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brokenhal0 12-19-2014 07:09 PM

ohloha
 
laughing with no sound alien craft hovers over rose mounds
smoke pounds the citys live but im walking threw a ghost town
a strange passion fast with air and exchange rations over indulge
the gat showing a bulge coast with control post in your skull
holding the phone my halo was once broke and alone
i grew a tree that provide shade within a inhospitable zone
critical tone concepts of the most vivid of poems
living the dream inception thoughts shape like lucidity themes
energy beams strike hearts with intent beyond hideous scenes
like the city is clean living is mean growin up its a pity
i had no tittys to squeeze creepin with beast
most are scarred cause there feelings get deep
5th dimensional soul
ask for nothing so my questions unfold the lesson is told
where the shadows hide when the suns reflecting its gold
dark matter a heart blacker then coal your style lacking its notes
i rather not ravage your folk scatter your hope in fragments
beyond a back battery volt clearly i spoke so angels hear me invoke
fear be the rope that hangs man from heavens high hear me I boast
i fear the same things we all particles in gods plan to see growth

big baby 12-20-2014 05:48 PM

i dont like the lack of punctuation but i kinda do because then i just feel like im babbling stuff outloud that kinda rhymes so im like oh ok, but either than that it is cool. i like it :)


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