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Zen 01-07-2015 02:39 AM

I'm Ray Rice in an elevator w/steak knives and a belt to spank her.
 
She's been looking at my dick so I made a pass.
"Butt-fuck anal ass with nuncha-KUS.
Babe, it's rad."
Works every time cause they crave the 'stache.
All these other queers look like a baby's ass.

Me?

I'm amazing, bad.
I don't mean to be blunt.
So, I saved the dabs.
Now fire that shit up.
Savor, pass.
Oh, by the way,
I may have crabs :(
But no worry, bey.
It's too late to pass :)


It's been a couple days.
Shit I may need to crash.


I came home to find, Ade. Hey. No wait. You're mad. Yeah, it's been a minute. Sorry, I've been so distant. See, I woke up lost and spinning

but you're still here :)

Whuddaya say to that?
I think you love me.
I'd say that's a fact.

My phone was off, or I would've called. Because I love you so much.

You my doll ;)

Light red hair like Lucille Ball. Call me Ricky. Look how cute you are. All dolled up, I'm bout to lose control. Grab your clothes and lose them all.

Don't be mad, baby. We don't need to talk. What do you mean, where I been? I thought that's been resolved.

Where the fuck YOU going?

Guess dinner's off.

I went into the kitchen and put my head to the faucet
to clean out the cobwebs that's spreading in my noggin.
"Why's this bitch still here if she can't stand when I'm gone!? Shit..."
This bitch is acting crazy.
I don't give a damn who you are bitch.
I'll kick your ass so fast you could swear you were car sick.

Naw. Fuck that. Ray Rice that slut.
Then maybe she'll think twice when I'm done.

Fuck...

I'm sorry, baby. You're right that's dumb. I'd never hit you no matter how many times I want - I meant to say, "Good night, and good fuck...


luck."


fuck

Kin 01-08-2015 06:25 PM

this shit was entertaining ...always like the way you craft ya lines...they come off soundin' smooth


I went into the kitchen and put my head to the faucet
to clean out the cobwebs that's spreading in my noggin.

that was the stand out to me Crazy!

HoLLa

Wise Wiggles 01-08-2015 09:06 PM

nice dark comedic entertainment. hints of that one em and Royce joint on their cd they made. For get the name of it but it reminded me of Em's verse. Except yours was a little more polite and courteous. thanks for the read. it's structure is kind of deceiving also lol. Stay up. And keep them dab sizzling!

KennyCerealBowl 01-10-2015 02:14 PM

Light red hair like Lucille Ball. Call me Ricky. Look how cute you are. All dolled up, I'm bout to lose control. Grab your clothes and lose them all.
^this was real smooth


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