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Bust 1-1 vs Trag. 1-2 - BUST WINS BY DQ
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For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes Good luck! @Bust @Trag. |
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He ain't holding Guap, smoking rocks got his bank flattened, On some beginner shit, it's why ur cash flow like broken blocks dawg.. it ain't stackin, N when he see my doe he wanna be my bro, droolin over half a stack But I told u 6000 times when I rip out ya spine..I'll have ya back Quit the faggit act, I'll pull a knife but first spit till snot hits this dudes cheek Then put the blade in ya mouth as phlegm makes its way out...that's hawk in a loogie I'm poppin a toolie, got glocks n them uzis what u thought this a movie? CRIMES REAL! n I know u stay cooped up in ya room but damn, chickens see alot mo than you, b U the only homo lurking, so either drop or log off, that phony pose don't work, g Talk tough n my click'll surround ur upper body wit 9's like a Tony Romo jersey My hommies show no mercy, n u might trade shots but with aim off ur nothin, fam See u can buck cans, but when ur targets missed shouldn't ur focus be ur Fuckin cants' I trust u to show, wait, hed rather have a popular opponent then get it on wit bust, Hey @Sharp since he's lookin for a big name, I think iamrhetoric is long enuff |
mom wished u were a titty fuck, a stream rollin down her neck
u never measured up in life...the only GOOD bust belongs around her chest ill flip that line again, n have the ruger getchya slumped wit ease the gun buxom bitches - other words stretch bust like some big double d's watch me make a prediction how the leagues in for the worse... cause we all caught a glimpse of the wk 14, just from skimming that verse ya name inspires nothin but doubt, too crazy for fuckin around voters yell "Trag wins", even muff had a bad taste with a nut bust in his mouth seen what this fgt writes? ya have the baddest wife, i cant deny she came over to borrow my sugar, daddy - n b4 I left she gave my saccharide set fire to his squad, wont have anyone left to carry ya casket I'll dustbust... then have what's left of ya homies vacuum up the ashes just shut it down. pump off tha holster, left slumped on ya sofa after i dump tre's its all vegetables in a bag....so you KNOW the parties over |
Bust
opener. Simplistic but ok I guess. A money punch. Eh I'll have ya back really played bro hawk n a loogie was a cool visual. Not hard but sum Kool horror core shit. #Larkin coop good flow. Prolly be good live. It's ok as I'm reading it Tony romo. Don't like lines like this. Could use anyone who wears #9 Not feeling cants. Think I missed sumthin closer was kinda weird. I dint get wat they had to do w/ it other than long name. Iono bust I've seen u come better. Interesting verse but I think u dropped the ball w/ the back line and closer Trag open ok buxom ..cool wp. Big ass boobies kinda cheesy but concept is nice lol at bust in my mouth. Yall never gon let me live huh sack a ride was cool too nm follow soot was eh. The dust trail shit was ehhhh. I thought u were goin in another direction closer was eh Pretty good. Picked up steam in the middle I got Trag here by lookin at my breakdown Cool shit fellas V/trag Wait did u edit that bust line Coz now it look gay wtf? Lmaaaao Why is nut in there Now u mk my vote look gay it's a subtle change. |
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but trag had better technical skill dudes was even on concepts and lines but trag was way cleaner dope punches can beat a better put together verse imho but bust aint have enough new shit v trag |
He ain't holding Guap, smoking rocks got his bank flattened,
On some beginner shit, it's why ur cash flow like broken blocks dawg.. it ain't stackin, meh N when he see my doe he wanna be my bro, droolin over half a stack But I told u 6000 times when I rip out ya spine..I'll have ya back kinda meh too Quit the faggit act, I'll pull a knife but first spit till snot hits this dudes cheek Then put the blade in ya mouth as phlegm makes its way out...that's hawk in a loogie good I'm poppin a toolie, got glocks n them uzis what u thought this a movie? CRIMES REAL! n I know u stay cooped up in ya room but damn, chickens see alot mo than you, b okay U the only homo lurking, so either drop or log off, that phony pose don't work, g Talk tough n my click'll surround ur upper body wit 9's like a Tony Romo jersey i feel you My hommies show no mercy, n u might trade shots but with aim off ur nothin, fam See u can buck cans, but when ur targets missed shouldn't ur focus be ur Fuckin cants' bruh I trust u to show, wait, hed rather have a popular opponent then get it on wit bust, Hey @Sharp since he's lookin for a big name, I think iamrhetoric is long enuff makes no sense but set it up if you wun beef bruh trag mom wished u were a titty fuck, a stream rollin down her neck u never measured up in life...the only GOOD bust belongs around her chest good ill flip that line again, n have the ruger getchya slumped wit ease the gun buxom bitches - other words stretch bust like some big double d's lmao okay watch me make a prediction how the leagues in for the worse... cause we all caught a glimpse of the wk 14, just from skimming that verse meh ya name inspires nothin but doubt, too crazy for fuckin around voters yell "Trag wins", even muff had a bad taste with a bust-nut in his mouth uh wut seen what this fgt writes? ya have the baddest wife, i cant deny she came over to borrow my sugar, daddy - n b4 I left she gave my saccharide why do you even know that word lol set fire to his squad, wont have anyone left to carry the casket I'll bang bust then have ya homies follow soot, except 1 who'll bury the ashes pause just shut it down. pump off tha holster, left slumped on ya sofa after i dump tre's its all vegetables in a bag....so you KNOW the parties over okay v/ Trag Trag was way consistent but went homo like halfway through his verse |
Quit the faggit act, I'll pull a knife but first spit till snot hits this dudes cheek
Then put the blade in ya mouth as phlegm makes its way out...that's hawk in a loogie vs. mom wished u were a titty fuck, a stream rollin down her neck u never measured up in life...the only GOOD bust belongs around her chest watch me make a prediction how the leagues in for the worse... cause we all caught a glimpse of the wk 14, just from skimming that verse seen what this fgt writes? ya have the baddest wife, i cant deny she came over to borrow my sugar, daddy - n b4 I left she gave my saccharide These were all solid to me... Hawk in a loogie was a little off conceptually but decent. Good bust kinda predictable, still cool. Week 14 kinda old but not bad & saccharide I liked. Bust had some bars too that I thought needed work on concepts - blocks, spine, closer... Trag didn't connect on everything but overall the ideas & wording were more polished. V/ Tragic |
Quit the faggit act, I'll pull a knife but first spit till snot hits this dudes cheek
Then put the blade in ya mouth as phlegm makes its way out...that's hawk in a loogie U the only homo lurking, so either drop or log off, that phony pose don't work, g Talk tough n my click'll surround ur upper body wit 9's like a Tony Romo jersey vs. mom wished u were a titty fuck, a stream rollin down her neck u never measured up in life...the only GOOD bust belongs around her chest ill flip that line again, n have the ruger getchya slumped wit ease the gun buxom bitches - other words stretch bust like some big double d's seen what this fgt writes? ya have the baddest wife, i cant deny she came over to borrow my sugar, daddy - n b4 I left she gave my saccharide bust had some more solid ideas (like his closer) that woulda been pretty dope w/ a slightly better execution. trag had rly good execution but some lines felt kinda played, like wk 14. this was a good read tho. i was kinda picky w/ quotes. so yea, props to both. but i got trag kinda clearly, based on consistency and delivery. v/trag |
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This was a cool battle but I feel like Bust had worse misses and Trag had better concepts in general. Looking forward to reading more from both of you. Vote: Trag. |
Bust has a style I like better than the majority of text heads, seems more the OTBVA/RMBVA type but I like it
Hawk in a loogie was dope Closer I liked too actually, shot like the 'got ya back' line are played out though and sadly you had more of those than you did lines I liked here not bad at all though, I'd def peep for you again Trags first four were nice, liked DustBust too as well as his closer I've got Trag winning this one, he was just more consistent with more lines I liked and less I thought were played good battle fellas! |
Quit the faggit act, I'll pull a knife but first spit till snot hits this dudes cheek
Then put the blade in ya mouth as phlegm makes its way out...that's hawk in a loogie U the only homo lurking, so either drop or log off, that phony pose don't work, g Talk tough n my click'll surround ur upper body wit 9's like a Tony Romo jersey Vs ill flip that line again, n have the ruger getchya slumped wit ease the gun buxom bitches - other words stretch bust like some big double d's seen what this fgt writes? ya have the baddest wife, i cant deny she came over to borrow my sugar, daddy - n b4 I left she gave my saccharide set fire to his squad, wont have anyone left to carry ya casket I'll dustbust... then have what's left of ya homies vacuum up the ashes V/trag, this was a good battle tbh, bust has alot of potential tbh that romo line imo was dope, but i think trag was just alot more consistent here & that dustbust line was hard...enjoyed reading this one, props to both. |
wtffffffff trag changed a bar after muff voted
Bust wins by DQ all votes placed are appreciated lmaoooooooooo |
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