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Hush 05-18-2015 05:43 PM

rnd1. Junto vs Greed - JUNTO WINS
 
Key Grand Prix II





maximum 10 lines
minimum 10 lines


DUE TONIGHT MAY 15TH 2015 AT 3.00AM EASTERN TIME






NO SWAYING, RECYCLING, BITING OR PROP 17ING


@Junto
@_____

StarFaggot 05-18-2015 06:40 PM

Hush this is Aero.

Junto, this is death.

Junto 05-19-2015 05:31 AM

shut your fuckin face loser

Greed 05-19-2015 07:49 AM

The reason you so far from the top is you dont got bars for the block
Your swag wack nd when j crew come around they wearing ralph lauren and crocs
Buddy really i got mad guap, i could take ya bish pronto
Ugly nigga get yo ass shot... nd i aint talkin bout tish faco
I think you seriously have a problem. You need help and i know why
Cause as far as junkies go, they would be more creative then that shit you spit on the fly
I call jun girl like 'i mishima'... her friend in the background like 'yoshimitsu too homes'
I dont even need a weapon if i sneak the tekken i kazuya kicked the side of this dude dome
The original greedy nigga, from birth to 2015 i been known to clean up plates
This may, junto, july's gon have you feeling like you got beat for 3 months straight

Junto 05-19-2015 08:50 AM

yo...

Pump & dump case... I'll break this down like stock so you agree
Earnings low, the Street dont fuck wit u. 'Target price' is $0 - niggas'll knock u off for free
So I guess I'm battling Greed now, haha, that's a blessing dude
I wrote that first bar for Aer. I wouldn't waste a fuckin breath on you.
Plus you know that fat hoe of yours is taking nuts often right?
G-strings the longest Silk Road. & her pussy seen more traffic than the drug-market site
You should improve ya image cuz you're a gimmick to these known vets kid
But I got NO respect for u. I'd never give up a second helping, on some Joe Metts shit
You won't just die..... cuz with torture I'm exquisite. Modestly.
Take u so deep in the woods, to a place where Yellen don't even affect fiscal policy

fraze 05-19-2015 02:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by _____ (Post 483403)
The reason you so far from the top is you dont got bars for the block
Your swag wack nd when j crew come around they wearing ralph lauren and crocs
nice opener
Buddy really i got mad guap, i could take ya bish pronto
Ugly nigga get yo ass shot... nd i aint talkin bout tish faco
nice flip
I think you seriously have a problem. You need help and i know why
Cause as far as junkies go, they would be more creative then that shit you spit on the fly
little bit overworded but nice concept and flip.
I call jun girl like 'i mishima'... her friend in the background like 'yoshimitsu too homes'
I dont even need a weapon if i sneak the tekken i kazuya kicked the side of this dude dome
little forced but i liked the humour.
The original greedy nigga, from birth to 2015 i been known to clean up plates
This may, junto, july's gon have you feeling like you got beat for 3 months straight
meh to this

Nothing too bad except the closer seemed forced to me. Best were ass shot and j crew.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Junto (Post 483432)
yo...

Pump & dump case... I'll break this down like stock so you agree
Earnings low, the Street dont fuck wit u. 'Target price' is $0 - niggas'll knock u off for free
dope
So I guess I'm battling Greed now, haha, that's a blessing dude
I wrote that first bar for Aer. I wouldn't waste a fuckin breath on you.
nice
Plus you know that fat hoe of yours is taking nuts often right?
G-strings the longest Silk Road. & her pussy seen more traffic than the drug-market site
didn't like this
You should improve ya image cuz you're a gimmick to these known vets kid
But I got NO respect for u. I'd never give up a second helping, on some Joe Metts shit
missed this one.
You won't just die..... cuz with torture I'm exquisite. Modestly.
Take u so deep in the woods, to a place where Yellen don't even affect fiscal policy
i'm a little surprised you went another finance bar. this is a little obscure for a rap battle but i see you.

The was cool but I felt like you fell off in the second half of the verse. The concepts were there but they didn't hit for me. You had target price and waste a breath, but I didn't like most of the rest.

Two quotes a piece but _____ didn't miss as much. Good battle on both sides, as both showed good creativity, but I think underscores edges Junto out with better wording.

Vote: _______

Sharp 05-19-2015 07:28 PM

The reason you so far from the top is you dont got bars for the block
Your swag wack nd when j crew come around they wearing ralph lauren and crocs
seen j crew lines before
Buddy really i got mad guap, i could take ya bish pronto
Ugly nigga get yo ass shot... nd i aint talkin bout tish faco
yooo nice
I think you seriously have a problem. You need help and i know why
Cause as far as junkies go, they would be more creative then that shit you spit on the fly
not bad
I call jun girl like 'i mishima'... her friend in the background like 'yoshimitsu too homes'
I dont even need a weapon if i sneak the tekken i kazuya kicked the side of this dude dome
ok but mad wordy
The original greedy nigga, from birth to 2015 i been known to clean up plates
This may, junto, july's gon have you feeling like you got beat for 3 months straight
seen too many june flips lately. not bad tho


Pump & dump case... I'll break this down like stock so you agree
Earnings low, the Street dont fuck wit u. 'Target price' is $0 - niggas'll knock u off for free
ok
So I guess I'm battling Greed now, haha, that's a blessing dude
I wrote that first bar for Aer. I wouldn't waste a fuckin breath on you.
like it but I seen a lot of aer lines directed at aero
Plus you know that fat hoe of yours is taking nuts often right?
G-strings the longest Silk Road. & her pussy seen more traffic than the drug-market site
ok
You should improve ya image cuz you're a gimmick to these known vets kid
But I got NO respect for u. I'd never give up a second helping, on some Joe Metts shit
eh
You won't just die..... cuz with torture I'm exquisite. Modestly.
Take u so deep in the woods, to a place where Yellen don't even affect fiscal policy
almost hits but i feel like ti could be flipped harder


yo this is close. I wanted to bump it but i gotta re-read it later

coming back

I gotta go with greed on consistency. this was close as fuck but I thought he had a bit more with tish faco being line of the battle. good stuff guys, this and tic/bomb are the round highlights for sure

v/gree

Hush 05-19-2015 08:50 PM

@Diode @Orc @dead man

Witty 05-20-2015 01:10 AM

The reason you so far from the top is you dont got bars for the block
Your swag wack nd when j crew come around they wearing ralph lauren and crocs
ehhhh
Buddy really i got mad guap, i could take ya bish pronto
Ugly nigga get yo ass shot... nd i aint talkin bout tish faco
lmao nice
I think you seriously have a problem. You need help and i know why
Cause as far as junkies go, they would be more creative then that shit you spit on the fly
No, bad
I call jun girl like 'i mishima'... her friend in the background like 'yoshimitsu too homes'
I dont even need a weapon if i sneak the tekken i kazuya kicked the side of this dude dome
Dope
The original greedy nigga, from birth to 2015 i been known to clean up plates
This may, junto, july's gon have you feeling like you got beat for 3 months straight
ok

vs

Pump & dump case... I'll break this down like stock so you agree
Earnings low, the Street dont fuck wit u. 'Target price' is $0 - niggas'll knock u off for free
nah
So I guess I'm battling Greed now, haha, that's a blessing dude
I wrote that first bar for Aer. I wouldn't waste a fuckin breath on you.
Nice
Plus you know that fat hoe of yours is taking nuts often right?
G-strings the longest Silk Road. & her pussy seen more traffic than the drug-market site
Ok, a little basic
You should improve ya image cuz you're a gimmick to these known vets kid
But I got NO respect for u. I'd never give up a second helping, on some Joe Metts shit
ok
You won't just die..... cuz with torture I'm exquisite. Modestly.
Take u so deep in the woods, to a place where Yellen don't even affect fiscal policy
Very nice

This is close, best battle I've seen so far. Greed had the best line with the tish faco punch, but Junto was more consistent and also had a couple of dope bars.

Re-read this and I'm giving it to Junto for a more creative and consistent verse. Good battle tho, could go either way.

Vote - Junto

El Muffin 05-20-2015 01:27 AM

J crew lol
Tish Faco baaaaaang
Junkies nah nigga nahhh
Kazuya DON DEMARRRCO
Closer eh ol



Iik5 thus verse niggs....



Junto


Open. ... Creative but nothing gr8
Aer. Bang bang
silk road . *sux teeth* Lol come on bro w/:this loose ass historica ref..
2nd helpin is Umm snf tbh but gud snf
I 4ly don't get ur closer



I got greed or under score


H3 was jyst more surprisihgly dop


V/________%%

Tic 05-20-2015 08:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by _____ (Post 483403)
The reason you so far from the top is you dont got bars for the block
Your swag wack nd when j crew come around they wearing ralph lauren and crocs
This was ok.
Buddy really i got mad guap, i could take ya bish pronto
Ugly nigga get yo ass shot... nd i aint talkin bout tish faco
This was nice.
I think you seriously have a problem. You need help and i know why
Cause as far as junkies go, they would be more creative then that shit you spit on the fly
I've seen this and it's pronounced 'June.'
I call jun girl like 'i mishima'... her friend in the background like 'yoshimitsu too homes'
I dont even need a weapon if i sneak the tekken i kazuya kicked the side of this dude dome
Nah.
The original greedy nigga, from birth to 2015 i been known to clean up plates
This may, junto, july's gon have you feeling like you got beat for 3 months straight
This read forced to me.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Junto (Post 483432)
yo...

Pump & dump case... I'll break this down like stock so you agree
Earnings low, the Street dont fuck wit u. 'Target price' is $0 - niggas'll knock u off for free
Not really feeling this.
So I guess I'm battling Greed now, haha, that's a blessing dude
I wrote that first bar for Aer. I wouldn't waste a fuckin breath on you.
This is played, but ehh.
Plus you know that fat hoe of yours is taking nuts often right?
G-strings the longest Silk Road. & her pussy seen more traffic than the drug-market site
Ehh.
You should improve ya image cuz you're a gimmick to these known vets kid
But I got NO respect for u. I'd never give up a second helping, on some Joe Metts shit
LOTB.
You won't just die..... cuz with torture I'm exquisite. Modestly.
Take u so deep in the woods, to a place where Yellen don't even affect fiscal policy
This was actually nice.

Junto takes this pretty easily IMO. Greed had the Tish Faco line which was nice, but Jun had 2 solid shots at the end. Other than that, I wasn't really feeling any other bars.

Hush 05-20-2015 09:40 PM

@dead man @Orc @Diode

Allen Knight 05-20-2015 11:07 PM

Buddy really i got mad guap, i could take ya bish pronto
Ugly nigga get yo ass shot... nd i aint talkin bout tish faco
I call jun girl like 'i mishima'... her friend in the background like 'yoshimitsu too homes'
I dont even need a weapon if i sneak the tekken i kazuya kicked the side of this dude dome


Vs

So I guess I'm battling Greed now, haha, that's a blessing dude
I wrote that first bar for Aer. I wouldn't waste a fuckin breath on you.
You should improve ya image cuz you're a gimmick to these known vets kid
But I got NO respect for u. I'd never give up a second helping, on some Joe Metts shit
you won't just die..... cuz with torture I'm exquisite. Modestly.
Take u so deep in the woods, to a place where Yellen don't even affect fiscal policy



V/junto, this was a close one had to re-read acouple times, greeds tish faco line was nice, junt was alil more consistent tbh, i see how ppl sayin the aer line is played but it was flipped fresh imo cuz of the whole whos battling though the his closer was dope to.
this was a good battle, props to both.

dead man 05-21-2015 01:13 AM

GREED


The reason you so far from the top is you dont got bars for the block
Your swag wack nd when j crew come around they wearing ralph lauren and crocs

this sounds pretty played. not really creative. kinda corny. but ok.

Buddy really i got mad guap, i could take ya bish pronto
Ugly nigga get yo ass shot... nd i aint talkin bout tish faco

lol

I think you seriously have a problem. You need help and i know why
Cause as far as junkies go, they would be more creative then that shit you spit on the fly

?

I call jun girl like 'i mishima'... her friend in the background like 'yoshimitsu too homes'
I dont even need a weapon if i sneak the tekken i kazuya kicked the side of this dude dome

kinda forcing some of this but 'yoshimitsu too' was pretty clever imo. the actual punch sort of fell flat.

The original greedy nigga, from birth to 2015 i been known to clean up plates
This may, junto, july's gon have you feeling like you got beat for 3 months straigh

meh


JUNTO

Pump & dump case... I'll break this down like stock so you agree
Earnings low, the Street dont fuck wit u. 'Target price' is $0 - niggas'll knock u off for free

all around just not great for me. why did you apostrophe target price? is that a wordplay or something?

So I guess I'm battling Greed now, haha, that's a blessing dude
I wrote that first bar for Aer. I wouldn't waste a fuckin breath on you.

that partial nameplay shit is whack but this was ok.

Plus you know that fat hoe of yours is taking nuts often right?
G-strings the longest Silk Road. & her pussy seen more traffic than the drug-market site

lol

You should improve ya image cuz you're a gimmick to these known vets kid
But I got NO respect for u. I'd never give up a second helping, on some Joe Metts shit

ok. i get it. cause he's a larger dude. cool.

You won't just die..... cuz with torture I'm exquisite. Modestly.
Take u so deep in the woods, to a place where Yellen don't even affect fiscal policy

you could have flipped that way better but cool.


v/ JUNTO


I wasnt a fan of a lot of his wording but his basic conceptual ideas for punchlines were more effective than greed's. i think by a long-ish shot.

cool battle guys thx

~RustyGunZ~ 05-21-2015 01:26 AM

The reason you so far from the top is you dont got bars for the block
Your swag wack nd when j crew come around they wearing ralph lauren and crocs
Buddy really i got mad guap, i could take ya bish pronto
Ugly nigga get yo ass shot... nd i aint talkin bout tish faco

started falling off, quotes were just okay. tish faco could have been worded ill.\

vs


So I guess I'm battling Greed now, haha, that's a blessing dude
I wrote that first bar for Aer. I wouldn't waste a fuckin breath on you.
Plus you know that fat hoe of yours is taking nuts often right?
G-strings the longest Silk Road. & her pussy seen more traffic than the drug-market site
You won't just die..... cuz with torture I'm exquisite. Modestly.
Take u so deep in the woods, to a place where Yellen don't even affect fiscal policy

misses better than most of greeds verse tbh, hits were cool some wording issues in the last 2 but solid enough

v/junto


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