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Orc 4-3 vs Remy LeBeau 1-1 (PIC BATTLE) - REMY WINS
Netcees Battle League Season VIII Rules Due Dates:
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For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes @Orc @Remy LeBeau |
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Orc's Verse
http://s15.postimg.org/k30y88trv/FB_...7442683370.jpg he's a faggot thats making dough, ain't actually faking yo shittt. the rate he's Working that Pole got Strippers rapidly taking notes My style is thoughtful. Even the best of kids mail me. & u only got a Reflective Style cuz ya rocking Hi-Vis vests on the daily NOBODY wana face Orc. Why's that? the ploys wack cuz one Touch will Light Up ya Whole Head. i ain't talking ur Boys Hat this crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way... &&&boy loves the Gun lines. Re's the first w/ destruction Remy alwaaaays keep the Hammer on him... cuz he works in Construction Put that thing back in ya mouth or i'll Blast it off right, b I'll faackn grab ya till u hear that Tongue Click like how African Tribes speak Remy's Verse [IMG]https://scontent-fra3-1.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xtp1/v/t1.0-9/11212784_1094712883877211_2982905006337243114_n.jp g?oh=c5a***e8910fb39f4c654f0a670b8300&oe=5616491F[/IMG] keep swagger jacking Conor MacGregor U ain't got his hands tho..u wayyy too weak to hurt me son. My 3 piece will turn u jelly.. cuz u were way too cheap to purchase one. Look at u smoking that knockoff, swhy I'm not liking this dude. I bet it cost a lot to cop that Cuban.. cause ill nik's gotten rich writing for u. I'm accosting this queer..ur a target, n I'm throwing rocks with a sneer. My shits blowing em out the water.. That's why he looks alone n lost on the pier. I spoke too soon, there are some ppl behind em tucked in a room. And they look like they're having a great time!!.. ignoring the fuck out of u. Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy. u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any. Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude. That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too. |
he's a faggot thats making dough, ain't actually faking yo
shittt. the rate he's Working that Pole got Strippers rapidly taking notes // loll My style is thoughtful. Even the best of kids mail me. & u only got a Reflective Style cuz ya rocking Hi-Vis vests on the daily // ok NOBODY wana face Orc. Why's that? the ploys wack cuz one Touch will Light Up ya Whole Head. i ain't talking ur Boys Hat // i see you this crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way... // ok &&&boy loves the Gun lines. Re's the first w/ destruction Remy alwaaaays keep the Hammer on him... cuz he works in Construction // loll Put that thing back in ya mouth or i'll Blast it off right, b I'll faackn grab ya till u hear that Tongue Click like how African Tribes speak // not feelin vs U ain't got his hands tho..u wayyy too weak to hurt me son. My 3 piece will turn u jelly.. cuz u were way too cheap to purchase one. // ok Look at u smoking that knockoff, swhy I'm not liking this dude. I bet it cost a lot to cop that Cuban.. cause ill nik's gotten rich writing for u. // cool I'm accosting this queer..ur a target, n I'm throwing rocks with a sneer. My shits blowing em out the water.. That's why he looks alone n lost on the pier. // i want to like this but idk altogether not a great diss I spoke too soon, there are some ppl behind em tucked in a room. And they look like they're having a great time!!.. ignoring the fuck out of u. // nah Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy. u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any. // lolll this killed me Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude. That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too. // lol dead shittt this battle was funny af. dope shit from both. remy had one more miss than orc imo. but his last two bars slayed me. but then orc had that work the pole and hammer lines that had me loll too. shit i guess i'll go w/the more consistent one v/orc |
working that pole was meannnn
reflective style was ok light up head was meannnn pipe up was ok hammer was basic IMO but good concept/pic reference I guess tongue click could have been dope but didn't like your tie in. what does grabbing him have to do with his tongue clickin? (my african language bar in LLL was better tho lol) vs jelly had potential fell flat for me cuban same as above - lazy ineffective execution didn't like blowin him out the water ignoring could have been delivered a lot better. had potential paints too tight was funny tho hahaha - nice 50 shades of gray was meannnn damn remy ya verse was very stale bro but your last 2 bars were hot. should have wrote more like that man. what I mean by stale is, you had some decent concepts but your route of execution/delivery on them was weak, wack and/or lazy man. Your last 2 bars were dope imo but not enough. orc got it on consistency |
i'm usually partial to orcs style cuz it almost reminds me of mine.. but some of the stuff was a bit off here.. the first two, hammer and pipe up lines were just too straightforward and basic.. esp in a pic battle, saw it coming.. light up was a heater, lotb, that's more like it.. and tongue click was a damn good concept but felt a lil off
remy had a good opener, set the tone.. illnika/cuba had good placement here but still old.. out the water was cool.. wasnt feelin the ignoring jawn.. pants line was hilarious lol and closer was aight.. overall remy was just a lil more consistant. good stuff fellas v remy |
yeah man I had Remy here too tbh
it was fairly even until those last two punches back to back, it was a quick combo that decided this shit for me pretty much Conor McGregor'd him ironically lol Orc had the illy light up your head shit but I dunno, I liked Remys 3 piece line and he closed REAL fucking strong Remy with the slight edge good to see Orc back tho for real |
he's a faggot thats making dough, ain't actually faking yo
shittt. the rate he's Working that Pole got Strippers rapidly taking notes NOBODY wana face Orc. Why's that? the ploys wack cuz one Touch will Light Up ya Whole Head. i ain't talking ur Boys Hat this crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way... Put that thing back in ya mouth or i'll Blast it off right, b I'll faackn grab ya till u hear that Tongue Click like how African Tribes speak vs I'm accosting this queer..ur a target, n I'm throwing rocks with a sneer. My shits blowing em out the water.. That's why he looks alone n lost on the pier. Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy. u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any. Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude. That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too. lol fifty shades of grey was lotb but orc edged it out with being more consistent. dope battle |
3-2 Orc
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tied 2/2 on fire lines Orc just lacked on the other half whereas Remy was at least avg with the sitdown line. If Orc dissed the pic in his last line it could of been a game changer v/Remy |
he's a faggot thats making dough, ain't actually faking yo
shittt. the rate he's Working that Pole got Strippers rapidly taking notes ha... easy one but funny My style is thoughtful. Even the best of kids mail me. & u only got a Reflective Style cuz ya rocking Hi-Vis vests on the daily okay NOBODY wana face Orc. Why's that? the ploys wack cuz one Touch will Light Up ya Whole Head. i ain't talking ur Boys Hat I like that this crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way... haha solid &&&boy loves the Gun lines. Re's the first w/ destruction Remy alwaaaays keep the Hammer on him... cuz he works in Construction ehhh too easy Put that thing back in ya mouth or i'll Blast it off right, b I'll faackn grab ya till u hear that Tongue Click like how African Tribes speak pic reference impact was lost here... not bad, not great though vs. keep swagger jacking Conor MacGregor U ain't got his hands tho..u wayyy too weak to hurt me son. My 3 piece will turn u jelly.. cuz u were way too cheap to purchase one. didn't like where you went... he look cheap? idk wasn't feelin the connection Look at u smoking that knockoff, swhy I'm not liking this dude. I bet it cost a lot to cop that Cuban.. cause ill nik's gotten rich writing for u. nik-a / Cuban is real old. diss doesn't work again to me on this one I'm accosting this queer..ur a target, n I'm throwing rocks with a sneer. My shits blowing em out the water.. That's why he looks alone n lost on the pier. cool association, a little off but decent I spoke too soon, there are some ppl behind em tucked in a room. And they look like they're having a great time!!.. ignoring the fuck out of u. ehhhh too simple for my taste Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy. u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any. not a crazy concept but comedy Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude. That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too. nice finish Damn this was real close... Orc had light ya head up, that was dope. Stripper pole & pipe up were quality. A couple concepts on the basic side but decent verse overall. Remy's last 2 almost got it for him, closer was dope... but the first couple bars were weak man First angle wasn't workin, nik-A was old and didn't hit, and ignoring was too basic. Lost on a pier was there... one other decent hit & Remy woulda edged it... But quotables were pretty close and Orc was a little more consistent in my eyes V/ Orc |
Orc's Verse
he's a faggot thats making dough, ain't actually faking yo shittt. the rate he's Working that Pole got Strippers rapidly taking notes kinda funny My style is thoughtful. Even the best of kids mail me. & u only got a Reflective Style cuz ya rocking Hi-Vis vests on the daily cool NOBODY wana face Orc. Why's that? the ploys wack cuz one Touch will Light Up ya Whole Head. i ain't talking ur Boys Hat ok this crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way... alright, good wording &&&boy loves the Gun lines. Re's the first w/ destruction Remy alwaaaays keep the Hammer on him... cuz he works in Construction cool Put that thing back in ya mouth or i'll Blast it off right, b I'll faackn grab ya till u hear that Tongue Click like how African Tribes speak eh Remy's Verse U ain't got his hands tho..u wayyy too weak to hurt me son. My 3 piece will turn u jelly.. cuz u were way too cheap to purchase one. nice Look at u smoking that knockoff, swhy I'm not liking this dude. I bet it cost a lot to cop that Cuban.. cause ill nik's gotten rich writing for u. cool pic reference but not much punch I'm accosting this queer..ur a target, n I'm throwing rocks with a sneer. My shits blowing em out the water.. That's why he looks alone n lost on the pier. not feeling this too much I spoke too soon, there are some ppl behind em tucked in a room. And they look like they're having a great time!!.. ignoring the fuck out of u. nah Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy. u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any. eh Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude. That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too. cool This is close but I got Orc with most consistent hits. I think his wording carried him here tbh. Good drop from Remy though and I see why this is a split decision. nice battle v/orc |
Orc
NOBODY wana face Orc. Why's that? the ploys wack cuz one Touch will Light Up ya Whole Head. i ain't talking ur Boys Hat this crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way... Remy U ain't got his hands tho..u wayyy too weak to hurt me son. My 3 piece will turn u jelly.. cuz u were way too cheap to PURCHASE one. I spoke too SOON, there are some ppl behind em tucked in a room. And they look like they're having a great time!!.. ignoring the fuck out of u. Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy. u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any. Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude. That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too. This was a decent battle... Orc didn't come anywhere near his usual self in pic battles in this one though.. If you woulda dropped like this against me I woulda bodied you brotha haha anyway Remy had a pretty solid verse I enjoyed reading it i think he got this battle with harder/funnier punches.. v/ Remy |
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let's go first up by two wins.
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Orc
this concept mega played but I think u worded this nice. its ok vest was nice one touch I fucks with this. ppl trip on the light ur boys hat up ploy..im more impressed with the striking the arc entendre. I fucks with this lmfao pipe up . took it the wrong way was hilarious closer was ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh tho jelly was ehhhh. just saying turning u jelly is corny. this isn't fourchan faggotry. I hate that word..jelly. its like hearing swag. plz don't do this again. Cuban was pretty good. I think the whole nika is his gw angle is weak. but considering the pic I think this is aight pier was ok too ignoring was a swing and a miss tho. pants tight was lotb ahahahahahah fifty shades of grey. whats that some romance hsit? I keep hearing this show or whatever only thing I know about it is THERE WAS AFKN GAY ASS COMMERCIAL on ifc or something. so I use my context clues hat n I can see that the entendre works but the reference didn't grab me immediately. like I had to think on it before I tied it all in. its okkkkk hmm I got orc on consistency remy had lotb with the pants tight thing tho. but the ingoring line and the jelly shit? (niggas still say jelly in reference to jealous? plz no edit: well u prolyl were just saying jelly as in he would be shook but still u left it up for speculation it just did not soun good in my head) were baaaaaaad misses imho v/orc |
My style is thoughtful. Even the best of kids mail me.
& u only got a Reflective Style cuz ya rocking Hi-Vis vests on the daily his crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way... vs I'm accosting this queer..ur a target, n I'm throwing rocks with a sneer. My shits blowing em out the water.. That's why he looks alone n lost on the pier. Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy. u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any. Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude. That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too. Cool battle, I aint like the hammer bar from Orc at all but that 50shades bar was the finisher here to me no lie, Reasons I like pic battles it sparks some dope creativity. v/Remy |
Hard battle to choose a outright winner. I'll be honest I preferred orcs lighter humerous approach until his last two bars though I felt he focused a bit to much in the obvious plays in the pic, remy gets props for working well with that pic and finding a lot of different routes to go down but I just didn't enjoy his verse as much until his last two bars which were killer. That 50 shades of grey creased me.
Difficult choice, but I'm going to go Orc for a more overall enjoyable verse, but tbh it's literally a hair In this, great showing by both. Vote Orc |
Opener, boys hat, pipe up
Vs Ignoring, pants leg, 50 shades of grey V/Remy.. Even in quotes but I think the pants and 50 shades line were stronger. The pipe up was the only haymaker I saw IMO the rest were just ok. |
he's a faggot thats making dough, ain't actually faking yo
shittt. the rate he's Working that Pole got Strippers rapidly taking note(wordy) My style is thoughtful. Even the best of kids mail me. & u only got a Reflective Style cuz ya rocking Hi-Vis vests on the daily his crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way... vs U ain't got his hands tho..u wayyy too weak to hurt me son. My 3 piece will turn u jelly.. cuz u were way too cheap to PURCHASE one I'm accosting this queer..ur a target, n I'm throwing rocks with a sneer. My shits blowing em out the water.. That's why he looks alone n lost on the pier. Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy. u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any. Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude. That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too. dope showing here fellas i got remy with one more quote and LOTB here. he was more consistent imo as well. v/remy |
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