Potatosacklegend 0-5 Vs Junto 0-0 - JUNTO WINS
 

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Junto @PotatoSackLegend

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good luck

check most likely droppin tonight.

nothin u spit isreal,thats why this weeks mag predicted ud take a loss from ether
no way ju proffiting from big wins this season but i bet ur related to the people who caused katrina
i roll with tramatized soldiers who'll make you pee on ya bed
First man that sees jungles crazy n will drag u to the bathroom then beat the shit out u til ur dead
listen up fag,i earned a purple heart cuz ima vietnam vet
closest uve came to that award was on a gay forum for comin out the closet
so dont claim u hold rifles or squeeze the hammer
cuz last time u had a cajun was when u fucked a dude from that ethnicity in louisiana
i'm 0-5 but i know im tight. no reason to start bitchin or fuss
thats why i say fuck the glory, ho... and that doesnt mean you should go all strikta on us
u were fucked before this battle started,i dont need punches to demolish ya son
kicks to the stomach will have you in so much pain u shud consult a pediatrician about swallowing tums

I'm just a fuckin hard knock, that's why I spit these bars properly
Pop off at the Mouth... I'm puttin a knife thru ya Son' Roof like it's a car robbery
My chick a cool calm soldier, ain't the type to squeal like a slampig
Your girl has a poker face on when you poker cuz she ain't feelin a damn thing
This ain't no thorn in ya side. Bitch, my fists'll reorder your eyes
These Brass knuckles will leave u needing a Tuba neosporin or 5
Yea I'm a G so I flip shit... we know that you don't be bout that biz
This week's the only time of year you EVER movin tree out your crib
Usin ya disabled status to be a racist faggot. Tough guy, those tats ain't gonna help
Them coloreds on each side of you? a cpl niggas that'll kill ur ass...for acting like urself


Take ten you fat fuck.

so dont claim u hold rifles or squeeze the hammer
cuz last time u had a cajun was when u fucked a dude from that ethnicity in louisiana

vs

My chick a cool calm soldier, ain't the type to squeal like a slampig
Your girl has a poker face on when you poker cuz she ain't feelin a damn thing
Yea I'm a G so I flip shit... we know that you don't be bout that biz
This week's the only time of year you EVER movin tree out your crib

ok battle.

I didn't like psl's opener at all. jungles crazy was pretty cool wordplay but I don't see where the word jungle applies at all tbh. kinda struck me as odd..reason why I didn't list it. purple heart was eh. glory ho was forced .. its glory hole ..hole doesn't sound like ho ..when I say hole the L innit is pronounced for me personally..umm and closer was just ok


junto..lol who carjacks by sticking knives thru sunroofs tho..where im fron niggas just stick the barrel of a pistol against the window and say get the fuck out lol. umm poker face was hilarious tho. tuba/brass was cool word association but kinda eh concept. reminded me of kung pow enter the fist NEOSPORRRRRRRRRRIN. movin tree was cool...closer was eh

I got junto by one quoteable but a stronger verse in whole

v/junto

i'm 0-5 but i know im tight. no reason to start bitchin or fuss
thats why i say fuck the glory, ho... and that doesnt mean you should go all strikta on us

Vs

I'm just a fuckin hard knock, that's why I spit these bars properly
Pop off at the Mouth... I'm puttin a knife thru ya Son' Roof like it's a car robbery
Yea I'm a G so I flip shit... we know that you don't be bout that biz
This week's the only time of year you EVER movin tree out your crib

I got junto taking this

More quotables
Overall a better Verse

Y'all just need to work on your wording

Cajun...strikta

Vs

Moving tree..poker face


It comes down to wording. Psl had a couple whiffs there. Jun barely edges this out for slightly better execution imo



V Jun

Cajun almost

vs.

moving tree almost

this comes down to harshness really, could barely find a legit haymaker.

v. junto

Psl had some wording issues. That katrina concept was clever but really stretched. The cajun line was probably his best worded bar yet

Jun was cool, some ideas were corny but I liked tuba and moving tree. He wins by one bar

V/junto

so dont claim u hold rifles or squeeze the hammer
cuz last time u had a cajun was when u fucked a dude from that ethnicity in louisiana
i'm 0-5 but i know im tight. no reason to start bitchin or fuss
thats why i say fuck the glory, ho... and that doesnt mean you should go all strikta on us

vs

My chick a cool calm soldier, ain't the type to squeal like a slampig
Your girl has a poker face on when you poker cuz she ain't feelin a damn thing
Yea I'm a G so I flip shit... we know that you don't be bout that biz
This week's the only time of year you EVER movin tree out your crib

Close battle... PSL has so much potential if he can get his wordign in check. Kills his concepts. I think if he would have cleaned up on a few of his concepts, he could have easily taken this. Junto seems like his wording is decent but concepts aren't that effective. Maybe sacrafice concepts/sting for wording? Not sure but his verse was a lot cleaner on the executions which IMO got him the DUB, barely.

v/Junto

junto got this easy, imo
i dont really like potato's style at all tbh glory ho was ok
jun was super thuggish in his verse but still flowed nice and was more hard hitting to me

v/junto

Cajun

Vs.

Tree, poker face

Wasn't really that close imo. I thought Junto's verse was much smoother and hit harder.

Junto.