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i liked this and enjoyed the flex aspect as u normally don't do that. r u drunk? It is a testament to your intelligence that ppl appreciate ur material yet are ignorant to the content aka 9/11 elite agenda people like oats don't understand the obvious there but still like ur style. 8.75/10 nice

hey ye old fucker. long time. hows ur life??

Welcome to the demon lodging of sunken statutes
You’ll look forward to seeing zombies over my seething body coming at you

^oohhhh my
Dope.



also u should edit this:
Entombed physics in moats, I drowned in negative daylight’s limitless scope
My lungs filed bankruptcy, strugglin for the air required to keep immune business float

to "afloat".. no?? ur missing that one syllable

go on aim

Dope flow and wordplay. I was expecting a story about a cannibalistic werewolf or a vicious assault on emcees. flow wise and content wise this was top notch. I think you have plenty of imagination




Pregnant with blood, I’m wondering
when’s the next obligation
You haven’t seen a man change so
fast overnight since Vegas sex
alterations


great way to discribe the transformation. 9/10

Drunk, bookmarked.

I, too, have a slight fear every time I have sex that I will accidentally impregnate the woman I am penetrating. (It's about the only positive side effect of my recent dry spell.)

Anyway, that was my takeaway from this verse. Maybe I'm reading into it what I wanted to, but this section seemed to be about that:

I liked that you relaxed a bit on this one. It was very loosely written in contrast to your usual density. I didn't even miss a single allusion. The flow wavered at times, even though the rhyme scheme didn't. This seemed like something you wanted to get off your chest, albeit indirectly.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ggP5YDziMSY

DJ Khaled’s wretched remains hang from my jaws like “WE DA BEST… as a light meal.”

^^Lol.

This isn’t a joke - I promise you the longitude will world trade center demolish you
Why worry about the smoke of trench war, what about the vaunted fumes of solitude?

^^Nice.

Welcome to the demon lodging of sunken statutes
You’ll look forward to seeing zombies over my seething body coming at you
Fuck Twilight, church & Bieber. I thrive at nightlife, worked at Keibler's
During Berlin Easters, holding your organs over the burning ether
Bent over the bleeding parchment, breathing, pardon the endlessness
The universe starts to expand, as pupils roll back, like Stephen Hawking’s apprentices

^^Favorite section.

This was good, not as lengthy as your other pieces but you packed alot in here.Some really slick imagery in places and I liked the content as a whole...you also kept a consistent rhyme scheme thru-out to echo what Serpent said...nice shit V.

Stay uppity.