c0up (0-0) vs john hensley (0-0) - HENS WINS
 

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• Verses are due Thursday, May 28th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
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• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
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First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@c0up @john hensley

just show

Check

I remember that, & if you were a witness to the match.
You'd kno I've had 5 no show wins, more difficult than that.
It's litterally a fact, Truly, you're gay dogg.
Dude just keeps Stalkin the Top Shelf.. like you at your day job.
I signed in to battle you, just cuz you're real tight.
Just kiddin' man.. I just wanted you to know what that feels like.
U need a mentor, at RB I'd seen way better.
At best u were Middle of the Pack like the Green Bay center.
Wack disser. There's no Cinderella story w/ this ass kisser.
If he shows up to Ball, it's steppin out of a pumpkin in glass slippers.
It's seemingly bleek, you'll die when I'm through w/ you.
Only time he'd Impreza Crowd is packin ppl in for a ride in a Subaru.
You ain't accustom to winning, just a wack & borin' tourist.
Ur only crossin the Finnish Line backpackin' Northern Europe.
Try Bolton, but you won't get far til' I handle this.
U got a Stark Warning.. then got fucked harder than Sansa did.

@john hensley il post shortly my bad forgot bout t hi s

ur futures dark cuz u didn't learn proper
so lets be clear.. they won't be voting for hen, dog they all prefer vodka
ur lifes at steak john don't even try it
came back sloppy an so far from ur prime we thot u were on a vegan diet
ur careers corrupt I got facts on the shit
cuz u winning back then was such a fraud it made Fifa look like a slap on the wrist
fist change skin color.. r u crazy my friend
but if jaundice me ... il beat him til this bitch starts to feel like a baby again
ur style don't work .. dude is odd
how can u win wen ya punches like muffs employment... just don't do the job
I prepare for battles so I can attack n dent
so u'll lose because u didn't Prep John John but this ain't no smack event
ur lady love the stroke game yet dude weaker
she says that I'm like jordan with the wood but this ain't no new sneaker
fuk
U

Opener
Top self
Greenbay
Closer

Vs

jaundice(worded werid, concepts nice tho)
John john
Closer

V/hens, cool battle but coup wording hurt him here had lot of good ideas
But nothing real harsh hitting i like that prep john john line coulda been fire worded diff
, hens was real consistent had acouple misses
But the ones i quoted were good, the opner was nice an middle of the pack.

I remember that, & if you were a witness to the match.
You'd kno I've had 5 no show wins, more difficult than that.
U need a mentor, at RB I'd seen way better.
At best u were Middle of the Pack like the Green Bay center.

vs.

...


The last 4 lines by coup were cool, and the last 4 by Hens were solid too
I disagree with Al though here - coup's concepts were mostly played or too simple
steak/stake was old back in the early 00s... job/MUFF after 10 punches bout it this month
The wording was fine to me, but not a lot connected...

Hens had a pretty decent verse for his first one back
Opener was simple but effective, I liked that... Green Bay was smooth LOTB...
Impreza and stalking top shelf were misses, but otherwise a bunch of cool stuff.
Hensley got this one pretty convincingly

V/ john russell

I remember that, & if you were a witness to the match.
You'd kno I've had 5 no show wins, more difficult than that.
It's litterally a fact, Truly, you're gay dogg.
Dude just keeps Stalkin the Top Shelf.. like you at your day job.
U need a mentor, at RB I'd seen way better.
At best u were Middle of the Pack like the Green Bay center.
Try Bolton, but you won't get far til' I handle this.
U got a Stark Warning.. then got fucked harder than Sansa did.

lol @ opener, simple but worded harsh. top shelf dope. eh, feels right was weak. middle of pack was good kind of predictable and eh wording, but a fresh concept. Ball didn't hit for me, Impreza was forced to me, but I'm pretty exact on that ish so it'd be dope to others, still the connection was lazy. Hens using a Finnish/finish line? C'mon you're better than that. Stark warning cool.


vs


fist change skin color.. r u crazy my friend
but if jaundice me ... il beat him til this bitch starts to feel like a baby again
I prepare for battles so I can attack n dent
so u'll lose because u didn't Prep John John but this ain't no smack event
ur lady love the stroke game yet dude weaker
she says that I'm like jordan with the wood but this ain't no new sneaker

didn't like opener, kind of a stretch and the connection was shoddy. vegan could have been cool but again the connection was vague. fifa ok almost a quote but kind of landed soft. jaundice nice concept, okayy finish to it. next two cool, closer was dope

v/hens

close and a lot better from coup than expected

nah

Vs

In quotables I could go 3/4 with hens and 2/3 with coup. I don't think it's all about quotables but for this battle it's gotta go to Hens cos the hitters were better.

V/Hens

Hens
step out to ball was lotb
No show, GB center were solid, ender was aight

Coup,
Jaundice and smack event were cool... The rest was no Bueno

Vote JH

I remember that, & if you were a witness to the match.
You'd kno I've had 5 no show wins, more difficult than that.
^aite cool
It's litterally a fact, Truly, you're gay dogg.
Dude just keeps Stalkin the Top Shelf.. like you at your day job.
^yep
I signed in to battle you, just cuz you're real tight.
Just kiddin' man.. I just wanted you to know what that feels like.
^eh dece
U need a mentor, at RB I'd seen way better.
At best u were Middle of the Pack like the Green Bay center.
^cool
Wack disser. There's no Cinderella story w/ this ass kisser.
If he shows up to Ball, it's steppin out of a pumpkin in glass slippers.
^nice
It's seemingly bleek, you'll die when I'm through w/ you.
Only time he'd Impreza Crowd is packin ppl in for a ride in a Subaru.
^dece
You ain't accustom to winning, just a wack & borin' tourist.
Ur only crossin the Finnish Line backpackin' Northern Europe.
^eh
Try Bolton, but you won't get far til' I handle this.
U got a Stark Warning.. then got fucked harder than Sansa did.
^okay

vs.

ur futures dark cuz u didn't learn proper
so lets be clear.. they won't be voting for hen, dog they all prefer vodka
^uh okay
ur lifes at steak john don't even try it
came back sloppy an so far from ur prime we thot u were on a vegan diet
^eh, how does far from someone's prime relate to vegan diet? pretty loose connection
ur careers corrupt I got facts on the shit
cuz u winning back then was such a fraud it made Fifa look like a slap on the wrist
^aaaite
fist change skin color.. r u crazy my friend
but if jaundice me ... il beat him til this bitch starts to feel like a baby again
^seen it before sadly. don't think u've flipped it knowingly, but it still takes from the impact
ur style don't work .. dude is odd
how can u win wen ya punches like muffs employment... just don't do the job
^dece, wording cud've been better
I prepare for battles so I can attack n dent
so u'll lose because u didn't Prep John John but this ain't no smack event
^cool
ur lady love the stroke game yet dude weaker
she says that I'm like jordan with the wood but this ain't no new sneaker
^aite ok

cool battle. not a lot of misses. that said, hens had more & harder hits imo. so he takes this. c0up seemed a little rushed, and considering that i can see him make some waves here. gd shit yall
v/jh

got it even in quotes but Hens quotables hit harder than coups

V- J. Hens