Us.
Ashen faced, passion placed on ration
acid taste, acetate, basket case Assassins Hand grenades are blasting Master race in action Castigate compassion Relax, embrace abandon We have this under control Succumb to the 'whole' As we plunder your soul We mine in your spirit Divine interference Smile if you fear it Divisive In spite of appearance Your mind has the signs of a clearance Everything Must Go Sedentary...crushed slow This melody, love's glow Stand in the dark...feel infinity's rush Put your hand on your heart And give it to us. |
smooth. very nice multis. you still got it Witty
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^I concur
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This was refined
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I’ve been enjoying your recent drops. It’s a cool style.
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"Your mind has the signs of a clearance
Everything Must Go" this wassssss smooooth especially after the nonstop multis bfore. well played, Fox. |
This was very wet my friend
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Yeah enjoyed this very nice man good drop...
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:/
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You can do better. This was ok witty, love you
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Ope. Nice work witty old boy. Do it more
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Dang I aspire to be like this lol
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Gotta love how I structure shit the same way yet get hated on...
??? Anyhoo, this was tight...kept shit short & sweet. Content was nice man, had this real suck me into shit vibe with it...I liked it. Stay you Wit. |
Up.
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^^What he said...
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Quote:
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Huh
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I was reading some old verses and came across 'acid base acetate' in zygote's alpha beta. Not a big deal, you either saw it and it was planted subconsciously in your mind, or it's a coincidence.
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Decent but I've read better from you Witty.
More focused on rhyming instead of saying anything cohesive. |
You know me if you’ve seen how I write— sometimes I get so caught up on rhymes and it takes me away. I been gettin back into it recently. Like they said, I’ve seen you write better shit but that doesn’t make this bad by any means. The beginning was my favorite cuz you not only had multis, but you threw some imagery and more description in the opening lines moreso than the end. But I always enjoy reading your shit
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