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Weekly Bars
Weekly Bars 1: Imma upper cut all you females like I'm Ray Rice So think twice 'fore you come askin about the fade guys I'll throw two jabs, a straight right, duck ur shit then aim high And upper cut you so hard that you back flip off the stage side! I murder kids! I don't care how young, damn it I'm wild And I'll still get off free, like Casey Anthony's trial! All these new kids comin in look stupid standin around like Mayweather verse Caleno, they can't handle this bout! these cats talkin 'bout style that they're barely skilled with If you ain't felt the wrath of pain then prepare to feel it Your flame is doused, don't play around like im scared to kill kids I'll shoot at teens for no reason like I'm Darren Wilson! You mad?! What, you think that imma mind my shit?! Hold back, relax and be nice every time I spit? Nah, cuz it's my goal to get you hyped and pissed so my bars offend you more than Ems cypher did! I'm demented, a lunatic, crazed and sick Brought up to be a killer, I was trained to spit. It only takes the little things to make me click And beat you toddlers like the lady from Malaysia did! Step back, I wreck cats, don't pull no shit its do or die Fuck with me, I'll never stop, i'll bully you to suicide Mess with me, better hope I'll wipe you out with hands I guess I'll let you take one last walk around the land Before I take you to the peak of where the mountains stand And behead you and your family like I'm taliban! damn... |
This was cool, a lot of punchlines that were played
but regardless your flow was there. this is more cypher material then again I can't complain much about that whole ordeal you grasp onto what you know what makes for well crafted verses Id leave up to date punchlines for a song more than a text verse the more you play with words the more praise you'd get here at least that's how I see it, maybe play in the cyphers and craft a verse there that's how must work comes about if you try hard enough & stay focused keep it up |
Preciate the feed. I'm more of a topical writer, don't do stuff like this much.
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This isn't bad even tho some lines played, your punchline could have been better 9/10
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