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The Bar Scene.
Destructively drunk, slurring, cuss at a bitch
Bartenders favorite customer, that doesnt tip Pool table, cue balls, stools, cup full of chips Potential arsenol in case surroundung company trips Its a tough crowd, but i always love this watering hole A place where trashy broads in dirty clothes certainly rome Far cry further from home, than the dump on my block That nobody goes to cause its smothered with cops Im a couple of shots deep, a few beers and some dope So i go in the bathroom, and notice the mirrors are broke I pay close attention to everything, when i observe Chick at the bar has a light reflection, next to her purse Im guessin shit went down, that revolves around her Guy buying her drinks, knuckles are mauled and obscured He doesnt think anyone sees, all the blood where hes hurt Stumbling from the corner, comes the man who was split Wondering where his wife is, goddamnit, the bitch She watched him get hit, and left him standing there in his piss Embarrassed, he sits starring, i see rage in his eyes The type'a face to raise satan, see the hatred inside He climbs to his feet, slowly walks closer to them Swings his beer bottle hard, it explodes on his head Starts choking her neck, you can hear the fear in her cries Hes yelling, you bitch, you never took me serious, why!?!?! Tears in her eyes stop rolling, she collapse to the ground Cheers, screams and laughs all pass through the crowd Police crash through the loud people, capture the fellon Cuffs on his hands, arrested, wakes up in a cell and... Doesnt remember a damn thing, until somebody tells him Charges are aggravated assault nd murder, caught under surveilence |
Idk how nobody has commented this yet. It was completely solid. Rhymes on point, easy flowing read. You sound like you do a lot of people-watching. And a bar is a perfect place to do it, FORREAL. Laughed out loud at the "goddammit, the bitch" line. Loved how you got more and more personal and of course the twist at the end. Good shit man. We needa collab again soon. You get my creative juices flowing
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superior.
u always been nice at that story telling shit. 100 |
Dope man
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