genos 1st audio post. The One I Love. (crossover)
 

http://soundcloud.com/urbangenocide/the-one-i-love

Lemme know if it works/what y'all think. Holla

Lol. Some of the intro got cut out. Fuckem

Lol "crossover"

Precisely
@God Of War
Sup nikka

Listening. The vocal mix is off, should be higher. I know you're just starting out so that'll come with time. Some choppiness/skipped beats. Same thing.

Lyrics were cool. The end of the second verse was kind of hard to understand/ran together. Third verse was the best, although I thought 'poisonous germs' was kind of forced. Not sure about the gruff delivery for a track like this.

Overall a good start.

pretty much agree w/him

mixing yo, get that

and if u produce beats, u could definitely sample the song and add drums, etc to it after your first verse tbh

It recorded shitty. Its already been mixed. Doesn't have those skips and shit in the original recorrding

U were cool.....wouldve rather heard u on sumthin rugged tho. Cool shit tho.

it sounds like you recorded, a recording, of a recording of the song you made lol.

ur voice and delivery is cool i think your flow could be better mixing is awful but you have the potential to be very good if u practice the hook is fucking awful imo lol good shit for the first audio tho bro

Tbh.
Your voice reminds me of icp's sound.
I'm not a fan of icp at all...but I have heard them.

I hated the beat...I will wait for your second audio before passing judgment

omfg