Artificial 0-0 Vs Maximus 0-0 - MAX WINS
 

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, June 18th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Artificial @Maximus

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Check...12?

Aight

U ugly af. Imma surgeon with the blade, friend...
Take a knife to Maximize..the effect of never seeing ur face again.
His fam sad cus they got a wack text battling son...
I especially feel bad for maxima..cause i just run her over with one.
I'm bout to get violent. U had to poke the thug.
I run thru Maxipad..and leave the whole thing soaked in blood.
Fuck with me? U must be a fear junky...
Ill have this bitch shitting himself more than Phil Dunphey.
Ur a disgrace to netcees. If u look closely...
This wack faggots name is at the top of Lyrs OP.
Shadow boxing? I'm heavy handed, got the right cocked...
Fight u in rain or snow..then leave u bleeding in it like the nights watch.

Quick key
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I'll fire rockets into your dome, u're shook and u're feeble
Da way I'll leave Missals in that Temple it's like prayerbooks in cathedrals
You don't write dope lyrics, this pussy is so timid
They say Art imitates Life.. Well, that's cos they're both bitches
Spurted semen on your girl's pubic hair, I left your boo raped
I came hard on that Bush like Snoop spitting ill on his new tape
U aint a smart dude, u're the wackest dork
So fuck robots, only link b/w Artificial & Intelligence is this rat's report
Thug?? U've never been charged for beating folks, u're corny as hell
If u got a case of Assault & Battery, it's a packet of sodium chloride & cell
Your concepts are old and u flip played lines, this herb's pathetic
Fuck the trash u Rote.. U're more repetitive than that learning method

Artificial

Thot the concept not the wp was Forced . I've said it like 5 times outloud n still isn't resonating w/ me . Maxim eyes? That's a segmented nameplay. Not a fan of those if it isn't two separate words Or a syllable break in the name like max (which is ok) I.e oor sho nps on murda sho.

Maxima was eh tbh. the rhyme itself was craP. Text battling son. Ran her over with one. One syllable diode shit.

Maxipad was muuuch better

Moar of this plz

Shit ting himself ehh.. Karas interpretation is better

Lyrs ...which thread? That one I dont get

Fight in rain and snow? phrase is outlandish

Not really but it's ok I guess.



Maximus
ok. But I had no idea eat MissaLs were until I googled lol
Art imitates life was dope j lotb
bush/snoop was wack to me iono
artificial intelligence was cool.
Assault n battery is so fucking played Tho man. Like realllllly played
trash u rote went over my head

2-1 in quoted


I got maximus

V/max

This is a close one to me. Both dudes came with some nice stuff, but I would guess they're both shaking off rust because they also both had bars that just weren't all the way there. Art really only had Maxipad, but maxima and nights watch were close. Maximus had Art imitates life and a few light but effective jabs, but had the worse miss with his opener. Art wasn't as complex with his concepts, but he didn't have any horrible misses either, just nothing that hit super hard. I think Maximus just edges it with the consistency of the rest of his verse, but the bad opening makes it closer than it had to be.

Vote: Maximus

Art

Started off with 3 straight nps got a little repetitive maxi pad being ur best.. Other 2 were a bit forced n other than maxi pad the only other bar I kinda liked was ur closer.. Def not a strong verse but we all do that..

Vs

Max

Both r a bitch was dope, closer was ooook not much else I liked in ur verse tbh..

Close af but I got max with solid punch n a light hit verse a decent jab n a light hit so he takes thus one barely

Max

I've got Arts first 3 lines vs. Maxs first 4 lines

Art had good wording which stood out. Entertaining battle here.

Vote-Max

Liked art imitates from Maximus.

if you wanna win you gotta read up... legend verses or top punches, try to reword your shit
You guys had a few cool ones but a lot of shit I wasn't feelin.
Overall I thought Maximus had the stronger verse here though
LOTB plus a couple that were cool
Art, the 3 maxi- nameplays were repetitive & not that great man. Phil Dunphy, what?
Idk but just keep workin on your shit man... this one I gotta give to Maximus

V/Maximus

Art, your best lines were oddly enough the name plays and they weren't all that, also got a bit repetitive, actually the first one was bad, so I'm taking the pad one which was your best
Maximus,
Art imitates life was nice and lotb, missals was eh to me, the artificial intelligence was cool

This was close but I like max a tad more

I'm bout to get violent. U had to poke the thug.
I run thru Maxipad..and leave the whole thing soaked in blood.
Fuck with me? U must be a fear junky...
Ill have this bitch shitting himself more than Phil Dunphey.

Vs


I'll fire rockets into your dome, u're shook and u're feeble
Da way I'll leave Missals in that Temple it's like prayerbooks in cathedrals
You don't write dope lyrics, this pussy is so timid
They say Art imitates Life.. Well, that's cos they're both bitches
U aint a smart dude, u're the wackest dork
So fuck robots, only link b/w Artificial & Intelligence is this rat's report

V/maximus, cool battle, both had some good lines, arts maxipad line was fire imo.
i just think max was a lil more consistent over all tbh here,
had to re-read this honestly could go either way, props to both

Hi...


His fam sad cus they got a wack text battling son...
I especially feel bad for maxima..cause i just run her over with one.
I'm bout to get violent. U had to poke the thug.
I run thru Maxipad..and leave the whole thing soaked in blood.

I liked where u were going with the nameplays but I felt that they were somewhat forced...
even the ones I quoted...
with that being said your verse wasnt bad...
The maxipad line was worded/executed very well...

I'll fire rockets into your dome, u're shook and u're feeble
Da way I'll leave Missals in that Temple it's like prayerbooks in cathedrals
You don't write dope lyrics, this pussy is so timid
They say Art imitates Life.. Well, that's cos they're both bitches

That Art imitates life line was dope...
Im not sure if youre rusty but a couple of your lines were a little played or just simple...

I think Max was a little more consistent...
Snoop line couldve been quoted...

vote- Max...

Bye...