Dre 0-2 vs Artificial 0-2 - DRE WINS
 

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Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 2nd 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

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• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@Dre @Artificial

10 boi.

check, son.

Yea

Aka amen @Dre

I hope he reach so I can choke this geek.
Only time his name highlighted in the league is if he didn't vote that week.
Back in the day I bet youda done anything to dick suck eminem.
'Now days y'all done forgot about dre'...
cause he never did shit worth remembering.
I won't name names but these lames are a problem here.
Andreas at Fault for opening us up to these flamers at bottom tier.
Someone send this kid help? even then this bitch fail.
You'll never Wendy, I'll smash ur head on the ground till the blood look like pigtails.
Text is ya life. Too bad u got no real skill.
lose a battle n it feel real...
Then u flushing the toilet to drown the sound of the tears like chill Phil.
No pussy getting fgt, u better call me sir.
If a girl says amen, its to thank god u didn't come talk to her
Fuck this bitch and his charts n graphs.
Ill put hands on him till his only daily activity is arts n crafts.

Dawgs...

My hands’ll leave bruises & knots, when let loose they’ll drop this flake,
this battle you’ll find ya’ mark & have a few to choose from, all over ya’ face.
Ya’ niggas get NO pussy, so it’s Bars over Bitches & trust, I respect it dude,
What I can’t respect is;
This pussy strikin bars over bitches heads cuz they won’t have sex w/ you.
But we already know you a lame fucknigga, but this nigga learnin today,
When it comes to fire,
I’ma give’em that crash course that’ll have Paul Walker turn in his grave.

er’body knows I got them gun bars, that’ll easily leave ya jaw in sections,
He could spit every gun bar there is & still not manage to draw attention.
Ya flawed w/ text man. I won’t get TOUCHED by you, so fuck battle scars,
These shot’s to ya’ chest’ll havem harlem shakin worse then Knucks avatar.
You’re WACK w/ bars. Why you return when you just blow w/ the pen?
IDK what got Artery surface, but cut all of yours and never show up again.
Pussy & sorry to tell ya’, Ya girls cheatin’ & don’t wanna stop the games,
Son; whenever Dre beats, she gives you an earful about the chronic pains.

14. Rest e/z, nigga.

Opener

Vs

Opener, sex w/ you, artery, closer

V/ Dre was pretty consistent. A couple of Arts WP were a little iffy IMO. Didn't like Andreas because of the wording & Wendy would have been better the pig tail part ruined, a different reference I probably would have quoted it but even still, Dre wins

Artificial: opener was cool.

Vs

Dre: All over your face, draw attention, knucks avatar.

Overall: I felt artificial was going to come with a pretty good verse just by looking at his closer.. But that's kind of all he had.. Dre's verse was dope.. A couple plays and misses but good overall.

Vote: dre for a better verse overall

Amen

My hands’ll leave bruises & knots, when let loose they’ll drop this flake,
this battle you’ll find ya’ mark & have a few to choose from, all over ya’ face.

Ya flawed w/ text man. I won’t get TOUCHED by you, so fuck battle scars,
These shot’s to ya’ chest’ll havem harlem shakin worse then Knucks avatar.
You’re WACK w/ bars. Why you return when you just blow w/ the pen?
IDK what got Artery surface, but cut all of yours and never show up again.
Pussy & sorry to tell ya’, Ya girls cheatin’ & don’t wanna stop the games,
Son; whenever Dre beats, she gives you an earful about the chronic pains.


Art

I hope he reach so I can choke this geek.
Only time his name highlighted in the league is if he didn't vote that week.

I won't name names but these lames are a problem here.
Andreas at Fault for OPENING us up to these flamers at bottom tier.

No pussy getting fgt, u better call me sir.
If a girl says amen, its to thank god u didn't come talk to her


This was a nice battle... Art's structure is so choppy but I won't fault him cause we can't expect everybody to text the same, the Andreas wordplay was clean and the Amen line was funny and done well your best two bars. Amen dropped a cool verse that Artery wordplay and whole bar was flames it was BOTB and that knucks avi line was funny as fuck... the beats was almost a miss but it had just enough tie in to push it over the top... I got Amen with one more quote for the win though

I hope he reach so I can choke this geek.
Only time his name highlighted in the league is if he didn't vote that week.
Heh okay

Back in the day I bet youda done anything to dick suck eminem.
'Now days y'all done forgot about dre'...
cause he never did shit worth remembering.
Sketchy wording but okay line

I won't name names but these lames are a problem here.
Andreas at Fault for opening us up to these flamers at bottom tier.
Awesome idea. Should have tied it in more.

Someone send this kid help? even then this bitch fail.
You'll never Wendy, I'll smash ur head on the ground till the blood look like pigtails.
Stretch

Text is ya life. Too bad u got no real skill.
lose a battle n it feel real...
Then u flushing the toilet to drown the sound of the tears like chill Phil.
Lol

No pussy getting fgt, u better call me sir.
If a girl says amen, its to thank god u didn't come talk to her
Is dre amen?

Fuck this bitch and his charts n graphs.
Ill put hands on him till his only daily activity is arts n crafts.
Ehh. Not terrible but this could have been something crazy.



My hands’ll leave bruises & knots, when let loose they’ll drop this flake,
this battle you’ll find ya’ mark & have a few to choose from, all over ya’ face.
Lol

Ya’ niggas get NO pussy, so it’s Bars over Bitches & trust, I respect it dude,
What I can’t respect is;
This pussy strikin bars over bitches heads cuz they won’t have sex w/ you.
Rough wording but okay

But we already know you a lame fucknigga, but this nigga learnin today,
When it comes to fire,
I’ma give’em that crash course that’ll have Paul Walker turn in his grave.
Okay

Quote:

Originally Posted byArtificial

I got more guns than anyone on this board. Promise

er’body knows I got them gun bars, that’ll easily leave ya jaw in sections,
He could spit every gun bar there is & still not manage to draw attention.
Draw is the connection? Weak

Ya flawed w/ text man. I won’t get TOUCHED by you, so fuck battle scars,
These shot’s to ya’ chest’ll havem harlem shakin worse then Knucks avatar.
Heh

You’re WACK w/ bars. Why you return when you just blow w/ the pen?
IDK what got Artery surface, but cut all of yours and never show up again.
Ha sick

Pussy & sorry to tell ya’, Ya girls cheatin’ & don’t wanna stop the games,
Son; whenever Dre beats, she gives you an earful about the chronic pains.
Lol nice

Good read

V dre

I hope he reach so I can choke this geek.
Only time his name highlighted in the league is if he didn't vote that week.
old school feel... I fuck wit it
Back in the day I bet youda done anything to dick suck eminem.
'Now days y'all done forgot about dre'...
cause he never did shit worth remembering.
ok, not worded well enough wit that easy a concept though
I won't name names but these lames are a problem here.
Andreas at Fault for opening us up to these flamers at bottom tier.
cool. the wordplay solid, thought the end of the line coulda been tougher
Someone send this kid help? even then this bitch fail.
You'll never Wendy, I'll smash ur head on the ground till the blood look like pigtails.
ehhhh... nah
Text is ya life. Too bad u got no real skill.
lose a battle n it feel real...
Then u flushing the toilet to drown the sound of the tears like chill Phil.
I'm missin the reference here, sorry. flow on point though
No pussy getting fgt, u better call me sir.
If a girl says amen, its to thank god u didn't come talk to her
thought my version a cpl wks back was better... not fresh, but not terrible
Fuck this bitch and his charts n graphs.
Ill put hands on him till his only daily activity is arts n crafts.
this one just didn't have enough complexity or sting

vs.

My hands’ll leave bruises & knots, when let loose they’ll drop this flake,
this battle you’ll find ya’ mark & have a few to choose from, all over ya’ face.
cool tie in here... nice start
Ya’ niggas get NO pussy, so it’s Bars over Bitches & trust, I respect it dude,
What I can’t respect is;
This pussy strikin bars over bitches heads cuz they won’t have sex w/ you.
this isn't a personal right? maybe I'm missin somethin but not really feelin it
But we already know you a lame fucknigga, but this nigga learnin today,
When it comes to fire,
I’ma give’em that crash course that’ll have Paul Walker turn in his grave.
paul walker my nigga? nah... tired concept & wording sucked here
er’body knows I got them gun bars, that’ll easily leave ya jaw in sections,
He could spit every gun bar there is & still not manage to draw attention.
ok... not the best concept but execution was there
Ya flawed w/ text man. I won’t get TOUCHED by you, so fuck battle scars,
These shot’s to ya’ chest’ll havem harlem shakin worse then Knucks avatar.
decent
You’re WACK w/ bars. Why you return when you just blow w/ the pen?
IDK what got Artery surface, but cut all of yours and never show up again.
whaaaaat? this is dope man
Pussy & sorry to tell ya’, Ya girls cheatin’ & don’t wanna stop the games,
Son; whenever Dre beats, she gives you an earful about the chronic pains.
solid finish... had a Dre Beats concept for you I scrapped, this was better

okay... Amen can actually write some quality bars I guess
Marks was nice, dre beats good, Artery surface was fire man that was the one. lotb.
Artificial had the opener... I liked that... a couple other that were cool but not enough here

Nice verse dreMen. Put this level of effort (or more) into your verses from now on & you good

V/ Amen

Opener, Andreas

Vs

Opener, artery, knuck's avy

Paul walker was an almost. Cool battle. Dre was a bit more consistent here so he gets it. Art came pretty nice tho with the exception of a couple lines like Amen. Cool battle.

Dre

Art

Didn't think ur opener was that great but still slightly hit.
For a dre bar that was weak.. Suck em's dick? Corny to me
Andreas was a nice np.. I thought u did enuff with the bar n it hit well
Win d, can't stand 1 letter np's
Honestly I didn't get the chill phill, explain that to me
Amen bar was weak, played af
Closer was extremely light

Overall alotta misses some couple good ideas but nothing really harsh


Dre

Opener was cool but multis were off
I like bars over bitches thought that shit was dope
Paul walker wss ook, turn in grave is played but with crash course/Paul walker I guess it's fresh
Gun bars/draw was ooook
Harlem shaking was dope
Art to resurface was sick
See this dre beats was dope af


Overall very consistent n creative, some hard hits n a more agressive attack than art had, better executed verse n easily took this.. Still an enjoyable read from both

Dre

Dope shit by both here

Rep sent