Spoken vs. timeless [TOPICAL] {Timless wins}
 

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Due dec. 23rd 11:59 pst.

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When you wanna drop?

I'm writing later today once I get free time...

Sorry iIm late @Spoken I see you are too.




"MERRY FUCKING XMAS"
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I was the missing the report, they say it was dishonorable.
Some guy sippin' on some Coors, fishing by the shore,
was locked in and entombed in the hospital. Ripped, cut up and worn,
drifting from a storm where bliss has no remorse.
Some martyr making news, got caught pissing on some whore.
Turned himself into police after he took a big shit on their floor.
There's risk in tug of war, you'll get the apples, no free jacks.
Wishing for some torque even though I got 12 tackles and 3 sacks.
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Cliff and Kay acted crazy, Cliff bought her a pool.
I watched right from my car, caught her in the nude.
She was cock-blocking him hard, real proper with her moves.
Taught her in the schools not to get chopped up in the yard.
That's how Cliff left her, then he got shot twice at the bar.
She survived, she stopped me all alarmed, so I propped her on a stool.
She was backing up mean ass for a chick whose father was a Jew.
I was smacking each cheek fast, then some cop stopped me to prove
that at his Xmas Dinner, I was the one who slobbered on the food.
The cops knew I was cool but still robbed me of my jewels.
The place where I'm from's a mix of Comption and Beirut.
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Back to slapping her asscheeks... she couldn't manage to react.
Blasted off weed snacks, was like 'Bitch, this happening! Relax.'
It wasn't stone cold rape, more like roleplay, basking in green cash.
Orgasms had her asking for relapse to her ol' habits and fiend traps.
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Should I hit the chapel to seek facts on my prepared forgiveness?
There isn't a better, yet worst time of year. Merry fucking christmas.

He kept a secret mild and cold real close to his thoughts,
Stayed fighting to be bold as he was told to get lost.
So here he was, finding a purpose to surface and cross,
Mended nothing; worthless he kept on lurking in frost.
He was his worst enemy just an entity loose,
A placement? Regrettably he steadily made up a ruse.
Between a fortress filled with orchids and there hung was a noose,
Was a craved portion as an orphan just out running the truth.
Soul searching for a purpose but endless with bounds,
Scrupulous endeavors with lucid evidence found.
Traveling afar between titanium shrouds
Building future to be exquisite; the phallus around.
Whose to say we are incompetent without all the facts,
A Martian who acts with woes that father's a lapse...
...pardoning laughs to crease a foundation that's cracked,
With incompetence wrapped around a heart that is lacked.
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Starving from cot to cotton he often slept on the floor,
Scared as an offspring who was auctioned thru many doors.
Adopted he was robbed by cops of a perfect home,
So he roams lost as a cause; a detriment clone.

Little Boy Bleu
@Sharp Nine open for votes @timeless props for dropping.

You guys got links? @timeless @Spoken

I hit all of BA now
@Sharp Nine my battle with muff and e tha real ... then I voted on bent and plot and I voted on the tag so that's it

Got spoken vs. muff and tsgteam battle

@Arid @Vulgar @Witty @deadman @Innovator @Frank

Could someone start voting

@Arid @Vulgar @Witty @deadman @Innovator @Frank

Could someone start voting

HAHN

v/timeless


lol jk but upping for votes

id vote but this isn't my realm at all..iono wtf is going on rly

I understood timeless' shit but reading spokens verse was like a weird kaleidoscope of fucking phalluses and fucking nooses and I started thinking of elie wiesel's Night and little babies being auctioned off for 20 US$

it prolly was good though lol

Both verse need a lot of work, all the place, so even battle.
Vote timeless

Gotta go with Time on this one.

Very scatterbrained drops from both. Didn't see a goal or really a point in either verses. Spoken was less confusing and a lil more direct(understood it more). This is why I don't like random topic battles because it has no foundation.

Vote/ spoken