Chilling Like The Great Gatsby
 

Take a walk with pain, moderate pain
something I often blame for my topics range
nauseous ways, I lean back, rock away
with a migraine making it hard to contemplate
I cough, I praise higher powers for the awkward day
for the chalk that's lain... then I walk away
another body to the list that's been shot today
if you mocking game hunger pains & mocking jay's
take the same background that a stalker takes
put life in a choke hold, a gram in a whole bowl
turn a angel to dust if you tell me it won't snow
ease up Romo...spinal bifida for all you homo's
keep your eyes shut and keep your nose closed
Hello moto, get a razor to your side like old folks
with old phones, I lay it down for those who don't know
I deliver tri-weekly while most of y'all try weekly..
got a style that you can't just buy freely...
tailored wear, leaving me a tinkered soldier...
spy and think it over, a banana in a freakin' holster
so if you slip up even hiccup I bring exposure..
bring the mink, the colder it gets.. you'll blink, it's over
I add sauce to nuggets then floss like fug it...
I don't need a topic I could just talk, you'll love it..
don't need the face to match or the basic raps
just a mic and beat...nah I don't even play with that
childs play & a waste of breath...

Funky for what it was. I always like your titles because they're a small view into the way you perceive the world, if that rings true, lol. The verse wasn't a bore either, I read it from start to finish without any distractions. Overall cool.

totally agree with you...it is a window with the blinds shut
but rips through the fabric and air seeping through broken glass

With a snowstorm passing through

Pretty classic 12 piece. Cant complain.

take the same background that a stalker takes
put life in a choke hold, a gram in a whole bowl
turn a angel to dust if you tell me it won't snow
ease up Romo...spinal bifida for all you homo's
keep your eyes shut and keep your nose closed

^^Liked it.

Enjoyable read...had some nice multies, content was cool overall...not alot to say other than the fact I thought it was a tight little piece man.

Stay upwards.

Thanks breh 'precitate it

Title is polarizing. Nice flow very spittable. Could transition this piece easily to audio. Like your style, keep it up sir.