Psychoanalyze Me Like One of Your French Girls
 

Let em go, roll the dice, the pedestal of open mics
Beretta flow, the poltergeist, you better know that oats is nice
Incredible, prose is like the coldest night at Leningrad
My keyboard is a ouija while explosions light my pen n pad

Corrosive type, upending tracks, pencil painting leaded pictures
Ventilating Venn descriptors, menstruating metascriptures
Bend and break the lesser listeners, a Wookie embedded Michener
Old school, so cool, calling kids pussies instead of hipsters

Crooked, the letter whisperer, incisions for calibration
Sharp boned, my smart phone's a sickle cell to answer Satan
Rivindell on acid patience, a twisted tale of masked elation
Mr. Always-Masturbate's Caligula coagulating

Mystical, emasculating, quick to pull a massive Matrix
Listen well - imagine sacred, kiss and tell cuz magic's nascent
Grip the L, that's how we make the strong silent, bomb tyrants
When life gives you lemons - you're one step closer to a Long Island

Lots of quotes, beautiful flow, buttery read. Loved the schemes in the first stanza, references in the 3rd stanza. Nascent is a dope word that I've never heard before, ty for inspiring me to look it up. More content in this small verse then most have in double the content. No filler, really good verse oats. I nod respectfully in your general direction.

reminds me of sumting

Dayum.

dope isn't caligula some roman dude

Lol at your ender

I just saw a sign a pub that said 'when life gives u lemons ...add beer and make a shandy'

But yeah lots of quotables..second stanza was bonkers multis. Cool flex.

Dope.

Love long islands.

Pretty dope for a free flow rant. Really not a huge fan of this style but you never disappoint with your technical content my friend. Keep it hundred my nigga.

There's really not a whole lot to say. This was sick all the way through. I loved "Wookie-embedded Michener." Unlike a lot of these pieces, the abstractions really made sense and connected seamlessly, and I think a lot of that has to do with flipping between really dense verbiage and simple lines like the one about "calling kids pussies." The first stanza had the best flow, but the third was just fire on every line.

As far as flexes go, this was terrific.

word. skimmed this on my phone when u first dropped it. i loved this kinda stuff man. rhyme that whole line shit. ahhaha awesome. i actually basically just did this same thing you should check it, u probly like it haha. Always been a fan oats, but this was really cool to see from u cause i don't think ive read one quite like this from u before, on that straight up rappin to rap about rappin shit and flowing to show how good u are at flowing lol. no this was wicked. nice short fun read. not too serious just flex. dope dude. good to see u color outside the lines a little and just have some fun with it

I don't always flow, but when I do, I like to flow like this.

hey bud! this was kewl! stop trying to impress me. B-AHA-!

lol@ the tag, geezus

Corrosive type, upending tracks, pencil painting leaded pictures
Ventilating Venn descriptors, menstruating metascriptures
^Loved this part, br0.

Appreciate the feed, for the verse and my teaching.

oats can u put the quaker man avi back.. i dont think ur really oats

This shit was sick throughout the whole drop
The flow was amazing it came with a great combination of couplets
Smooth transition from line to line
Nice drop oats keep writing

@BWHAHA I would but then I'm afraid I might be trying to impress you :-/

but it's me, good ol oatmeal

Hipster shit was my fave line but 3rd stanza was my fave segment, nice flow, solid drop

lol @ this title