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my dopest song yet
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hey i liked this. slow depressing solid. you use some pretty hard rhymes tho. the whole bedroom heckled special etc, it all rhymes sonically even tho it aint like a perfect rhyme, but i feel you over emphasise them a little to make them sound like they rhyme better instead of just spitting it if that makes sense
also some words could be dropped, like my friends are dead DUDE, dude isn't needed. granted on paper it looks better cuz it rhymes with bedroom and heckled and shit, its two syllables, but you could just say some of my friends are dead, and im living out life in my bedroom. but word minor tweaks and shit that comes from how its written to how you can spit it where it sounds like a comfortable free formed thought but its solid BRO |
Reminded me of kid cudi
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Thanks for the feed. I'm finding my musical self. Getting comfortable |
Yoy fucking know I got u
I got company I got to pretend I'm not a recluse So soon as they leave I'm bumpin sum phillipe I'm on the toilet right now coz even when I have company I hide from pplz |
I like that beat bro lol
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Yo Ima bump this in the whip, gonna sound mad dope comin out the subs
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Muff got people over
Logs into nc from bathroom LMAO I just cant |
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not at my own place, but like when your girl drags you out to her friend's housewarming party by the lake and it's a huge group of mutual friends you don't know and she's doing a shit job of keeping you in the convo everyone's dead dick sober and you already know you won't be able to chime in until people are feeling tipsy and forget they're trying to be NE yuppies who only own boat shoes and ascots meanwhile you slugged a steel reserve in the car, you're already hungover and it's not even noon. These clowns are tryna serve brioche and I don't even know what that shit consists of let alone how to pronounce it, but it sure as fuck isn't gonna keep me from having an extended internet adventure on their marble shitter while the subject lingers on boat payment plans and Huntington's disease or some shit |
U damn fuckin lucky it wasn't me fuckboy. After I cut u off at the pump dive cut ur fuckin heart out. Lol buy u a pretzel. Idve gon inside and bought 10 bucks of gas an emptied the entire pump onto ur skinny frame while I hummed the kill bill bang bang song. Then I'd flick a match onto u an just before ur skin melted off ur pathetic bones I'd bash ur stupid fuckin head in with a rock while screaming death chants into the hole that used to be ur miserable face. Fuckin wawa. Go fuck urself u piece of shit.
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I wish my scenario was that cool but it isn't split
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Yeah this nigga Bags look like he only put 10 on gas
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I like this
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