the queen freestyle
 

Hate it or love it,
I'm the Queen of the South.
This is for haters
I wreck anyone talking side thier mouth
Money in the bank,
This is a honey stack of doe

So much shit to elevate on here, there was almost no flow to this at all for starters. You need to elevate on your multisyllabic rhyming as well, along with your internal rhymes. Next piece needs to be longer as well, and with an actusl concept. Overall this was not that good at all, but all it takes is elevation. Stay up

Dope. This made my thanksgiving. Thanks, dg.

fireeee

Thanks everyone and I felt like I should add more stuff

You probly feel like you should add more stuff

Arson