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WK8: Mr. J (4-3) vs. Dominate (3-1) [Mr. J wins by NS.]

AOWL Season IV, Week 8

OFFICIAL RULES:

Verses are due Sunday, November 23rd, 11:59p.m. PCT/2:59a.m. EST/7:59a.m. UK. There are NO extensions.

Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words).

Votes are due Wednesday, November 26th, 11:59p.m. PCT/2:59a.m. EST/7:59a.m. UK. Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week.

TOPIC: Click here.

Good luck. @Mr. J @Dominate

#7

Beneath the surface is a cold machine lying in wait.
denying its fate, only to break down in the face of adversity
a last minute emergency when life is intertwined in hate
Dreaming, wide awake...so reality came with its absurdities
And what I saw became a closer observation of this hurt in me
this need to shut down when life becomes hard purposely
Complicated personally, advanced beyond what shows....
show what works for me, a one track mind, a silent courtesy
a wall built, a hole to rest in when I can feel the worst in me
a place to hide the bigger part of the pain thats hurting me
A shell that I return to whenever I need to be alone....