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Witty 06-10-2018 07:59 PM

Us.
 
Ashen faced, passion placed on ration
acid taste, acetate, basket case Assassins
Hand grenades are blasting
Master race in action
Castigate compassion
Relax, embrace abandon
We have this under control
Succumb to the 'whole'
As we plunder your soul
We mine in your spirit
Divine interference
Smile if you fear it
Divisive
In spite of appearance
Your mind has the signs of a clearance
Everything Must Go
Sedentary...crushed slow
This melody, love's glow
Stand in the dark...feel infinity's rush
Put your hand on your heart
And give it to us.

Pharaohs Army 06-10-2018 08:18 PM

smooth. very nice multis. you still got it Witty

ACTIVATE SELF 06-10-2018 08:19 PM

^I concur

El Muffin 06-11-2018 07:27 AM

This was refined

dull boy 06-11-2018 02:02 PM

I’ve been enjoying your recent drops. It’s a cool style.

veritas 06-11-2018 03:32 PM

"Your mind has the signs of a clearance
Everything Must Go"

this wassssss smooooth especially after the nonstop multis bfore. well played, Fox.

Mediocrity 06-12-2018 11:57 PM

This was very wet my friend

2tripple0 06-13-2018 04:54 PM

Yeah enjoyed this very nice man good drop...

Witty 06-14-2018 04:54 PM

:/

Inno 06-14-2018 10:05 PM

You can do better. This was ok witty, love you

Geno 06-15-2018 05:41 AM

Ope. Nice work witty old boy. Do it more

Vapeo 06-15-2018 06:46 PM

Dang I aspire to be like this lol

Exis 06-16-2018 06:51 AM

Gotta love how I structure shit the same way yet get hated on...

???

Anyhoo, this was tight...kept shit short & sweet.

Content was nice man, had this real suck me into shit vibe with it...I liked it.

Stay you Wit.

Witty 06-29-2018 06:21 PM

Up.

Exis 06-30-2018 03:16 AM

^^What he said...

Pharaohs Army 07-01-2018 01:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zygote (Post 41571)
Archaea brought across by asteroid belts accompanied by acid base acetate,


Witty 07-14-2018 10:39 PM

Huh

Pharaohs Army 07-15-2018 04:19 PM

I was reading some old verses and came across 'acid base acetate' in zygote's alpha beta. Not a big deal, you either saw it and it was planted subconsciously in your mind, or it's a coincidence.

Lobo for the kill 09-19-2018 04:32 PM

Decent but I've read better from you Witty.
More focused on rhyming instead of saying anything cohesive.

Bodey 09-21-2018 02:23 AM

You know me if you’ve seen how I write— sometimes I get so caught up on rhymes and it takes me away. I been gettin back into it recently. Like they said, I’ve seen you write better shit but that doesn’t make this bad by any means. The beginning was my favorite cuz you not only had multis, but you threw some imagery and more description in the opening lines moreso than the end. But I always enjoy reading your shit


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