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Wanderer 4-4 vs Junto 4-2 - JUNTO WINS
Netcees Battle League Season VIII Rules Due Dates:
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For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes Good luck! @Wanderer @Junto |
sup... 12 good?
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Should be fine, definitely gonna need the ext.
New job, hectic week That cool? |
yea that's straight
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Fuck an extension, just gonna key
I'm a fire breathing beast.. how you gon win? That's a conundrum This nerds beats off to role playing games so you'll understand when this dragon's done jun Pussy in a lions den. 4 W's? I'm about to go Hannibal Safari's king of the park? Only if you tranquillised every other animal Who the fuck are you? It won't be nothin to put you in a hearse after I load that Calendar shooter ya moms'll be circling ya funeral in hers Bitch all ya supporters'll get lit up like cigarette paper Yeah I've heard jun's got shady followers.. even his silhouette's a hater & Stop playin a cock like a flute. get one between the eyes ya fruit I'll raise arms cos I'm homophobic you can call it a nazi salute & I'll give you my Location if you wanna test me runnin' ya mouth Try n Com'pass me & I'll bury pieces of you North, East, West & South South |
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sorry...
You got no clout, that's it. I mean you nearly got knocked out by Alpo's shit He focused on the hair & now ya got ya first real win!!! ...but back to the here & now I'm bout to scalp you bitch Fuck ya fake ass retorts, you ain't a harden'd criminal in no shape or no sort Not harden'd at all. 'cept how the fuzz do a lot to cover up ur face in them courts I could restructure your style, feed you some concepts and help you improve in this a Wand is powerful wit a wizard's direction... But obviously otherwise you ain't doin shit U got trouble wit gas. Throw a cpl that catch but the rest of ya punches r trash .....that tire pattern is why they'll be checkin your torso & my truck for a match Nah let a few cement blocks do the trick - & all of ur blood get mopped up quick See, the only body issue I got? is the newest edition featurin some US soccer chick The best nickname is when it's real life that spawns it my friend. & Wanderer's a great one... ur off the beaten path 1 week, then right back on it again |
I'm a fire breathing beast.. how you gon win? That's a conundrum
This nerds beats off to role playing games so you'll understand when this dragon's done jun ^dun-jin but jun-to for me. so this doesn't work. Pussy in a lions den. 4 W's? I'm about to go Hannibal Safari's king of the park? Only if you tranquillised every other animal ^so far he's? okay, i can make that work. decent Who the fuck are you? It won't be nothin to put you in a hearse after I load that Calendar shooter ya moms'll be circling ya funeral in hers ^cal in da? oookay. have to stretch it but okay Bitch all ya supporters'll get lit up like cigarette paper Yeah I've heard jun's got shady followers.. even his silhouette's a hater ^mb i'm missing smth here. or is the connection just silhouette/shadow? hm. & Stop playin a cock like a flute. get one between the eyes ya fruit I'll raise arms cos I'm homophobic you can call it a nazi salute ^okay. i don't think i've actually ever seen it flipped like this. cool & I'll give you my Location if you wanna test me runnin' ya mouth Try n Com'pass me & I'll bury pieces of you North, East, West & South ^okay. idk. this might be played. cant remember seeing it tho. giving u the benefit of the doubt. solid closer man. this was a pretty decent verse. u've been stepping it up lately. watch out for played shit tho. some of ur lines felt familiar even tho i'm not sure i've seen 'em. vs. You got no clout, that's it. I mean you nearly got knocked out by Alpo's shit He focused on the hair & now ya got ya first real win!!! ...but back to the here & now I'm bout to scalp you bitch ^hm. i feel like u coulda executed this cleaner. decent Fuck ya fake ass retorts, you ain't a harden'd criminal in no shape or no sort Not harden'd at all. 'cept how the fuzz do a lot to cover up ur face in them courts ^okay, so the police cover his face in the court room cuz he's a snitch? but what's the wp or connection w/ harden'd then? sry. i thought about this for two solid minutes, but i don't get it I could restructure your style, feed you some concepts and help you improve in this a Wand is powerful wit a wizard's direction... But obviously otherwise you ain't doin shit ^uhm, i see where u're going but u maybe cud'a related to the wizard part in the setup more or smth? idk, felt a bit basic U got trouble wit gas. Throw a cpl that catch but the rest of ya punches r trash .....that tire pattern is why they'll be checkin your torso & my truck for a match ^nice execution. not bad Nah let a few cement blocks do the trick - & all of ur blood get mopped up quick See, the only body issue I got? is the newest edition featurin some US soccer chick ^aite The best nickname is when it's real life that spawns it my friend. & Wanderer's a great one... ur off the beaten path 1 week, then right back on it again ^beaten path as in he was beaten every other wk cuz his rec's 4-4? okay, that works. but is isn't the hardest-hitting line. still solid i have jun's last 6 vs safari, raise arms & compass. this is pretty close. i can see ppl voting for either. i rly dunno who to vote for. jun felt fresher, but some of his lines were kinda basic. wand had better connection, but sometimes the wp felt forced and like i said, things cud be played. dont recall seeing em tho. so yea. i think i'll give it to jun in a close one. this was a cool read so props to both. and this is rly close. i can see ppl voting for wanderer too, based on their preference. good battle. v/jun |
I'm a fire breathing beast.. how you gon win? That's a conundrum
This nerds beats off to role playing games so you'll understand when this dragon's done jun Expected more Pussy in a lions den. 4 W's? I'm about to go Hannibal Safari's king of the park? Only if you tranquillised every other animal Weak connection Who the fuck are you? It won't be nothin to put you in a hearse after I load that Calendar shooter ya moms'll be circling ya funeral in hers Ehh Bitch all ya supporters'll get lit up like cigarette paper Yeah I've heard jun's got shady followers.. even his silhouette's a hater Lol & Stop playin a cock like a flute. get one between the eyes ya fruit I'll raise arms cos I'm homophobic you can call it a nazi salute Weird setup & I'll give you my Location if you wanna test me runnin' ya mouth Try n Com'pass me & I'll bury pieces of you North, East, West & South Solid You got no clout, that's it. I mean you nearly got knocked out by Alpo's shit He focused on the hair & now ya got ya first real win!!! ...but back to the here & now I'm bout to scalp you bitch Ehh Fuck ya fake ass retorts, you ain't a harden'd criminal in no shape or no sort Not harden'd at all. 'cept how the fuzz do a lot to cover up ur face in them courts Okay I could restructure your style, feed you some concepts and help you improve in this a Wand is powerful wit a wizard's direction... But obviously otherwise you ain't doin shit Should have done more with this U got trouble wit gas. Throw a cpl that catch but the rest of ya punches r trash .....that tire pattern is why they'll be checkin your torso & my truck for a match Okay. Didnt work all ways but okay line. Nah let a few cement blocks do the trick - & all of ur blood get mopped up quick See, the only body issue I got? is the newest edition featurin some US soccer chick Okay The best nickname is when it's real life that spawns it my friend. & Wanderer's a great one... ur off the beaten path 1 week, then right back on it again Ehh I expected more from both of you. V wand Hella misses from both. Giving it to wand for slightly harder hitting connections. |
Opener
Vs Tire pattern and closer Decent battle. Seen both come better than this. Junto did enough for the win here with that tire pattern bar, I liked that one. Junto got it |
Fuck ya fake ass retorts, you ain't a harden'd criminal in no shape or no sort
Not harden'd at all. 'cept how the fuzz do a lot to cover up ur face in them courts U got trouble wit gas. Throw a cpl that catch but the rest of ya punches r trash .....that tire pattern is why they'll be checkin your torso & my truck for a match Nah let a few cement blocks do the trick - & all of ur blood get mopped up quick See, the only body issue I got? is the newest edition featurin some US soccer chic Vs Who the fuck are you? It won't be nothin to put you in a hearse after I load that Calendar shooter ya moms'll be circling ya funeral in hers V/jun, decent battle wand is gettin better but jun was more consistent here he had 2 more solid quotes that were cool, i8 only quoted ones i thought were real good theres other that i coulda but props to both. |
I'm a fire breathing beast.. how you gon win? That's a conundrum
This nerds beats off to role playing games so you'll understand when this dragon's done jun flip doesn't really work for me, never hear it pronounced 'jin' Pussy in a lions den. 4 W's? I'm about to go Hannibal Safari's king of the park? Only if you tranquillised every other animal alright Who the fuck are you? It won't be nothin to put you in a hearse after I load that Calendar shooter ya moms'll be circling ya funeral in hers calendar kinda works but the tail end of this punchline doesn't totally work for me... like the way Calendar was tied in wasn't totally effective imo Bitch all ya supporters'll get lit up like cigarette paper Yeah I've heard jun's got shady followers.. even his silhouette's a hater simple but cool & Stop playin a cock like a flute. get one between the eyes ya fruit I'll raise arms cos I'm homophobic you can call it a nazi salute works as a light jab but nothing really big here & I'll give you my Location if you wanna test me runnin' ya mouth Try n Com'pass me & I'll bury pieces of you North, East, West & South South I like it You got no clout, that's it. I mean you nearly got knocked out by Alpo's shit He focused on the hair & now ya got ya first real win!!! ...but back to the here & now I'm bout to scalp you bitch nahh Fuck ya fake ass retorts, you ain't a harden'd criminal in no shape or no sort Not harden'd at all. 'cept how the fuzz do a lot to cover up ur face in them courts cool idea but not too harsh delivery I could restructure your style, feed you some concepts and help you improve in this a Wand is powerful wit a wizard's direction... But obviously otherwise you ain't doin shit cool U got trouble wit gas. Throw a cpl that catch but the rest of ya punches r trash .....that tire pattern is why they'll be checkin your torso & my truck for a match ok Nah let a few cement blocks do the trick - & all of ur blood get mopped up quick See, the only body issue I got? is the newest edition featurin some US soccer chick cool The best nickname is when it's real life that spawns it my friend. & Wanderer's a great one... ur off the beaten path 1 week, then right back on it again cool surprisingly close. Wanderer improved a lot and I thought he had it til I read the second half of jun's verse. Junto was a little more consistent but wanderer has a handle on it and tbh I wouldn't sleep on him again cause he keeps this up he will surprise v/junto tho 4-1 junto |
Junto
Opener ok fuzz eh. Wordings well but eh wand. Seen alot of these tire pattern is dirty body issue cool closer dope Wand it's June toe. Mistake safari I did this wp back on the day but ur flip is pretty cool Calendar. Something about this I don't like. I can't even put my finger on it. Execution? This us a weird one Shady is ok...check how much better it wud have been if u just put the word but befor even...with the comedic timing u already have w/ the ellipses. Promise it wud have been better nazi salute decent I guess I pronounce compass as come piss but I can see this working too. Nice Jun last 6 vs safari n closer V/ Jun by a quote Cool shit |
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Vote: Junto |
Dungeon had potential, fell flat as is tho.
vs wizards direction was good tire pattern was solid Junto go it |
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