Burn in hell
 

Stupidity at its finest

I thought this was cool, not really eye catching at first
I feel how you set up each line makes me feel like I'm looking at a Twista rap
it sounds good but when I see all the words together..eh...
anyway I thought the most impressive part was the bottom half
a different take on what's been going on here lately..but interesting to say the least
in the end I didn't feel any different when I saw the structure
either way this was a nice little refresher keep writing breh

raw shit. thought the imagery was solid. dig the fast paced rhyme scheme. shorty short bars
whole thing was solid man. could quote a lot of lines i liked.

docs

i'd still like to know what an advantage shark is?

I can't post anything without uncool and the gang say stupid shit with stupid tags

That's what this site has become

It is what it is

Advantage shark

re-post it bruh

I got you

same here

LOL FUCK

WHATS POPPIN BRETHREN, MOTHER SAYS YOU A FAGGOT LOL

<3 LOVE YOU

this the best shit i seen you write

you nailed the whole less is more thing

....mostly just the 'less' of your whack shit part

keep it up holmes

Ya. Pretty fucking wack tb-unwack

You thirty-six in a karate class?
You Tae-bo hoe