I'm in the mood to write
 

I’m in a writing kinda mood, but while I’m deciding what to do…
I’m guiding lines to choose what type of driving I should skew
the lighting’s right but new, so darkness whispers opportunity
ideas blowing in the wind as the hardest blizzard caused a unity
the illness has immunity, diagnosed insane with a cold to blame
happy trails lost in a road to pain while drunk drivers mold the lane
we pray for gold in vain then scold our shame as denial preaches
the style leaches on to a bond so strong it brings a smile to Jesus
get the wild to greet us, animal instincts tamed by circus acts
curse the facts, a sinister’s joke is usually followed by a nervous laugh
the purpose asked… nosey people breathe when neighbors lie
house warming gifts include cherry flavored pie & a favor pried
which dictator’s shy? appetite for destruction while the waiter cries
look up at the creator’s sky, I cloned his tree for a greater high
I got a sailor’s eye, fishing for compliments in a sea of verbs
I’ve seen you stirred, my writing mood’s over so I’ll free the words

This was a dope piece my dude...enjoyable flow
Captivating in fact. I might edit in more praise later
But it was great

A different view into the nikas mind.

This is a little more abstract than what I'm used to from you. Felt very random and like you just were really going off of the instinct to write with no direction. Last few lines were where I felt like you started to gain a real momentum into something and then it ends.

house warming gifts include cherry flavored pie & a favor pried which dictator’s shy? appetite for destruction while the waitercries look up at the creator’s sky, I cloned his tree for a greater high I got a sailor’s eye, fishing forcomplimentsin a seaof verbs I’ve seen you stirred, my writing mood’s over so I’ll free the words

That shit was my fav segment. The rest felt like a slow descriptive start leading up to a hotter and more abruptly ended climax. Should went in further imo

Good read, nika

Can I get more feed

nice multies + good progression from bar to bar

appetite for destruction while the
waiter cries

^^ ... loved the expression in this bar ... not much to say,only wish it was a longer piece

hahah cool man. i can dig it. u obviously obviously know what ur doing as far as texting goes. not sure if u ever attempted or considered attempting some audio shit?? you have a writing style that would be conducive to making tracks cause all ur bars are similar length etc... you keep the rhythm nicely. would be dope to hear u spit something man

Funny thing I did audio before text, I'm passed that stage, I enjoy the writing aspect of it more, thx for the feed guys

Collab?
Can't believe we've never spoke of one before. Let's make it happen

Sure man, anytime

Yeah your multies are off the hook here, what I like mostly though is how none are forced...made for an extremely fluent read.Thought content was good also, you never drifted and kept it consistently nice thru-out...so kudos.

Enjoyable shit, stay upwards.