Curvacious Crawl Spaces
 

Illusion itself is the fate of the beholder
keep faith in the order, for the sake of the quota
based in Dakota, laced with laments baking soda
raging & pacing over documented facts
couldn't fix their path, nor could they augment it back
shattering consequences that are alarming to grasp
as harming as glass...twist goes the sands of time
creating the labyrinth I deliver into cavernous times
imagine the height Goliath would have to climb...
that's what it would take for y'all to understand this habit of mine
I'm too beyond belief, balancing out ideals in a Romulan fleet
while y'all write stuff strong enough to put Rasta's to sleep
laying out...chalk and sheet while witnesses awkwardly speak
tryna make sense of this place and all that we see
like...this is common to me, of course it's nonsense to me
but from these coordinates in orbit, you is nada to see
an illusion, an idea, a problem needed solving to breathe
but all is lost when you are where all you see...

















is the darkness with glee

I enjoyed it, my favorite parts was sand of time and Goliath, that was a strong segment, didn't like the rasta line felt awkward to me, ending was solid, flow was on point, cool flow excercise type verse

solid writing man. u been doin this a while its clear. i didn't really really get what u were trying to say here so by the end i kindof lost attention. i been reading all ur drops in cypher section and i actually think i like those better than this haha. its like u don't place any restrictions on urself there and just let it go. almost too serious in the actual booth. Either way this was solid. nothing crazy, far from shitty but just didn't do anything for me beyond that. also did not like the 2 lines ending with the word time haha, pet peeve most dudes have i think... try to avoid that usually

I'm too beyond belief, balancing out ideals in a Romulan fleet


^dope. Were they cloaked lol?

cloaked...
















and dagger

The ending was just okay. Content-wise the whole thing was on point. You always kept it interesting.

Illusion itself is the fate of the beholder
keep faith in the order, for the sake of the quota
based in Dakota, laced with laments baking soda
raging & pacing over documented facts
couldn't fix their path, nor could they augment it back
shattering consequences that are alarming to grasp
^Niceness..

Keep doing you

i feel like you might have some good ideas, at times, and shitz that will spark interest, but generally... your delivery/execution is mighty unpolished. unnatural. i mean i read 'harming as glass' and just thought to myself... eh. you better of not forcing that rhyme there and developing ur expression, instead. think that could be said for a lot of your verse. there are some good ideas, though. atm i can't get with them.