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UnbornBuddha 03-19-2019 07:46 AM

Imaginary canvass
 
A nobody ruling from an imaginary throne,
Tucking away his delusions in his schizophrenic home.
I often wonder who attached my soul to this bag of bones.
The existential complex of a boy from the city of Alcapone;
Slicking his hair back with his special pompadour hair comb.
One with the flow, wandering where ever the wind goes.
Come midnight, on a Lakeshore Montrose beach stroll.
Feeling the sand in between the web of my toes.
Overly conscious deity trying not to lose control;
Lost milky way soul plunging into a black hole,
The light of fireflies always guides me back home.
Phoenix feather engraved onto my tombstone,
Resurrecting in darkness, yet illuminating heavenly gardens.
Celestial artist cursed forever with catharsis. I beg your pardon,
Canvassing eternity with residue of garnet; crystal incarnate
Trying to sparkle and shine before being sold heartless.

Pharaohs Army 07-28-2019 03:09 AM

I'm bleeding verbs as I try to capture fleeting words. It seems absurd but it's rather much like needlework.
I've seen your work. It's quite alright. I can tell it apart from others on site. I just don't know why you bother to write.
Your father was right. Now come to the light.
Overcome your fright. I have a feeling you might.
I was never one for sharing poems; specifically those, involving hair combs.
Be aware of my tone. It seems, I've stylistically grown.
I knew you would emerge from your chrysalis home.
Hope your diamond purchases help as you transition alone.
Oh yes I know that your reading; I can tell that you're there.
Seeing my sweet words is like remembering the smell of her hair.
This is just the first of many; I'm selling my wares.
Drop a comment, so I can tell that you care.
Wait, don't. If you didthat I might fall of my chair. It'd be too much for my soul to bare.
I'm fully aware that you're done describing love and war. Always look for something more!
Me? I prefer selfish gore and capitalizing lore, over helping mom with chores.
I'm kind of sore. @JESODIST ripped my liver out. He's a connoisseur, but I think he got kind of bored.
I'm in a tournament and I hope I make the final four, but that would shock me to my core.
I can't be sloppy anymore.
I can't be @Sinacog and write about Nazis anymore.
Ah well, it's been quite a treat. You might believe there's some fight in me.
Looking forward to your next drop; that'd be a sight, to see.

Adonis 08-06-2019 01:11 AM

You still got it GOD

I actually forget your other name, but god something.

Perfect flow, concepts spewing from individual lines, you know...shit that gets accomps around here, Come back and play. I need a vet to smash

Exis 08-06-2019 11:42 PM

This was nice fam...Like Adonis said your flow is tight as all shit, great wit goin' on...Kudos.

Mr. J 08-27-2019 02:24 PM



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