anyone interested in reading/critiquing an essay I wrote?
 

I'd really like to get as many perspectives on it as possible. It's decently long - 3400 words - so, if you are so kind as to read it, I don't expect lengthy feedback or anything, just tell me what you liked/didn't like and why.

I know I've been shitty about leaving feed for a lot of you, so I will gladly give you in-depth feedback for any piece you link me to before you get back to me about my piece. THAT'S MY WORD.

@Certain @Dancake @Vulgar @bane baby @Zen @Pent uP @Diode @zygote @dead man @uh-oh @NYCSPITZ @Eŋg @Witty @anyone and everyone else who might be interested. thanks

Sure

Sure

Sent to both of you, much appreciated.

No!

Ok, I shall read ASAP :D

<3

i got u

sure

email it to me, i can have a look.

ill give it a shot if you still want feed

just know any critiques will be "feel" related seeing as i dropped out after failing the 9th grade twice.

Sent to all of you, thanks again everyone.

Send it bruv.

I will.
pharaohsarmy52@yahoo.com

What's it about?

Dogs and humans. This is a much different/much more developed version of what I sent you a number of weeks ago.

Then yes.

I'm in

Sent

pm it

Pm to me.