Amen 3-1 vs jilti 3-1 - JILTI WINS
 

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, December 11th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@Amen @jilti

@jilti, my dude... Haha, how about a picture battle, shun?

Amen aka Obnoxious aka Sike



please no more gay Obnoxious selfies, its well known u like orgies
one Biopic is enough, broke back mountain already told ur life story
guy's horny. Amen likes Dick inside his neck & throat & rectum hole
cuz everyday we turn on screen and see more DNA than a forensics show
formally known as Sike, til exposed as a liar & fraud so ima wire his jaw
give Psychics.. then put hands in face til he can read every line in my palm
Muay Thai god. these elbows & Knees'll put this mans life in critical care
cuz when Disneyland Square, they'll be holding another candlelight vigil there
this winter ima limit warm air use cuz expensive bills im trying to avoid
but it'll cost you an arm & a leg when i raise the heater up to its highest point
got the steel cocked to kill. Amen at ur head ready to off ya grill
talkin' real. one shot will Folger lid back quicker than a coffee seal
i'd still fuck ur FSC-STD-Certified girl, without sweatin my health
bcuz i'll prolly only Contractor License she already gave u everything else


14 lines.

Fuck w/ me...

Fuck ya gun bars, this chump hard? My deadly flows vicious,
Fuckin w/ me; everyone nose you’ll get touched quick… Like Eskimo kisses.
This W’s mine, IDC if you think you bring the fear to queers,
& if niggas think Gillett me slide, it’s only w/ those Razors from ear to ear.
I’ll snatch ya hoe, that sperm bank that’s eager to slop dicks,
Not to mention ANYONE can teller open up & she ready for semen deposits.
This geek pops shit that my heat’ll drop quick, so check herb,
I’m not only handin’ him the 9 to off himself… Sharp can add it to his record.
Forced WP’s w/ punches that fall flat’s what this guy’ll spit,
Anyone claiming Ti-rex shit? I’d have to agree, historic hot heaping pile of it.
Your not a contender, faggot… Consider to forfeit this brawl,
Cuz the NBL’ll witness AmEnd his career w/ punches that’ll easily alter his jaw.
& lets not discuss hustlin' son, my Oz’ll put your lights out,
While this faggot struggles w/ uh oh… Since you live in a more poor life style.

14, ez.

please no more gay Obnoxious selfies, its well known u like orgies
one Biopic is enough, broke back mountain already told ur life story
Strong attempt
guy's horny. Amen likes Dick inside his neck & throat & rectum hole
cuz everyday we turn on screen and see more DNA than a forensics show
Good
formally known as Sike, til exposed as a liar & fraud so ima wire his jaw
give Psychics.. then put hands in face til he can read every line in my palm
Nice
Muay Thai god. these elbows & Knees'll put this mans life in critical care
cuz when Disneyland Square, they'll be holding another candlelight vigil there
Ok
this winter ima limit warm air use cuz expensive bills im trying to avoid
but it'll cost you an arm & a leg when i raise the heater up to its highest point
Ok
got the steel cocked to kill. Amen at ur head ready to off ya grill
talkin' real. one shot will Folger lid back quicker than a coffee seal
Ehhh
i'd still fuck ur FSC-STD-Certified girl, without sweatin my health
bcuz i'll prolly only Contractor License she already gave u everything else
Lol

Vs
Fuck ya gun bars, this chump hard? My deadly flows vicious,
Fuckin w/ me; everyone nose you’ll get touched quick… Like Eskimo kisses
Ok
.This W’s mine, IDC if you think you bring the fear to queers
,& if niggas think Gillett me slide, it’s only w/ those Razors from ear to ear.
Meh
I’ll snatch ya hoe, that sperm bank that’s eager to slop dicks,Not to mention ANYONE can teller open up & she ready for semen deposits.
Niceee
This geek pops shit that my heat’ll drop quick, so check herb
,I’m not only handin’ him the 9 to off himself… Sharp can add it to his record.
Good
Forced WP’s w/ punches that fall flat’s what this guy’ll spit,
Anyone claiming Ti-rex shit?
I’d have to agree, historic hot heaping pile of it.
Lotb
Your not a contender, faggot… Consider to forfeit this brawl,
Cuz the NBL’ll witness AmEnd his career w/ punches that’ll easily alter his jaw
Good
.& lets not discuss hustlin' son, my Oz’ll put your lights out,
While this faggot struggles w/ uh oh… Since you live in a more poor life style.
Gteat concept cudda been better
Got amen by a line close battle

V/amen

Biopic - haha
Line in my palm - diggin it
Contractor license - funny

Vs

Gillete - clever
Ti-rex - Slick

Excellent showing gentleman. One or so more of Amens line didnt connect for me as a deciding factor. FYI Kind of wierd to diss gun lines by feeding then use one yourself. Also feel like you had a opportunity to diss the fact he backed out of a pic battle and left it open IMO. but it backfired and jil had a solid diss while backing out. Close battle. Its nitpicking with these verses.,

Vote- jilti

Opener was ehhh, DNA was dope tho. Psychics was cool, dude has changed his name a million times u dont even know prolly. Disneyland square was a reach, kinda worked. Nah on the next bar. Folger was dope, closer was a forced reach just ehh

Vs.

Gotta say bro the opener was pretty fucking gay lol. Gillett cool, could hit harder. Sperm bank cool prolly never used. Ehh on the record, same story different twist. Felt t-rex was a miss, realllly forced wordplay obv bar was edited 3 or 4 times. Amend was ok. Closer was weak. Seen you come way hardee than this on most verses u put out.

V. Jilti for coming less forced and more creative.

Who is jilti? That Dna line was cold. Arm and a leg and folgers get a nod of approval as well. Hella reaching amen and your opener set a tone for your verse you could have probably done without. Gillette needed better direction. The rest was sub par and the closer doesn't rhyme.

V jilti

Line in my palm and pant leg

Vs

Gillete, sperm bank and t-rex

I got this neck and neck but that Eskimo bar was gay bruh lol. The folders line from Jil I've seen done and this flip was ehhh...

To me I got @Amen

3-2 UPPPPINNN

Physics, Folger, contractor

Vs.

Gillet

Cool battle. Jilti took it for me.

Hi...

Amen's verse was terribly worded...
amend bar was horrible...
closest thing to being decent was the gillete line but even that was a worded badly...

please no more gay Obnoxious selfies, its well known u like orgies
one Biopic is enough, broke back mountain already told ur life story
formally known as Sike, til exposed as a liar & fraud so ima wire his jaw
give Psychics.. then put hands in face til he can read every line in my palm
got the steel cocked to kill. Amen at ur head ready to off ya grill
talkin' real. one shot will Folger lid back quicker than a coffee seal

psychics line was fire...
I liked the folger line too...
very consistent...
pretty creative...

Jilti dominated here...

Vote- Jilti...

Bye...