Scrypt 0-0 vs Odd Ways 0-0 - ODD WAYS
 

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 2nd 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@SCRYPT @Odd Ways

Here 10

Okay

Your the softest fuck here, the hero shit you try makes me snicker
Cuz every time u pulled the hammer u failed, harder than tony stark from the avengers
Him ballin? Well I'll kidnap ya kids n leave the note for ya lame chick
Home or not, I'll have JR come up missing like the NBA finals Game 6
This wack fuck needs luck, time to get his game tight
Cuz if he pulls a shamrock, I'll put em down quicker than a right from Kimbo Slice
This battle is a crime, I shoulnt waste bars on this fag
Him beating me ain't just a robbery, it's a heist w/ some presidential masks
It's a given I'll merk em, punchline'll clean this nigga no jokin
Cuz this pussy does so much talkin instead fighting, he could rival w/ Joe Rogan

@SCRYPT

Don't even pretend, u hurting a fly just another one of ur lies
You see having the exact same look as piggy doesn't make u lord of the flies
It only proven u're fat & ugly.. ain't not chick wanna get to know u son
if u ever see odd n Marie.. You already know there's nothing special going on
As for ur punchlines don't ever land.. they normally crash during every attempt
Your set up way below average & ur concepts not more than twenty percent
So how is this lame gonna rip me apart & send me to hell
Dude u're not only considered whack u also look like u have got plenty for sell
On some g shit, I carry around this little 22 will leave him dead on sight
I'll have so many bullets going sideways u would think am shooting left & right

Odd ways

Opener ehh didn't rhyme
Jr/junior was ooook
Jumbo slices, shamrock coulda been better,
I think u coulda referenced robbery better, presidential masks should a had point break in it or sum
Closer was ok

Scrypt

Opener ehh
Odd n Marie idk I didn't get it
Below average was light
Considered Wack was ehh
Closer ok attempt


Ok I got odd here with a tad more consistency, not really feeling the executions in this battle but the concepts were there.. Turned out pretty close with alotta misses but odd had better creativity.. Executed his bars better too


Odd ways

JR was ok
I enjoyed your flip on robbery

vs

closer was close but more of a flex

Scrypt has a lot of potential. seems like he has the battling mechanics down, just needs to work on better concepts with harsher executions and he'll be good. Odd is rusty lol. 2 Bars I quoted were ok, robbery was legit, I liked it even tho I've seen that flipped a few times...

Odd Ways got it

Your the softest fuck here, the hero shit you try makes me snicker
Cuz every time u pulled the hammer u failed, harder than tony stark from the avengers
\\ cool
Him ballin? Well I'll kidnap ya kids n leave the note for ya lame chick
Home or not, I'll have JR come up missing like the NBA finals Game 6
\\ aight
This wack fuck needs luck, time to get his game tight
Cuz if he pulls a shamrock, I'll put em down quicker than a right from Kimbo Slice
\\ ehh.
This battle is a crime, I shoulnt waste bars on this fag
Him beating me ain't just a robbery, it's a heist w/ some presidential masks
// like the concept i think, the rhyming is iffy.
It's a given I'll merk em, punchline'll clean this nigga no jokin
Cuz this pussy does so much talkin instead fighting, he could rival w/ Joe Rogan
// i liked this




Don't even pretend, u hurting a fly just another one of ur lies
You see having the exact same look as piggy doesn't make u lord of the flies
// i get the ref but meh
It only proven u're fat & ugly.. ain't not chick wanna get to know u son
if u ever see odd n Marie.. You already know there's nothing special going on
\\ eh
As for ur punchlines don't ever land.. they normally crash during every attempt
Your set up way below average & ur concepts not more than twenty percent
\\ not feelin it
So how is this lame gonna rip me apart & send me to hell
Dude u're not only considered whack u also look like u have got plenty for sell
// say what?
On some g shit, I carry around this little 22 will leave him dead on sight
I'll have so many bullets going sideways u would think am shooting left & right
// i see what you were going for


v/ odd ways, landslide

Aye this wasn't close odd ways took this with a pretty generic post whereas scrypt had a verse full of grammer issue and punches that wetent hard hitting by any means so overall vote/odd ways

Yeah Odd Ways got this, Scrypt had a few decent ideas but nothing that came off as particularly hard hitting or funny. I'm sure it will come, it's just that right now he has wording issues and that's ultimately what cost him here. Odd Ways is maybe shaking a little ring rust off, but he still had enough in the tank to take this one.

Odd Ways got it.

Keep those pens moving!