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Octember vs Wally BombTexT - OCTEMBER WINS

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Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Saturday,
November 1st 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due by message to Sharp by Thursday, October 30th 2014
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

First to 7, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

Octember

U got Loads of Money? pfft!, U can't even divide Text's scratch,
So, B4 u see Wall dough, U'd find that dude w/ the red stripes in 5secs flat.
He ain't Hue Hef, Theres no trace of ladies when hes on the scene,
If He got a Bird on his arm, He suited up as Ghostface for Halloween.
Alias bars.. That drop alone proves that Ur shits trash,
Everything I Redmyst, But I bet you thought it was KickAss
Be more assertive, cus Lettin fags walk all over u is a big mistake,
If he puts his foot down, He'd be a Flinstones car crash dummy tryna hit the brakes.
Me & my squad gon suffer?..Ur not crazy, U suck with the rest,
U could reenact the Step Brothers movie &still won't go Nuts on the set.
Wallys not amazing in every area, His materials bland,
If he got the TOTAL Package.. S'cus thats his Grannys fav. cereal brand.
His whole life he's been a Bitch boy & a hopeless coward,
Bombs a pussy!.. That inspired Wale to make that song Lotus Flower.
I'ma swing a blunt object to ya cranium til it breaks, Just cry now,
cus once this Bat caves his head, Bruce Wayne'll have a new place 2 hideout.

Wally BombTexT

Bombz Away!

No gettin' Passed me, eva try givin' WaL a Push?
Arms too Weak, shoulda been Called Oct a Puss!
Bombz da 1st...Originated tha Art of War
Targets Form, I'll Cut em in Half like Tags at Bargain Storez
Follow Suit, Case you Missed it Bagz Packed up Leavin' the Site
Punches I'm Packin' got ya Vision Blackened...Leavin ya Sight
Smoke Rises, Cut his Air off now he's Headed Down
was Hot on my Heelz, until I Started Stompin' Embers Out!
Surveillance on his Alias, I-Racked up how Frail he Is
He's not Handlin' Bombz without Palms of Isralians
Dust yaself off, O.C. better stick to Diggin In The Crates
ya Showbiz takin' a Big L when I Split him into 8ths!!
Suck a Dick, FuucKa, whats up, you Nothin' Slick
Stop em' Dead in his Tracks quicker then Heroin Doses wit' Broken Tipz!
...an that must be an Alias Sharp Created Himself....
Cuz' before on this Board you Neva Made a Name fa' Yaself!

Opener, red must was dope, bat cave was new to me haven't seen it. You came decent nothing really missed just came off a little statementish.

Vs

Opener could've been good but wasted, embers out was nice other then that your shit was choppy as fuck & no need for the corny ass bolding and shit almost makes it annoying to read.

Vote first guy

Oct had like 5 haymakers. Wall came off played.

V oct

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sharp (Post 431456)

Octember

U got Loads of Money? pfft!, U can't even divide Text's scratch,
So, B4 u see Wall dough, U'd find that dude w/ the red stripes in 5secs flat. 7/10

He ain't Hue Hef, Theres no trace of ladies when hes on the scene,
If He got a Bird on his arm, He suited up as Ghostface for Halloween. 5/10

Alias bars.. That drop alone proves that Ur shits trash,
Everything I Redmyst, But I bet you thought it was KickAss 10/10

Be more assertive, cus Lettin fags walk all over u is a big mistake,
If he puts his foot down, He'd be a Flinstones car crash dummy tryna hit the brakes. 7/10

Me & my squad gon suffer?..Ur not crazy, U suck with the rest,
U could reenact the Step Brothers movie &still won't go Nuts on the set. 10/10

Wallys not amazing in every area, His materials bland,
If he got the TOTAL Package.. S'cus thats his Grannys fav. cereal brand. 5/10

His whole life he's been a Bitch boy & a hopeless coward,
Bombs a pussy!.. That inspired Wale to make that song Lotus Flower. 7/10

I'ma swing a blunt object to ya cranium til it breaks, Just cry now,
cus once this Bat caves his head, Bruce Wayne'll have a new place 2 hideout. 10/10

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Wally BombTexT

Bombz Away!

No gettin' Passed me, eva try givin' WaL a Push?
Arms too Weak, shoulda been Called Oct a Puss! 5/10

Bombz da 1st...Originated tha Art of War
Targets Form, I'll Cut em in Half like Tags at Bargain Storez 1/10

Follow Suit, Case you Missed it Bagz Packed up Leavin' the Site
Punches I'm Packin' got ya Vision Blackened...Leavin ya Sight 1/10

Smoke Rises, Cut his Air off now he's Headed Down
was Hot on my Heelz, until I Started Stompin' Embers Out! 10/10

Surveillance on his Alias, I-Racked up how Frail he Is
He's not Handlin' Bombz without Palms of Isralians 1/10

Dust yaself off, O.C. better stick to Diggin In The Crates
ya Showbiz takin' a Big L when I Split him into 8ths!! 10/10

Suck a Dick, FuucKa, whats up, you Nothin' Slick
Stop em' Dead in his Tracks quicker then Heroin Doses wit' Broken Tipz! 5/10

...an that must be an Alias Sharp Created Himself....
Cuz' before on this Board you Neva Made a Name fa' Yaself! 3/10

36

61/36 Octember. Wally's 2nd, 3rd, and 5th bars hurt him alot and his closer was too statementish. But he had some creative flips that deserve recognition. Octember had a solid verse where even though he only had 3 haymakers, his other bars connected and made his verse that much better.

v-Octember

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sharp (Post 431456)

Octember

Alias bars.. That drop alone proves that Ur shits trash,
Everything I Redmyst, But I bet you thought it was KickAss
Be more assertive, cus Lettin fags walk all over u is a big mistake,
If he puts his foot down, He'd be a Flinstones car crash dummy tryna hit the brakes.
Me & my squad gon suffer?..Ur not crazy, U suck with the rest,
U could reenact the Step Brothers movie &still won't go Nuts on the set.
I'ma swing a blunt object to ya cranium til it breaks, Just cry now,
cus once this Bat caves his head, Bruce Wayne'll have a new place 2 hideout.

Wally BombTexT

Bombz Away!

Bombz da 1st...Originated tha Art of War
Targets Form, I'll Cut em in Half like Tags at Bargain Storez
Smoke Rises, Cut his Air off now he's Headed Down
was Hot on my Heelz, until I Started Stompin' Embers Out!

Octember had stronger and better worded punches. Wally had a couple hits, but most of his verse wasn't worded in a way that would be effective.

Octember

I got Octember
the other dude was just not up to par with bolded plays, etc just wasn't feeling that style at all.
oct had some decent shit, was feeling the kickass bar and others

v/Octember

octember

redmyst
flinstones
nuts on the set

bat cave was decent..im more in awe because i cant believe i never seen that before

wally had

embers
nnnnn bargain stores
alot of filler tho

really didnt like tge israeli line n the heroin shit..or the leavin the site/sight. relevant but datttted wp

v/ oct