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N10tionalMalice 10-15-2014 05:55 AM

Breaking Point
 
Im Anthony Mason on this flow
Im angry and annoyed
Boys claimin' that boss noise
but the game got 'em falsely employed/
Bitch Im a carnivore, Im goin' ham
and if I don't eat u alive
then I'll smoke u like a gram/
Now its too late to cram for your final exam
cuz testing me
will just get u silenced like the lambs/
With not a care in the world
Im here to hate you,
but I will flip the script on a hater, like I f'kin made you
You don't believe me? Check my basement
No patience, so the body counts insane dude/
I'll literally deface you,
I'll Leave you face down on the pavement
with the intent to erase you
and just in case you,
need more proof, I'll let your maker explain what awaits you
as your last breath f'kin escapes you/
Looks like I've finally reach my breaking point!

AndyHiro 10-15-2014 06:39 PM

This is not as good as your other one. It was like your holding back. Still dope as hell though enjoyed it muchly. Keep writing bro!

N10tionalMalice 10-15-2014 07:12 PM

Thx homie


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