Blanco Bishop 0-1 vs E Tha Real 0-1 - E THA REAL WINS
 

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, November 20th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@Blanco Bishop @E Tha Real

In.

Let's go 16.

pussy- you're Rusty so you won't cook me
but if u Gnawed off...then you might win if you pull a Spooky
swear imma smack the nerd off this geeky fool
so bad that this fag will finally know what it's like to be cool
no one's claimin u hot- please stop it hoe
anyone sayin Eon'n poppin surely means at least that long ago
accept it dude- ur done but'ts goin get worse
u barely Hanging On, so when i step on u i pray u plunge head first
fuck ur Plight- now ur life's really sad'n harsh
cuz to win these braggin rights u'd need more than a Million Man March
u'll read this verse n c ur finished as a member
bet u smash ur phone n break thru ur screen like a p'rimeter defender
w/ those lines u Generate u should move on
cuz that type of Generation reminds me of one that's dead n gone
life's hard, but it ain't idiom whn i knock off this bum
if i say it's Real'n the Field..it'll b this nerd laying w/ limbs sawed off in one

Bish please! Your a clear textcee flipper and the usual clone
lines are so played to death. His audios vybe at funera homes
A savy vet from the glory days of text, you just revive it as a bitter shmuck
You were part of a golden reign last week, then Defiant pulled his zipper up
sick from start to finish like Tom Hanks in Philadelphia, while dudes whack
style is such a comedy of failures it could be on Orange is the new black
Boyband lovin' Diva is taking selfys in homeless shelters, a joke & crime
your such a dirtperson. Ya Holla Vids show off Homeland more than Showtime
Just quit. Seriously. this garbage-effortless style must die slowly
Blancos so half-assed his viral twerk uploads are shot right side only
Real talk tho .25 cent a day for your ghetto cause is noble holmes
Want a trailor of Hunger Games? Watch him trick or treat @ #mobile homes
your verse has a clear path... that could ruin the NBA pace of play
So If your Down in the dumps? I need a planeticket & place to stay
SWAG? Rockin Baby gay graphic tees & skinny jeans is appaling apparell
Your drive to success could restart a Total Recall like Colin Farrell

@Blanco Bishop

due tonight

Pm'ed for extension

Yeah. Ext sir. Thanks bro.

Open

e the real took this easily.

golden reign was decent, played to death was played af but all in all e was a lot more consistent so he gmv

pussy- you're Rusty so you won't cook me
but if u Gnawed off...then you might win if you pull a Spooky

How would he win if he bit? This made no sense, tbr.

swear imma smack the nerd off this geeky fool
so bad that this fag will finally know what it's like to be cool

What?

no one's claimin u hot- please stop it hoe
anyone sayin Eon'n poppin surely means at least that long ago

Cool name play even tho I've seen these done a lot @Muff, haven't we? LOL. But you could have even worded/executed this a lot more creatively and harsher.

accept it dude- ur done but'ts goin get worse
u barely Hanging On, so when i step on u i pray u plunge head first

Eh, I've seen this concept done a lot. This was barely a fresh enough twist to rock w/ it.

fuck ur Plight- now ur life's really sad'n harsh
cuz to win these braggin rights u'd need more than a Million Man March

Think you could have gotten a lot more creative w/ this concept as well. Fell flat for me.

u'll read this verse n c ur finished as a member
bet u smash ur phone n break thru ur screen like a p'rimeter defender

Bad simile. Ineffective as well as statement'ish.

w/ those lines u Generate u should move on
cuz that type of Generation reminds me of one that's dead n gone

This was kind of like your 2nd bar. Stale.

life's hard, but it ain't idiom whn i knock off this bum
if i say it's Real'n the Field..it'll b this nerd laying w/ limbs sawed off in one

This is probably your best bar, tbh. More of these would have been nice. And made more of an interesting and better read, bro.



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Bish please! Your a clear textcee flipper and the usual clone
lines are so played to death. His audios vybe at funera homes

Played concept but tied w/ a personal, I see and actually worked in your favor. So guess I can say this was effective.

A savy vet from the glory days of text, you just revive it as a bitter shmuck
You were part of a golden reign last week, then Defiant pulled his zipper up

Lol, not sure why I found this funny but cool, I suppose.

sick from start to finish like Tom Hanks in Philadelphia, while dudes whack
style is such a comedy of failures it could be on Orange is the new black

Nah...

Boyband lovin' Diva is taking selfys in homeless shelters, a joke & crime
your such a dirtperson. Ya Holla Vids show off Homeland more than Showtime

I think you could have did more with this concept. Didn't like the execution. Seemed like a fake personal, IMO. Unless this dude posted some type of video in disc that I haven't seen or heard about since I'm unable to see what's posted in their because Certain is a faggot.

Just quit. Seriously. this garbage-effortless style must die slowly
Blancos so half-assed his viral twerk uploads are shot right side only

A half assed concept, bro? in 2014? Co'monnnnnnnnn. I"m sure in your glory days wayy back when these were done to death, my G lol.

Real talk tho .25 cent a day for your ghetto cause is noble holmes
Want a trailor of Hunger Games? Watch him trick or treat @ #mobile homes

Eh.. Think you could have did more with this. Was kind of corny for me.

your verse has a clear path... that could ruin the NBA pace of play
So If your Down in the dumps? I need a planeticket & place to stay

This was alright, I guess.

SWAG? Rockin Baby gay graphic tees & skinny jeans is appaling apparell
Your drive to success could restart a Total Recall like Colin Farrell

Not a fan of simile's unless they are dope ones, and this one was ehhh... Think you could have did more w/ it if you kept it as a metaphor, IMO.

OVERALL: I really haven't checked BB out much, but from what I have seen from him previously, I thought he was better then this. I'm not sure if he underestimated his opponent or what but his verse was kind of stale for me. I think his Eo'n Line and Closer were his best attempts and even those could have been executed a lot better and harsher. E seems to still be shaking rust but had a little more effective punches, IMO. Opener landed nicely, since I just finished reading BB's verse and thought to myself, his style is more of on the old school basic style. Golden reign was ok'ish and that could have been touched up on, Dirtperson had potential but fell flat, down in the dumps was weird but ok at best. Rest was just clown attempts which some were ok and some were bad. I think if he shakes the rust off he'll do just fine but IMO edges this battle with just a tad bit better of a verse.

v/E

Blanco, what happened bro? Your previous verses are wayyyyy better than this. Looks like you're takin tips from Muzzle. Only bar I thought had any potential here was the Million Man March...with that reworded it could've been dope.

E....Funeral homes and Mobile Home were kinda cool. Otherwise you had some cool concepts just worded awkwardly. Shake that rust off, homie!

Vote / E

yea i think bb underwhelmed here

only had like 4 lines i liked i think



e was aight. i like his setups.

had like 6 lines i liked

v/e

yea i think bb underwhelmed here

only had like 4 lines i liked i think



e was aight. i like his setups.

had like 6 lines i liked

v/e

Closer

Vs.

Zipper up, mobile homes

Thought blanco could have done way more than what he had posted but I got E just taking this with better attempts best bar was the defiant line..

Blanco had the break through screen concept but didn't use it properly, had potential, rest just wasn't feeling, there's ideas/concepts, just poor execution

Felt E just had a better grasp of wording his punches and got this W

V/E