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Sharp 01-06-2015 02:21 AM

Junto 1-0 vs Greed 1-2 - JUNTO WINS
 
Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Thursday, January 8th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
  • EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
  • Battles that lack votes may close later.
  • One sided battles may get closed early.
  • Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
  • Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
  • If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Junto @Greed

Junto 01-06-2015 07:11 PM

12

good luck.

Greed 01-08-2015 10:43 PM

Sent 12 @Junto

Junto 01-09-2015 01:05 AM

if Jun rolled up on you wit a gun, what would you say... I really wonder dude
Prolly stutter like "I.. I.. I".. & on the third I, I'd put a bullet between ur other 2
Yea I'll kill you.. and everyone close to you homie, murder's my talent
Try movin ya fam away to safety. I'll just go wherever Dago like a slur for Italians
My gang got molly. I can give u a few Gs for free & finally make u retarded legally
Just so I can laugh at the irony... of how it was R E that came between u and ur G E D
Look, I might spend a minute wit a bitch, hit a cpl dabs, chill... & then we fuck
For you aloan time means your broke ass just can't pay the bills again this month
Bring ya brothers to the crib nigga..... they'll get ate up quick.....
My pitbulls will Munchkin of Yours - like somethin that a girl would prolly petname ur dick
& what are you thankful bout? if I had a bitch like yours I'd rather crank it out
hoe weigh like 3 bills minimum...but shiiiit, that's the max amount in ur bank accnt

easy

Greed 01-09-2015 02:43 AM

Ayo i heard it through the grapevine from your main ho
U don't even like pussy, j put the d first like django
Even if you managed to impregnate the bitch and have her heel at your whim,
The day Jason Bourne his ultimatum will be weather I kill it or him
Putting in work.. yeah right, you don't hustle to get paid
The lasso you ever turned was back in the western days
Why ur lines so trash, you need to keep them off my property
No one likes ur funky Pun, junt, it reeks of mediocrity
You like a fish out of water, in my mind is all sin
I'll step on junto.. legs, hands, face, whatever it takes for the win
You lookin complacent again, I'll have you feeling despair for your arrogance
U showin carelessness, I'll kill your 12 faster then the Paris terrorists

E Tha Real 01-10-2015 01:37 AM

Bullet between other two- solid
Alone time- slick as fizuuck

Vs

J put the d 1st- clever
Step on junto - ha!

I enjoyed this battle. Greed had some creative nameplays which were fresh & unpredictable. Junto had some gritty lines which hit harder for me tho.

Vote junto

Legion Of Cocks in my mouth 01-10-2015 02:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Junto (Post 462621)
if Jun rolled up on you wit a gun, what would you say... I really wonder dude
Prolly stutter like "I.. I.. I".. & on the third I, I'd put a bullet between ur other 2
I liked this
Yea I'll kill you.. and everyone close to you homie, murder's my talent
Try movin ya fam away to safety. I'll just go wherever Dago like a slur for Italians
cool
My gang got molly. I can give u a few Gs for free & finally make u retarded legally
Just so I can laugh at the irony... of how it was R E that came between u and ur G E D
na
Look, I might spend a minute wit a bitch, hit a cpl dabs, chill... & then we fuck
For you aloan time means your broke ass just can't pay the bills again this month
lol
Bring ya brothers to the crib nigga..... they'll get ate up quick.....
My pitbulls will Munchkin of Yours - like somethin that a girl would prolly petname ur dick
na, poor wording
& what are you thankful bout? if I had a bitch like yours I'd rather crank it out
hoe weigh like 3 bills minimum...but shiiiit, that's the max amount in ur bank accnt
not feeling it

easy

Quote:

Originally Posted by Greed (Post 462641)
Ayo i heard it through the grapevine from your main ho
U don't even like pussy, j put the d first like django
didn't really hit
Even if you managed to impregnate the bitch and have her heel at your whim,
The day Jason Bourne his ultimatum will be weather I kill it or him
forced wordplay, bad wording
Putting in work.. yeah right, you don't hustle to get paid
The lasso you ever turned was back in the western days
nice concept, punch didn't work
Why ur lines so trash, you need to keep them off my property
No one likes ur funky Pun, junt, it reeks of mediocrity
na
You like a fish out of water, in my mind is all sin
I'll step on junto.. legs, hands, face, whatever it takes for the win
decent
You lookin complacent again, I'll have you feeling despair for your arrogance
U showin carelessness, I'll kill your 12 faster then the Paris terrorists
na

v/jun

better wording, verse came off more polished than greeds

timeless 01-10-2015 05:29 PM

opener

vs.

first two bars


I got greed on this slightly evn tho his wording was horrid at times. junto didn't realy hit on anything beside the opener

Sharp 01-11-2015 09:07 PM

if Jun rolled up on you wit a gun, what would you say... I really wonder dude
Prolly stutter like "I.. I.. I".. & on the third I, I'd put a bullet between ur other 2
meh
Yea I'll kill you.. and everyone close to you homie, murder's my talent
Try movin ya fam away to safety. I'll just go wherever Dago like a slur for Italians
ok but basic
My gang got molly. I can give u a few Gs for free & finally make u retarded legally
Just so I can laugh at the irony... of how it was R E that came between u and ur G E D
unless im missing something I aint feeling this
Look, I might spend a minute wit a bitch, hit a cpl dabs, chill... & then we fuck
For you aloan time means your broke ass just can't pay the bills again this month
alright
Bring ya brothers to the crib nigga..... they'll get ate up quick.....
My pitbulls will Munchkin of Yours - like somethin that a girl would prolly petname ur dick
ok but eeeeeh
& what are you thankful bout? if I had a bitch like yours I'd rather crank it out
hoe weigh like 3 bills minimum...but shiiiit, that's the max amount in ur bank accnt
ok



]Ayo i heard it through the grapevine from your main ho
U don't even like pussy, j put the d first like django
not feeling that
Even if you managed to impregnate the bitch and have her heel at your whim,
The day Jason Bourne his ultimatum will be weather I kill it or him
solid
Putting in work.. yeah right, you don't hustle to get paid
The lasso you ever turned was back in the western days
bit of a reach for concept
Why ur lines so trash, you need to keep them off my property
No one likes ur funky Pun, junt, it reeks of mediocrity
pungent as pun, junt doesnt really work for me
You like a fish out of water, in my mind is all sin
I'll step on junto.. legs, hands, face, whatever it takes for the win
eeeeeh
You lookin complacent again, I'll have you feeling despair for your arrogance
U showin carelessness, I'll kill your 12 faster then the Paris terrorists
liked it tbh. not done too hotly but still alright concept

junto got mad formulaic at times. like 'blank blank... just like blank blank' which was cool the first few times but by the end of the verse I was done with it. greed had some misses that made it close and jun had harder wording so I give him my edge. another close one tho and should prolly be a split decision

v/junto

Destroyer 01-11-2015 09:56 PM

opener

vs

django, junto hands face, etc

i got greed here
jun's opener was dope, but i wasnt feeling much else

v/greed

El Muffin 01-11-2015 11:59 PM

if Jun rolled up on you wit a gun, what would you say... I really wonder dude
Prolly stutter like "I.. I.. I".. & on the third I, I'd put a bullet between ur other 2
Look, I might spend a minute wit a bitch, hit a cpl dabs, chill... & then we fuck
For you aloan time means your broke ass just can't pay the bills again this month

dago was ok, munchkin and closer were eh

Even if you managed to impregnate the bitch and have her heel at your whim,
The day Jason Bourne his ultimatum will be weather I kill it or him

You lookin complacent again, I'll have you feeling despair for your arrogance
U showin carelessness, I'll kill your 12 faster then the Paris terrorists


lasso was played homie, pun Gent. not pun JUNT. just my pronounciation. not feeling the django shit either

tied in quotes. close battle. kinda in a rush but junto had lotb with his opener so I gota vote junto

v/junto

Sharp 01-12-2015 02:29 AM

4-2 UP

Glossy Finish Dick Lips 01-12-2015 09:30 AM

& what are you thankful bout? if I had a bitch like yours I'd rather crank it out
hoe weigh like 3 bills minimum...but shiiiit, that's the max amount in ur bank accnt

vs

Even if you managed to impregnate the bitch and have her heel at your whim,
The day Jason Bourne his ultimatum will be weather I kill it or him
You lookin complacent again, I'll have you feeling despair for your arrogance
U showin carelessness, I'll kill your 12 faster then the Paris terrorists

Wording on ^ was off but cool concept.

v/Junto


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