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Lost in Thought 08-14-2013 10:10 PM

Egotistic, check it
 
I'm A egotistic, deep flow spitt'n, beast so vicious
People witness deeds so wicked cuz im evil with it
Three slow minutes till these folks sleep'n,but really you see throats leak'n
The weak go missin cuz I need no reason to leave hoes bleed'n

Its an improper fraction for these rappers actin to be on top of me
Impossible action w/o lots of subtraction cuz I hang above like appostrophies
Thats basic math and english class say'n yall aint as hot as me
Can't 'clock' my speed lookin down at your feet instead of 'watch'n me

They say under pressure pipes will break
But thats also the conditions a diamonds made
So when I shine today its cuz I'm that type of great
Greatness is for the making but its mine to take

Flex'n for fun while connect'n some puns
I'd decapitate a bum to get a'head' of a chump
I'd mount it on my wall with the rest of the cunts
That I played like a game then "Left For Dead" when I'm done

Nigma 08-15-2013 05:44 PM

Solid flex Lit looking good. Not quite at the peak I remember you at but deff getting that the rust off. Some really nice flow throughout and a couple dope plays. Felt the clock/watch was kind of a stretch but 'get ahead of this chump' was nice followed by a nice closer. People sleepin on ya @Lost in Thought

Split 08-15-2013 05:50 PM

This is like your fifth drop w/out feed, closed

Split 08-16-2013 12:51 AM

Open, thanks for being a good dude

CopyPat 08-16-2013 01:09 AM

hahahah. wicked man. short and sweet. raelly good scheming with some meaning behind the punches or puns as u say. the content itself was nothing new but yeah the wordplays were cool. im loving the amount of people around this board that DON'T write simple 1 2 word raps or 2 3 syllables.. so sick how much different the landscape is now compared to when i first started this shit. amazing

stay up man. ur style is fun to read, keep readin dudes around here and u will get more polished. u have the raw talent but u seem a little green, and probly greened out too haha

no but like ur vocab is real basic and there doesn't seem to be a whole lot of time put into this. would be dope to see u expand urself and attempt a bit more complex stuff. regardless i like this, stay around

Maximus 08-16-2013 03:47 AM

Cool, short flex piece.. Really flowed smoothly with no bumps at all, simple vocabs and some played out wordplays but it wasnt really a bad piece..stay up dude

Vulgar 08-17-2013 02:46 PM

Nice work man, I miss this traditional, cocky multi-based flex. I can appreciate it because it brings me back to my early days when I was just getting into writing on Rapflava which was a very active forum at the time. This was a brief yet shining example of the products that era offered. Thanks for the nostalgia.

Keep doing you


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