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Geno 06-28-2015 04:53 PM

straight shittin'
 
One shit at a time, the city is mine
Override, citizens die, get in the line
Insidious mind, this is goodbye, no kiss
equipped, my buzz like a locust
songs all hits, iron fist, with no wrist
i exist in the blink of an eye
between being blind..
and the time it takes images to define
the primitive mind, saw a glimpse when it blinked
killed'em all, left the missing linkage extinct
my shines brilliant indeed, simply unique
Hypnotized albert einsteins interest in me
Erase history, its crystal clean, see if it repeats..

dead man 06-28-2015 06:17 PM

iron fist, with no wrist

ooh

sral 06-29-2015 02:21 AM

i exist in the blink of an eye
between being blind..
and the time it takes images to define

Thought that was dope, reminded me of some Wu Tang ish. You writing to get through this slump you were talking about being in musically?

Best way out of it IMHO is to write through it, keep everything, read through again when you have that groove back and find some hidden gems back there in the work!

Keep that pen moving!

Hush 06-29-2015 05:37 PM

this shit fire. well played

Mr. J 07-02-2015 03:13 PM

this was some dope out the box shit Geno...
some of that less toilet paper summer day hot shit...
but word for the length it was, it came off smooth
LMAO, but here's a bump man..
this shit needs more views...

Geno 10-31-2019 02:41 AM

Word thanks guys. Had forgotten about this. Been down a while just stumbled on it. I REALLY want to write again i just never push myself to use my spare time to do so. I need you guys man.


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