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Hush 07-03-2015 05:45 PM

"Killing niggas from the jump = suicide squad" w/ Greed & Cred
 
stay safe on the 4th, u already know

Greed
Cue the eerie music, spooky, fear is boosted as the tunes to your own funeral become clear and lucid,
Here is where the truth is, so fuck u if you not feeling me
My response ability's my responsibility
Im high rapping. god in here with me and ive lost all civility
Though im Lost in the fog im still looking hard for the wishing tree
Picture me trying to Force perfection, Emperor palpatine.
Unfortunately the Porsche was wrecked while I was getting millennium falcon cleaned,
Fanatic as a teen and a bandit for the cream,
el chapo with the hat low I'm the captain of the team



Vic
my niggas bubble, in the kitchen... stove workin them quantam physics
I'd get locked if I got specific but I promise my digits wasn't effected by that lotto ticket
king of the back an forth, and thats cuz when I'm involved no cash is lost
yea I was at my mommas house nigga..it runs in the fam.. I was droppin a package off
niggas heard I'm a uber-driver.. cover story boy.. block still moving I'm the supervisor
ruthless survivor. cotton mouth saliva, cotton candy kush I can't get higher
dominican pops so I'm plugged up dont need suppliers.
couple screws loose. I don't need pliers. Puerto rican Micheal Myers
eyes hide the fire. all the threads I buy are flyer. Brugal in my double cup
double down to double up, SS gang if they dont fuck wit us we fuck it up



Cred

Im a Chiraq drilla, got my nigga doin time for murder. Facts
I kill 16's, he killed & got 16.. Bitch we still BOTH doin murder raps
Servin crack, flow butter, 100 shot drum come wit extra
.. For a bitch like u jus startin to Flex, this chrome .38 gon Stretch ya
Apply pressure.. I'm in beast mode, Steven Siegel flick- I'm the sequel
We not equal, put a round in the middle of dis square.. dats a peep hole
I'm all over my city map, fuk & disrespect ya girl.. I'm a gritty cat
Cuz I'll P on da bitch head ..but I ain't buy her no Phillies hat
Gimmie dat, screamin Suicide dats the team
Beat the fuk outta u like I kno MMA.. & leave ur fukin Pride in the ring

Cred 07-04-2015 02:38 AM

Dope shieeetttt my nigga @Hush

fraze 07-04-2015 03:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hush (Post 500159)
Greed
Cue the eerie music, spooky, fear is boosted as the tunes to your own funeral become clear and lucid,

Picture me trying to Force perfection, Emperor palpatine.
Unfortunately the Porsche was wrecked while I was getting millennium falcon cleaned,


Vic
my niggas bubble, in the kitchen... stove workin them quantam physics
I'd get locked if I got specific but I promise my digits wasn't effected by that lotto ticket


Cred
Im a Chiraq drilla, got my nigga doin time for murder. Facts
I kill 16's, he killed & got 16.. Bitch we still BOTH doin murder raps

Nice shit gentleman. Want to see more flexin on the site.

sral 07-04-2015 04:50 AM

Picture me trying to Force perfection, Emperor palpatine.

that was dope to me from Greed

Hush had the lotto and dropping a package off shit that was straight fire

Cred closed it out illy too with these four

Apply pressure.. I'm in beast mode, Steven Siegel flick- I'm the sequel
We not equal, put a round in the middle of dis square.. dats a peep hole
I'm all over my city map, fuk & disrespect ya girl.. I'm a gritty cat
Cuz I'll P on da bitch head ..but I ain't buy her no Phillies hat

dope shit bruhs

Mr. J 07-09-2015 11:09 AM

My response ability's my responsibility
Im high rapping. god in here with me and ive lost all civility
Though im Lost in the fog im still looking hard for the wishing tree
Picture me trying to Force perfection, Emperor palpatine.

^^^
this was my favorite section off of your verse Greed, the flow was smooth
the line's came together with some slick precision, that opener made me think ehh...
but I read it again and it's pretty dope, the ending was alright, but the verse flowed smoothly

my niggas bubble, in the kitchen... stove workin them quantam physics
I'd get locked if I got specific but I promise my digits wasn't effected by that lotto ticket
king of the back an forth, and thats cuz when I'm involved no cash is lost
yea I was at my mommas house nigga..it runs in the fam.. I was droppin a package off

^^^
that's pretty clean right there, I just enjoy the way you bounce around with the flow
the rest was on point too, I feel like you had the strongest verse here
that ending was pretty smooth as well, nice work man...

Im a Chiraq drilla, got my nigga doin time for murder. Facts
I kill 16's, he killed & got 16.. Bitch we still BOTH doin murder raps

We not equal, put a round in the middle of dis square.. dats a peep hole
I'm all over my city map, fuk & disrespect ya girl.. I'm a gritty cat
Cuz I'll P on da bitch head ..but I ain't buy her no Phillies hat

^^^^
Your verse was as smooth as Hush's, but had it's hit & misses as well
my only issue was the 'not equal line' but I like the rhymes wrapped around it
it sounds good when you first read it because you don't catch it at first
but I never seen a square door aside from a doggy door, which I will give you
dope verse regardless



This was a dope collab, I really enjoy reading collabs because the styles need to mesh
this is more of a crew drop, so I understand you are all showcasing your skills
and all of you have your own dope way of attacking a verse & blending rhymes together
it's enjoyable to read. nice work fella's keep up the suicidal work


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