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Dope girl 12-08-2014 10:28 AM

when a guy say poem
 
When a guy say I'm cold
he wants a hug
When say I'm sleepy
he want you to be his pillow
when a guy smiles
you brighten up his day
when a guy say I'm lonely
he wants love and a homie
when a guy say you beautiful
he attracted to your beauty
when a guy say the word comfort
he wants to love you

Geno 12-08-2014 12:17 PM

When a guy says im lonely
He wants love and a homie

Flamessssss

Dope girl 12-08-2014 02:01 PM

ty
 
thhanks

Inno 12-09-2014 11:21 AM

bitch this was terrible. down syndrome or not.

Vulgar 12-09-2014 02:19 PM

Nice work, my lord.

Dope girl 12-09-2014 05:09 PM

thanks v

Mr. J 12-12-2014 01:41 PM

I feel like the first half was from the heart
the second half almost outdid what I said bout the start
when you said 'you brighten up his day' that was hard
sometimes I feel like its hard to even decipher your bars
but...'when a guy say your beautiful' that was raw
'he attracted to your beauty' I was like OH MY GOD...
nicely done...


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