Pandemonium
 

The ridiculous distance of my reach is infinitely secret.
Even astrophysicists depict my leap as literally ether.
My valorous feats include pillaging demons
Breaking down the pillars of their kingdom by molecular splitting
The meticulous detail of their oblivion is one of cellular bleeding.
Auspicious signs of their defeat cause a demonic solar eclipse
Signifying a chaotic force gone extinct.
Yet war still exists, and so my next target is to open hell’s abyss
Creating a rift, an ultimate shift in the order of things.
Animalistic poachers’ with bombastic quotas ceasing to enlist is a moralistic bonus
It is absolutely grandiloquent the way I deal with the grandest of delinquents.
Instinctive miscreants who fan a fire to scatter it through Venus.
The hands which extinguish it get burned to death in the manner of phoenixes.
I have a masterful command of healing gifts when I bask on the vastness of God’s thesis.
Constantly contemplating the matrices in the Mandala’s meaning.
Be amply timid because every misstep there’s Pantheons seeing.
Alcoholics can’t stand their livers, feelings of a truly self loathing adamant species.
Pregnant mothers having ingested massive additives in them
Contribute to the heaping pile of the dead matter of fetuses.
My atomic speeches have a far reaching effect on Japanese regions
What the Shinto religion believes in becomes a mirror of the manner I speak in.
Nature’s patterns are listless, but one can fathom its message
By comprehending the various emotions the Basilisk hissing.
A legendary monarch like Huang Di, the imperial emperor with Mythical eminence
His existence portrays how an allegorical presence can have historical relevance….
Imageless images are the visual entrance to understanding the chaotic metaphor of virtual dissonance.
Mathematics are not my strong suit, I’m a numerical nemesis.
Nevertheless I still give proofs and empirical theorems to variable Genesis.
Citizens of the internet bear witness to the prowess of ritual discipline,
A cyclical intense principled diligent devotion to advancing to the critical brilliance of lyrical geniuses.
I have loads of spare time to progress since I was resurrected invalid
All disasters have unseen limitless benefits.
I live to cleanse the wicked criminal spirited of their primitive medieval viciousness.
A skeptical paladin with habitual tendencies to question the validity of everything
Observe me ridicule medicine, even as I use it to recover from a sickened skeleton
My body weakness prevalence is evident when the day is a windy pestilence.
This century parallels a tyrannical vengeance etched as a prison emblem.
Yet its robotic legacy is vintage like a mechanical Da Vinci sketch of a single letter.
A genuine repentance will induce a healing crisis that will have you spitting venom.

As you venture to guess this is not a romantic love poem
It’s more of a sporadic focus on transcending my usual sophomoric opus
A dramatic stub toe poet suffering traumatic awful torment from damaging his Psoas
No temptation will ever tarnish the Stoic
Essentially the essence of me is a benevolent being accompanied by his Pegasus steed.
Please don’t compare me to the heretic breed, which only use ethics to benefit thee.
My human form has mutated to a vernacular creature
Dispensing allegiance to my self- a spectacular feature
Of cognitive awareness via my Ventricular system venting decisions.
Primal fear is conducted there where the Amygdala sits in, mental intuition.
Constant esophagus purging has healed my cerebral lesions, mending disposition.
Positive earnestness has made life more nerve wrecking than a neurologist hurting them.
I’m joking, my only stress is the despicable despise of despotic monument worshiping.
The approximate pertinence of my eternity is like the godliest permanence.
Obstinate stubbornness to not concede is worse poor judgment than a somnolent's discernment.
Every night I massacre rappers only to awake to amnesia
Can’t remember anything, and yet all this artists have hemiplegia.
The central teacher with more flow than heavy menstrual bleeding.
I used that word once already, but it was so precise, hence repeated.

NO ONE CAN WRITE RHYMES LIKE THESE, NO ONE.

You flatter me so, but there are quite a few in this site that can write better than I. Good to see your alive and kicking.

Dope.

I once tried to create a social commentary with a verse while seeming authentic

it was very very hard

All verses are social commentary.

Sick bro, just nasty, killed it with the wordplay! I like to think we have someone similar styles from this drop anyway...but ur vocab is waaayyy deeper than mine, and so it the content...I like to use similar wordplay, playing words of others a lot, I really liked this...often times when u find something with content and extremely inteligent lyrics, bars are often too long or its just difficult to read bcuz it just doesnt flow smoothly...I would have to agree tho, some of the best shit Ive seen on here...only somewhat negotive thing I can say, or constructive rather, (and Im really picking here to just try and give u something, cuz it was pretty much on point throughout) is maybe even throw a few more simple shit in there ya know connecting shit, or leading into bars, and it couldve even flowed better...like I said tho, I had to pick cuz there wasent shit wrong with the flow at all...thats just really all I saw that MAYBE wouldve made it better...sorry for the novel, Props tho homie!

I kinda wanna go into the booth mess with this a little and spit this over a beat right now just out of curiousity to see how it hits actually being spit and over a beat tbh, muster up a corus and make it an actual song...Ima give it a shot tho, but Im sure I'll trip on about half of it a first

negged

I believe you are an alter-ego of the Jesodist, if not my apologies (hopefully this analysis will still stand). We think in a similar way. We use the English language in a similar way. Perhaps you could benefit from learning to become more flexible in your choice of language. Less condensed jargon, more connecting and signposting words, limit yourself to clearly expressing one central idea per paragraph. Please consider to write more simply, you will improve considerably in accessibility if you attempt to tone down your language and density of ideas while still addressing this same subject matter that enthuses, motivates and invigorates you. You have a really definitive and interesting almost disjointed writing style, I wouldn’t like you to lose it or drastically change it, just to refine it, clarify it and simplify it. Experiment with it. Then when you can write simply and with a clear singular focus, then you can re-introduce complexity of language and density of ideas.

Thank you everybody.

And @zygote, no I'm not Jesodist's alter ego. I am his friend though.
Glad to see you back you are very well liked here due to your unique skills.
Anyways, thanks for the great critique/ advice to keep refining the craft.