SpaceX was solid too as well as the closer here. Muff brought it. You both brought it, guess I just found a likeness for Muffs originality and felt that overpowered that idiom line and Hush ish from sn00ps, that's literally all this came down to for me, who had the marginally weaker misses. Sucks to decide a vote like that but I guess Muff on consistency is what I'm actually leaning towards with the edge?

I'm going with Muff here by a nut hair on a freshly shaven Veritas. Close call. Good battle brethren!

Mr. J 07-06-2015 05:16 PM

i almost hope i lose. college has me looking at books for days...
i've got finals coming up. u look at ur tourney run & wish u COULD relate
a close brawl? watch this clown get decked
yes, this comes down to the wire... or whatever else i got around ur neck
even if someone liked u before... compared to me this guy sucks
& don't blame it on the tourney...
...u've been a shadow of ur former self WAAAY before u signed up


^^^that whole section is flames alone..
I really enjoyed the first half of the verse
you kind of sidestepped with the follow up though
either way I really enjoyed that opening sequence

This Lame is Trash. My crew? We say nay to Fags
Treat it like Cruis'n World. You better Pull off if you A Bitch Waving Flags
Nice w/ the iron. Fuck around n put a holeo Bitch
When these Two Arms Go Up? They'll put a Tshirt over ya Head on some Cornholio shit
I'm sick. That nc shirt shit got me feelin swell
Only time YOU'LL be wearing the lime is when I dump POUNDS of it on u to conceal the smell


along with SpaceX & 13 ghosts was pretty slick as well
this was pretty dope display of some older references..
I enjoyed it just based off of that..

v/This one is actually a tough decision for me because both of you came strong
the best part about it was how the lime shirt came into play, it felt like an actual battle
sn00p's closer was pretty slick and made my chuckle in the moment following...
but...I think I'm going to have to vote for Muff on this one, he came with a string of lines
nice battle fella's

Muff is my choice yo...

Cred 07-06-2015 07:49 PM

Opener, netcees t shirt, & closer

Vs

Waving flags, cornholio, lime, & closer

This was a nice battle here my nigz. Both came wit fiyah imo. I thought snoops netcees t shirt line was nasty. But Muff came a bit more condistent wit the fresh concepts. Opener & cornholio was dope. I fucks wit it.

Vote - Muff

Hush 07-07-2015 08:57 AM

Votes ??

Amen. 07-07-2015 09:20 AM

finals coming up was slick
wire/around your neck is a pretty played concept - seen it flipped to many times.
shadow of former self was cool
light read was ok, think it needed a harder/harsher execution tho
nc shirt was ok
didn't like your closer

vs

cruisin world was ok
holeo even a word? this nigga retarded. bar was wack tho
lime was fire tho
stripes was good
shoot for the stars was ok - seen a few of those concepts flipped tho but think yours was one of the better ones
didn't like your closer

close battle. had to read a few times but 2/3 of the times I was more or so edging this too muff. lol both having nc t shirt concepts, muffs was dope tho and lotb for me.

muff got it


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