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Sharp 07-16-2019 11:41 PM

Ryno vs Blue Bayou - OPEN FOR VOTES
 
BA Summer League

Due Thursday, July 18th

Minimum - 6 lines
Max - 10 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree
24hr ext to be granted by opponent

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit or match the first to drop
@Ryno @Blue Bayou

Ryno 07-17-2019 05:11 AM

Bound to happen at some point ig. What we doin?

Blue Bayou 07-17-2019 06:27 AM

5 barzz Ry Guy

Sharp 07-17-2019 11:12 AM

@Blue Bayou I have ryno's 10

Blue Bayou 07-17-2019 11:47 AM

@Ryno you never disappoint

I'll whip up my 10 this afternoon when I'm back

Blue Bayou 07-17-2019 01:06 PM

you should worry more about getting laid & less about blastin’ hollows..
the Big Gap between your sexual partners got Bangz smilin’ like a fashion model
stab you repeatedly til blood’s spurting on your shoulders & knees..
dump the body & watch you ‘Leak in a Ditch’ like you Pulled Over to Pee
hack your midsection clear off, leave it on the ground w/ mad precision..
cut your head off too...my blade’ll make it ‘Go with your Gut’ like a Snap Decision
i’ma beast w/ the toys. seek & destroy so don’t think ya might prosper..
they’ll RingFire & leave more Body Parts Scattered then Symbols for the White Walkers
got glocks paired w/ goons to smoke you..
two shots - they’ll put a ‘Couple in the Air’ like Hot Air Balloon Proposals

Sharp 07-17-2019 01:12 PM

Ryno's verse

Try that long bar shit w/ me & you’ll be dead on arrival.
Every line was flat w/ no peaks. Now I’m about to do the same to ur vitals.
Got ya fam cryin. U and ya mans dyin. Ur throats getting slit.
I’ll take his head off clean. Next step? Order a bundle for ya funeral bitch.
Ya hearts racing now ain’t it? Dawg, just wait until I ether ur features.
Mac 11 or AED? Don’t matter. There’s gonna be a flatline if I’m reaching for either.
Gat to ya children. Try me & I'm spilling all their DNA, clown.
If he wants Maury can get his kids face blown tf up right in front of the crowd.
No need for convo. I’ll send my gorillas to Canada. Clap this geek.
If this native says a word to my animals he’s getting stretched out. Apache Chief

Aero 07-17-2019 03:12 PM

Blue - the fashion model line was LAWLZ, even thinking about the pic made me chuckle and then to think he’d think he was a fashion model LOLOLOLOL..

Snap decision is a great concept I would’ve drivers it way better. I would’ve said THAT’s a Snap decision and used the action of snapping a weapon... solid verse all around



Ryno - good verse, liked the opener.. the Maury line I could’ve made way better

Blue Bayou 07-17-2019 03:39 PM

Please PM me your wording critiques goat... As well as a discourse on the action of snapping a weapon so I can be better prepared for future text hands

Wanderer 07-17-2019 04:50 PM

you should worry more about getting laid & less about blastin’ hollows..
the Big Gap between your sexual partners got Bangz smilin’ like a fashion model
Lol ok
stab you repeatedly til blood’s spurting on your shoulders & knees..
dump the body & watch you ‘Leak in a Ditch’ like you Pulled Over to Pee
Dope
hack your midsection clear off, leave it on the ground w/ mad precision..
cut your head off too...my blade’ll make it ‘Go with your Gut’ like a Snap Decision
Nice concept, decent
i’ma beast w/ the toys. seek & destroy so don’t think ya might prosper..
they’ll RingFire & leave more Body Parts Scattered then Symbols for the White Walkers
Lost on me
got glocks paired w/ goons to smoke you..
two shots - they’ll put a ‘Couple in the Air’ like Hot Air Balloon Proposals
Just about

Vs

Try that long bar shit w/ me & you’ll be dead on arrival.
Every line was flat w/ no peaks. Now I’m about to do the same to ur vitals.
Seen flatlines/vital organs plays a lot. Well worded but underwhelmed
Got ya fam cryin. U and ya mans dyin. Ur throats getting slit.
I’ll take his head off clean. Next step? Order a bundle for ya funeral bitch.
Not really feeling
Ya hearts racing now ain’t it? Dawg, just wait until I ether ur features.
Mac 11 or AED? Don’t matter. There’s gonna be a flatline if I’m reaching for either.
still not feeling
Gat to ya children. Try me & I'm spilling all their DNA, clown.
If he wants Maury can get his kids face blown tf up right in front of the crowd.
This ain’t bad
No need for convo. I’ll send my gorillas to Canada. Clap this geek.
If this native says a word to my animals he’s getting stretched out. Apache Chief
Nice closer

Ryno, I’ve seen you come better. Still a cool verse that read well and I enjoy your style but Blue just had too much for you here and took this one

V/Blue

Diablo 07-19-2019 03:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 744409)
you should worry more about getting laid & less about blastin’ hollows..
the Big Gap between your sexual partners got Bangz smilin’ like a fashion model

Lol

stab you repeatedly til blood’s spurting on your shoulders & knees..
dump the body & watch you ‘Leak in a Ditch’ like you Pulled Over to Pee

lmao I like the concept but dislike the wording at the end tbh

hack your midsection clear off, leave it on the ground w/ mad precision..
cut your head off too...my blade’ll make it ‘Go with your Gut’ like a Snap Decision

seen similar done

i’ma beast w/ the toys. seek & destroy so don’t think ya might prosper..
they’ll RingFire & leave more Body Parts Scattered then Symbols for the White Walkers

missed to me

got glocks paired w/ goons to smoke you..
two shots - they’ll put a ‘Couple in the Air’ like Hot Air Balloon Proposals

cool


[QUOTE=Sharp;744410]Ryno's verse

Try that long bar shit w/ me & you’ll be dead on arrival.
Every line was flat w/ no peaks. Now I’m about to do the same to ur vitals.

okay

Got ya fam cryin. U and ya mans dyin. Ur throats getting slit.
I’ll take his head off clean. Next step? Order a bundle for ya funeral bitch.

don’t get it?

Ya hearts racing now ain’t it? Dawg, just wait until I ether ur features.
Mac 11 or AED? Don’t matter. There’s gonna be a flatline if I’m reaching for either.


two flatline lines so close together was a risk. I liked the first more

Gat to ya children. Try me & I'm spilling all their DNA, clown.
If he wants Maury can get his kids face blown tf up right in front of the crowd.

I like that

No need for convo. I’ll send my gorillas to Canada. Clap this geek.
If this native says a word to my animals he’s getting stretched out. Apache Chief

not such a fan of this one


I got Ryno by a slim margin here

bleak 07-19-2019 10:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 744409)
you should worry more about getting laid & less about blastin’ hollows..
the Big Gap between your sexual partners got Bangz smilin’ like a fashion model

Decent current event shit

stab you repeatedly til blood’s spurting on your shoulders & knees..
dump the body & watch you ‘Leak in a Ditch’ like you Pulled Over to Pee

Felt like when Body was using his formula. But juat like Body, it works.

hack your midsection clear off, leave it on the ground w/ mad precision..
cut your head off too...my blade’ll make it ‘Go with your Gut’ like a Snap Decision

Seems like u had to create the scenario a little too much, still creative

i’ma beast w/ the toys. seek & destroy so don’t think ya might prosper..
they’ll RingFire & leave more Body Parts Scattered then Symbols for the White Walkers

A bit late here and the setup could have been used more effectively.

got glocks paired w/ goons to smoke you..
two shots - they’ll put a ‘Couple in the Air’ like Hot Air Balloon Proposals

The whole in the air thing is a bit played, seems too easy but i like the concept. Also this doesn't rhyme for me.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sharp (Post 744410)
Ryno's verse

Try that long bar shit w/ me & you’ll be dead on arrival.
Every line was flat w/ no peaks. Now I’m about to do the same to ur vitals.

Seen it done, but the connections saved it.

Got ya fam cryin. U and ya mans dyin. Ur throats getting slit.
I’ll take his head off clean. Next step? Order a bundle for ya funeral bitch.

A bundle of what? I am missing something.

Ya hearts racing now ain’t it? Dawg, just wait until I ether ur features.
Mac 11 or AED? Don’t matter. There’s gonna be a flatline if I’m reaching for either.

It kinda misses because how you gonna kill him with a defibrillator? And the flatline shit was used earlier. Not as bare as the last bar but not too solid

Gat to ya children. Try me & I'm spilling all their DNA, clown.
If he wants Maury can get his kids face blown tf up right in front of the crowd.

I like this one.

No need for convo. I’ll send my gorillas to Canada. Clap this geek.
If this native says a word to my animals he’s getting stretched out. Apache Chief

This shit fire, setup could have been better but the concept is solid.

Gotta say, Ryno's closer makes this really close.

Usually i give it to creativeness but both verses had it. I think the one bundle miss from Ryno is the difference maker, and makes me lean slightly

Blue

I feel like the mountain you need to get over is Blue, @Ryno . I have read more Blue/Ry battlres than any others because for a couple months there yall were battling everywhere. And I'm a fan of both of your styles. Blue is such an easy read and i think that is the difference on a large scale. The consistency is nearly unmatched

Inno 07-24-2019 01:00 AM

Geez another dope battle


I got pulled over to pee and snap decision from blue


I got opener Maury and closer from ryno

Good shit but ryno edged out for me

Quill 07-28-2019 12:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 744409)
you should worry more about getting laid & less about blastin’ hollows..
the Big Gap between your sexual partners got Bangz smilin’ like a fashion model
Wasn't big on this. Kinda light.
stab you repeatedly til blood’s spurting on your shoulders & knees..
dump the body & watch you ‘Leak in a Ditch’ like you Pulled Over to Pee
Simple as fuck, but I cannot lie, it leaned me. Clean execution on the agressive to comedic transition.
hack your midsection clear off, leave it on the ground w/ mad precision..
cut your head off too...my blade’ll make it ‘Go with your Gut’ like a Snap Decision
I dug this. Great visuals, aggressive tone. Good shit.
i’ma beast w/ the toys. seek & destroy so don’t think ya might prosper..
they’ll RingFire & leave more Body Parts Scattered then Symbols for the White Walkers
This was alright. I like the imagery. Undoubtedly, it would hit harder had ever watched Game of Thrones
got glocks paired w/ goons to smoke you..
two shots - they’ll put a ‘Couple in the Air’ like Hot Air Balloon Proposals
I like this. New play on an old cliche.



Quote:

Originally Posted by Sharp (Post 744410)
Ryno's verse

Try that long bar shit w/ me & you’ll be dead on arrival.
Every line was flat w/ no peaks. Now I’m about to do the same to ur vitals.
Light punch. Simple concept. I like it as an opener though. Sets an aggressive tone with a jab.
Got ya fam cryin. U and ya mans dyin. Ur throats getting slit.
I’ll take his head off clean. Next step? Order a bundle for ya funeral bitch.
This didn't do much for me.
Ya hearts racing now ain’t it? Dawg, just wait until I ether ur features.
Mac 11 or AED? Don’t matter. There’s gonna be a flatline if I’m reaching for either.
This flowed nicely. But it didn't have a lot of value as a punch.
Gat to ya children. Try me & I'm spilling all their DNA, clown.
If he wants Maury can get his kids face blown tf up right in front of the crowd.
Simple wordplay, but I like the set up and follow through. Good execution.
No need for convo. I’ll send my gorillas to Canada. Clap this geek.
If this native says a word to my animals he’s getting stretched out. Apache Chief
This was a bit underwhelmingbas a closer.

Bar 1- Ryno
Bar 2- Blue
Bar 3- Blue
Bar 4- Ryno
Bar 5- Blue

This was a pretty cool battle. I feel like both had some highs and lows. I feel like Blue was more consistent over all. A little more creative, and his approach was was more varied.

Vote - Blue

JaysonFresh 08-15-2019 03:53 PM

just got done reading the SC finals but i may have enjoyed this battle more.
y'all were fire. good battle.

hack your midsection clear off, leave it on the ground w/ mad precision..
cut your head off too...my blade’ll make it ‘Go with your Gut’ like a Snap Decision

vs

Gat to ya children. Try me & I'm spilling all their DNA, clown.
If he wants Maury can get his kids face blown tf up right in front of the crowd.

Blue Bayou 08-15-2019 10:51 PM

And your vote is for ..?

Thanks JF

Flow 08-16-2019 12:27 PM

might peep properly later but the go with ya gut bar was dope @Blue Bayou

slecht 08-17-2019 06:44 PM

you should worry more about getting laid & less about blastin’ hollows..
the Big Gap between your sexual partners got Bangz smilin’ like a fashion model
decent opener
stab you repeatedly til blood’s spurting on your shoulders & knees..
dump the body & watch you ‘Leak in a Ditch’ like you Pulled Over to Pee
cool.
hack your midsection clear off, leave it on the ground w/ mad precision..
cut your head off too...my blade’ll make it ‘Go with your Gut’ like a Snap Decision
dope.
i’ma beast w/ the toys. seek & destroy so don’t think ya might prosper..
they’ll RingFire & leave more Body Parts Scattered then Symbols for the White Walkers
fire.
got glocks paired w/ goons to smoke you..
two shots - they’ll put a ‘Couple in the Air’ like Hot Air Balloon Proposals
decent closer.

vs


Try that long bar shit w/ me & you’ll be dead on arrival.
Every line was flat w/ no peaks. Now I’m about to do the same to ur vitals.
nice set up, cool opener.
Got ya fam cryin. U and ya mans dyin. Ur throats getting slit.
I’ll take his head off clean. Next step? Order a bundle for ya funeral bitch.
LOL, actually nice.
Ya hearts racing now ain’t it? Dawg, just wait until I ether ur features.
Mac 11 or AED? Don’t matter. There’s gonna be a flatline if I’m reaching for either.
ok cool
Gat to ya children. Try me & I'm spilling all their DNA, clown.
If he wants Maury can get his kids face blown tf up right in front of the crowd.
LOL, ight dope twist.
No need for convo. I’ll send my gorillas to Canada. Clap this geek.
If this native says a word to my animals he’s getting stretched out. Apache Chief
i fuck with this



DAMN, dope battle here. Wasn't expecting it to be like that, I am actually giving this to Ryno for a more aggresive approach. Closer than I thought tbh. Blue had some really nice shit here but felt was outdone.


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