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Sharp 11-09-2014 09:39 PM

Knucklehead vs E Tha Real {Knucklehead wins}
 
Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Thursday, November 13th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
  • Battles that lack votes may close later.
  • One sided battles may get closed early.
  • Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
  • Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
  • If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@Knucklehead @E Tha Real

~RustyGunZ~ 11-09-2014 10:21 PM

Sup

10

E Tha Real 11-09-2014 10:45 PM

In.

E Tha Real 11-13-2014 05:06 AM

Prepare for excuses for extensions, days of course after appearing
Cant ever get his story straight either like a same-sex divorce hearing
A fitted hebrew day school yamaka, watch out fashion! this guys loose
Rumor is heads over heels... Since fairy prefers wedges & thigh boots
jew sideburns curl more then him at the gym only to get laughed at
Ginger tries to save face like when he sexts karaoke on Snapchat
Beef with hairy jewbacca? c'mon thats not kosher in a lot of ways
I'll passover this jew so fast his fam will petition for new holidays
Works in a cubicle where he hangs verses & owns a ferret, he's harmless
You got my number? never. but I got your moms off her arm bitch
Ur moneyshot has a textcees name. mine your girl and a cock too
Karoakes face is grand but droppin 3 on it is even unorthodox for u
Inflated ego here DQs pic battles & tourneys, A troubled vet
Womb raider bigger then mine? even Statefarm insisting ya double check
You run the league? as a helping hand stop trying to shine fag
Only time you highlight Real... is recording my lines in the mag

~RustyGunZ~ 11-14-2014 02:46 AM

ugh..

Ring the bell, uppercuts n jabs leave E split up in cages
Only time we see Real deal damage is when Daylyt is shittin' on stages
My ex tracked me down, it's 'cus she really misses boo
If your Extract you down.. it's to do that to your organs & piss on you
It's over for sour vets, my haymakers mean it's closing time
When I Aerie out.. it'll show he's more feminine than that clothing line
Break a bottle over ur head, u'll get visions fulla grim & malice
Then put that glass to your back like I was teaching Kim to balance
Ur washed up, BBoys been gone. K leave dumbies tore
w/ this... I'mma make Realtime look worse than the last season of 24
Let's talk punches.. no one feels urs, mine are on top list reports
'Cus Wendy's hit ya stomach.. NC'll get more excited than they did for Orc's
Drop the Pen. Put that gay ass style to death & bag it too
Only one's wanna see Equal Right... are LITERALLY fucking faggots dude
Wanted to go 10. It's not worth my time for shitty pun spars
This shit is such an Onslaught I should've just had Muff write me 61 bars

Glossy Finish Dick Lips 11-14-2014 07:39 AM

A fitted hebrew day school yamaka, watch out fashion! this guys loose
Rumor is heads over heels... Since fairy prefers wedges & thigh boots
jew sideburns curl more then him at the gym only to get laughed at
Ginger tries to save face like when he sexts karaoke on Snapchat
Ur moneyshot has a textcees name. mine your girl and a cock too
Karoakes face is grand but droppin 3 on it is even unorthodox for u

some decent jabs here. last personal one was fire, imo tho.


vs


My ex tracked me down, it's 'cus she really misses boo
If your Extract you down.. it's to do that to your organs & piss on you
It's over for sour vets, my haymakers mean it's closing time
When I Aerie out.. it'll show he's more feminine than that clothing line
Let's talk punches.. no one feels urs, mine are on top list reports
'Cus Wendy's hit ya stomach.. NC'll get more excited than they did for Orc's
Drop the Pen. Put that gay ass style to death & bag it too
Only one's wanna see Equal Right... are LITERALLY fucking faggots dude
Wanted to go 10. It's not worth my time for shitty pun spars
This shit is such an Onslaught I should've just had Muff write me 61 bars

all fire, props.

Overall I got knux here. E dropped some ok'ish material but nothing hard hitting. I think his wording is dope but he needs to work on more effective concepts and harsher executions. Bars I quoted from Knucks were all dope. I'll give it too him by a good margin... Pretty nice battle, fellas. Keep writing.

v. Knucks

El Muffin 11-14-2014 10:16 AM

e-same sex..like how u set it up but concept is played

thigh boots nah

snapchat lol

3grand/unorthodox lol

the rest was kinda iffy

i.e passover is ancient

same w/ dbl check

not ur best showing



knuck had

airie out
equal rights
onslaught

i didnt like the extract wp

? just seemed like u wanted the wp to work rather thsn tie it in more appropiately or w.e

as it stands it just seems ur saying his ex is an organ snatcher meh

wendys third time i seen that wp this wk n i did the wp a decade ago

cant rock w/ it

i got knuck by 1 quote

ok battle fellas


v/ knuck

En Sabah Nur 11-14-2014 12:37 PM

Ur moneyshot has a textcees name. mine your girl and a cock too
Karoakes face is grand but droppin 3 on it is even unorthodox for u

vs

My ex tracked me down, it's 'cus she really misses boo
If your Extract you down.. it's to do that to your organs & piss on you
Let's talk punches.. no one feels urs, mine are on top list reports
'Cus Wendy's hit ya stomach.. NC'll get more excited than they did for Orc's
Wanted to go 10. It's not worth my time for shitty pun spars
This shit is such an Onslaught I should've just had Muff write me 61 bars

knuck got it

more quotes and his misses were stronger

e's wording was choppy

it hindered the effectiveness of his concepts

mvgt knuck

Alvin Karpis 11-14-2014 01:20 PM

decent battle here


E had a couple cool lines, could have been a lil more creative w/ the jew punches but overall not a bad verse at all

Knuck had a few more quotes. No bullshit I had a Wendys line w/ diff wording so obviously I was feeling it, and a couple others

V/knuck got it

Tic 11-14-2014 01:25 PM

I'm on my phone so sorry for the short vote. E had thigh boots and unorthodox was pretty dope. If worded cleaner would've been FIRE. Other than that, there were some misses like moms number and the opener and a couple more.

Knuck had Extract, realtime and equal rights was dope. Knuck executed each bar better and had better misses along with 1 more quote.

V/ Knuck.

Blanco Bishop 11-14-2014 02:31 PM

Kim..fag rights..onslaught..wendys

Vs

Passover..snapchat..highlight real

Knuck started off slow but had a few haymakers like the kim n fag rights. E had passover for a hay n highlight real as well.

Close but i think knucks wording was slightly better imo. Also didnt reall lke the story straight or the extract by knuck. Buuut still liked knucks misses a lil better. So...


V knuck

Kill Spree 11-14-2014 07:57 PM

Ur moneyshot has a textcees name. mine your girl and a cock too
Karoakes face is grand but droppin 3 on it is even unorthodox for u

vs

My ex tracked me down, it's 'cus she really misses boo
If your Extract you down.. it's to do that to your organs & piss on you
Let's talk punches.. no one feels urs, mine are on top list reports
'Cus Wendy's hit ya stomach.. NC'll get more excited than they did for Orc's
Wanted to go 10. It's not worth my time for shitty pun spars
This shit is such an Onslaught I should've just had Muff write me 61 bars

I felt some of e's bars were choppy. His misses didn't match to Knicks either. Knicks verse had
Me dieing the whole read tbh.

I got knuck in this


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