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Mike Wrecka 10-28-2013 09:05 PM

Harbingers of Death ft. Neighbor and Genocide
 
Neighbor

I'm the definition of raw; 7 Sins for the benefit of The Law
Leave Heaven stripped of its God, no benediction, the Devil lives in us all
These're penitentiary bars.. ascended vision, metal gripped in my palm
Hellenistic assault hold the severed head of Pegasus by its horn -
Red gets pitched on the walls; I let it drip down every inch of my arms
I generate genocide, never hesitant for Genesis to evolve
You're left w/ symptom withdrawal when my pen inflicts its signature form
Pledge addiction to war & make the dead lift like a medicine ball
Wreck the system like you were sent to prison & lost any sense of decorum
I'm a legend w/ every letter that's ever scripted the elegance of my thoughts

Mike Wrecka

these lames cant handle the tension my sentences bring,
got them shakin like the ropes when Ultimate Warrior enters the wrestling ring,
im an unquestionable sentinel at the center of things,
a special extraterrestrial vessel so every letter it seems,
that im on an incredible team, ATR the nexus supreme,
jettisoned the mediocre to be left with something better than wings,
an alchemist soaring past the competition as we sever the strings,
on parachuting writers seeking a safe haven to breathe,
I am a pagan extreme with Lucifer by my side,
we blasphemous baphomets wearing pentagrams in our eyes,
clash of the titans collide as these paragraphs are inscribed,
on stone tablets that will keep our words forever alive,
I make the temperature rise, im ceremoniously raising hell,
black magic for you faggots as I summon a satanic spell

Genocide

Prophets of death, that're Bombing the set
Promise the rest, there ain't been a dope enough conglomerate yet
For the gods to respect, boss of the spot
Get jim beam on the horn, im straight calling the shots
Toss you in the coffin, its locked
Let's see you fuck around, with your balls in a box
Cruciphyxions, crosses, I'm just staulking the block
Cutting off law enforcements tops, have it crawling with cops
Its like were all in the mob, we been made since day 1
Angels get fucked by the lords of flatbush, til your patron saints cum
Ya girl drink a whole case of facefuck, and swallow the truth
Imagine what being A.bove sluts could probably do
I'm a columnist to, write about the ways of the world
Even though that last bar talking bout the ways of your girl

Geno 10-28-2013 09:26 PM

Eyo @Mike Wrecka @neighkwon tha chef @neighbor @that guy, whatever his name is rite now..

Y'all killed this shit. Dope work

Neighbor 10-29-2013 05:28 PM

Good shit, boys

Wise Wiggles 10-29-2013 07:41 PM

I was grumpy earlier..? Lol.

Will edit later.

Sho Money EMG 10-29-2013 07:55 PM

Got damn Neigh did u kill this shit. Way to Set it off, honestly ur whole verse was rediculously dope

Didn't think it could get much better till Wrecka came in and dropped just as hard. Multies were dope, very witty and consistent... Dope message.. Damn props my dude

And gen, never fails to amaze.. Prob one of the best flows on this site without a doubt... I don't think theirs ever a piece I don't enjoy reading from u

this was one of the illest collabs I read in awhile, great work fellas

Ghost1 10-29-2013 09:20 PM

God.fucking damnit.

Me an mike wrecka have swapped bars in multiple occasions....ie indiana jones....lmao

But that ultimate warrior shit was one of my favs

But i flipped it hotter

Im the ring veteran, got the heart of a soldier
ya still shakey round the ropes like the ultimate warrior

Neighs deadlift shit been done...but not like that....shit was rawwwwww

Geno was cool too...kinda lax...but opener was aight

CopyPat 10-30-2013 12:36 PM

really nice. this getting hella slept on so far. all 3 were dope. neigh i was reading urs like a tupac song lol.. the last word "aww" sounding shit i was holding and emphasizing the shit out of it, haha sounded illy. mike wreck i was surprised u were able to keep up with neigh, sick verse u had too, suuuuuuuuper smooth, just a great verse all around, geno urs had all the punches which sacrificed ur flow SLightly.. still had really good flow but just didn't quite keep up with the first 2 in smoothness. urs felt a TAD bumpy compared to them, but as i say the wordplay made up for it, nicely done. really good collab. also hella props for the formatting this properly to be converted to audio, would be SICK to hear u guys spit this for real on like a heavier type beat, MW maybe that second line ultimate warrior would have to be shortened a little to make it work but other than that this was real smooth. good one boys, nice collab, keep em commin. check out our big paragraph collab

patrown 10-31-2013 01:49 AM

daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn

Zen 11-02-2013 12:59 PM

On my phone right now but I'm upping this in the meantime until I can drop quality feed.

Mike Wrecka 11-04-2013 07:58 PM

thanks dudes. good shit geno neigh

more feed?

Neighbor 11-06-2013 06:35 PM

zzz

KwaL!ty 11-07-2013 11:29 AM

You're left w/ symptom withdrawal when my pen inflicts its signature form
Pledge addiction to war & make the dead lift like a medicine ball



these lames cant handle the tension my sentences bring,
got them shakin like the ropes when Ultimate Warrior enters the wrestling ring,
im an unquestionable sentinel at the center of things,
a special extraterrestrial vessel so every letter it seems,
that im on an incredible team, ATR the nexus supreme,



Prophets of death, that're Bombing the set
Promise the rest, there ain't been a dope enough conglomerate yet
For the gods to respect, boss of the spot
Get jim beam on the horn, im straight calling the shots
Cruciphyxions, crosses, I'm just staulking the block
Cutting off law enforcements tops, have it crawling with cops
Its like were all in the mob, we been made since day 1
Angels get fucked by the lords of flatbush, til your patron saints cum



this shit was pretty nice i expect Neigh to shut shit down ...Mike came prettyu ncie with a dope flow .. but to me Gen had the harder input out of the 3 of you .. still was a good read .. just cause it wasnt quoted doesnt mean it wasnt enjoyed..

Mr. J 11-07-2013 08:09 PM

I feel like you guys merked this whole piece tbh...
Geno has been racing out with the material as of late
and I'm surprised to see him with a grip on the game yet
quite an impeccable flow from him
Neigh had a smooth approach as well, I was feeling the whole vibe
something I would be on if I felt the need to collab
that medicine ball line was pretty smooth as well
as far as Mike goes I felt like he was out of place...
like he should have started it off...or maybe it's the calm before the storm type ideal
regardless his flow was on & off, but not too bad
I just feel that he had been outshined, I bet this was your idea right?
just kidding man, you had a nice verse, it stands out from the other 2
dope work fella's keep putting in work!

zygote 11-10-2013 12:39 AM

"You're left w/ symptom withdrawal when my pen inflicts its signature form"

That was a really good and aggressive one liner. Also enjoyed this ancient cultures reference "Hellenistic assault hold the severed head of Pegasus by its horn -"

From MW I like the "blasphemous baphomet" part it was similar in theme to the "generate genocide" part and from genocide I like the "Cruciphyxions, crosses," part (the double letters in each) maybe it was intentional or it was coincidence, either way it was something interesting. Highlight as a whole, was the ancient culture reference, also like it when Neighbor writes legal-type phrases.

Zen 11-19-2013 09:09 AM

Neighbor:

Never read anything from you I don't think and after reading this I really don't know why I haven't.

The whole verse was fire tbh but this line stuck out to me.

I generate genocide, never hesitant for Genesis to evolve

The follow up bar has been quoted by damn near everyone but that line right there to me deserve props. Basically each line of your verse held a consistent flow and excellent wording. Top notch writing. I would like to read a longer verse by you now.

Mike

Pretty dope verse but I did have one problem with it. Sometimes I would lose grasp on the flow and have to start back over. I think it was due to some lines being longer than the others without inner rhymes, but those problems were few and far in between. The few lines where you went on it and truly showed what you were capable of were greatness, but your drop last week in the AOWL trumps this imo. That drop was epicness.

Genocide

Your flow is one of the best on the site and it shows here. Great metaphors in your verses and a great use of alliteration on your rhymes like the crawling with cops section. This drop is one of the best I've read from you, but I don't know if I've ever read a braggadocio type verse from you that wasn't good.

Nicely done fellas. Epic collab.

YDK 11-20-2013 11:08 PM

This was mean as fuck, forreal y'all went in on this,
Each verse brought rawness an a strong flow an solid wordplay/metaphors.
nothing negative that I can see, ima get in on the ATR shit lol

Split 11-22-2013 09:51 AM

neigh: I liked the signature form line a lot. your style is a little too formulaic though, even though it is unique/ strong

mw: dont like how you break up your concepts but the flow/ style is fluid and natural. Lucifer part was corny, not your fault. no standout lines but your writing is obviously developed.

geno: favorite verse of all three. iced out. youre the least corny topical writer in modern history.

dull boy 11-22-2013 10:15 AM

Wanted to tell Zack this was one of his better verses, imo.

Wise Wiggles 11-22-2013 10:19 AM

Neigh tore it fa show Lo

Mike Wrecka 03-17-2024 05:18 PM

Need to do another collab like this? Who’s down ? @Genocide


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