Why so srs
 

As our mortal world turns ever so on
it's axis
There are forces at work designed to
distract us.
From the illuminated ones power, to
the herds of sheep
How come we can't remember our
dreams when we sleep
Staying awake at night hoping I don't
go under covers
Visions of how we fell, we failed
to support each other
We bailed.. Brother to brother, turned a cheek
& ran from revolution
The plan was to execute it
But we got cold feet..
GOTDAMN we couldn't do it
As a whole generation our foundation
cracked a little
But the chink in the armor dug in
its roots
Scurried to the back of the minds of
the youth
We're it remained dormant for years
until it heard "Dont shoot"
"I can't breathe" please Father please
tell me the truth
Is there killing go on, why does it
come down to you
Are you the savior in our favor, shit then s
end me a coup
Cause I need a reason to see the heathens
bleeding in a stoop
I'm rude.

Not so great.

would be better recorded

The lyrics at the end are bad i.m.o. Seems like you just wanted to finish.
But I feel like if you flowed it more evenly, the begging and middle are good rhymes.
I.e. turning 4 lines into 1.

As our mortal world turns ever so on
it's axis
There are forces at work designed to
distract us.

As our mortal world turns ever so on it's axis There are forces at work designed to distract us.

It's one sentence anyway.
Just how i saw it